smother
swirling…
whirling…
pits of hell
fall into soaken well.
out of control…
without a hold…
assume your place
smother your face.
written by vampvamp.
swirling, whirling, pits, hell, fall, soaken, well, smother, face, place
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areas i dabble in … photography, digital art, drawing, manipulations, writing, etc.
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Quite a display :)
:)
– vampvamp
This is powerful. Don’t mean to offend (or trivialise your words) but, I can imagine these words as lyrics in some cool, dark, haunting song.
not offended in the slightest & i think that’s a great compliment! ;D thanks steve!
– vampvamp
nice and short with a smooth flow – well that the point of putting the things in the face :P – just more poetically ;) – although the flow is also the smothering I guess.
well thank you madame! :)
– vampvamp
nice
appreciated sir…
– vampvamp
:))
cheers !
good stuff very much appreciated!
– vampvamp