The bursting tear
Aching sadness rises in my chest LongingLost.
A tear wells in the corner of my eyeFullComplete.
With a deep sigh it bursts forthExploding Crashing.
written by vampvamp.
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tear, burst, crash, explode, full, longing, lost, sadness, sigh, chest
i consider myself to be creatively versatile.
areas i dabble in … photography, digital art, drawing, manipulations, writing, etc.
This pain of yours is deeply painful to my sharing your aching chest. Excellently written.
bows merci monsieur carnal.
This hurts me, friend. I’m sorry. Big Hug! xo
thanks big hugs are good! :)
Tomorrow the sun will rise againTomorrow your smile will shine againTomorrow will be today that you´ll never remember again.
thank you alain…. :]
I love both versions :)
wonderful thank you tate…. ;]
xx …says so much with small amount of words love it
thank you simplyred! ;)
Interesting and emotive write Vanpyvamp!
well thank you so much, glad you think so…
great work … congrats
super thank you very much! ;)
Great write! so real!
bows why thank you tori… :]
real and beautiful!
wonderful of you to say thanks so much…
Simple, touchingly direct :-))