Love Garden...

vanesse
Author: vanesse
Word Count: 78
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Our love,

It’s much like the unspoken word
you know what it says
although, it’s never been heard.

Equally as beautiful as a rose is red
I love you even more every time it is said!

Much like the sun
brightens the darkest of days
Your love, it inspires me
in a similar way.

Sure as a minute
will turn into an hour
Our love is a garden and
“YOU” are my flower

By: Vanesse Cathleen

  • amove

    amove, 6 months ago

    To feel such joyous love as your words describe would be wonderful, it brought a smile

  • vanesse

    vanesse, 6 months ago

    keep smiling!! :o)

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar, 6 months ago

    beautiful!

  • vanesse

    vanesse, 6 months ago

    Thank you so much!!

  • Natella2020

    Natella2020, 6 months ago

    “I love you even more every time it is said.” That was very well-said, and you’ve got a very sweet piece of work here.

  • Christina Elizabeth McElhaney

    Christina Eliz..., 6 months ago

    Very well done !!! Thank you for expressing your beautiful thoughts and emotions. Its been a pleasure !

  • vanesse

    vanesse, 6 months ago

    Sweet! thank you for your comment!! :o)

  • wstsiderose

    wstsiderose, 6 months ago

    oooh, this is very lovely. great poem. I’m glad it ryhmes, I appreciate the ones that do, very clever and creative Vanesse.

  • vanesse

    vanesse, 6 months ago

    Thank you so much!!! I appreciate your comment!

  • EAWilliams

    EAWilliams, 6 months ago

    Expressively vivid in detail and full of adoration…Excellent!

  • vanesse

    vanesse, 6 months ago

    Thank you very much for your kind comments!
    I appreciate it

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