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The bursting tear (PG)

The bursting tear

Aching sadness rises in my chest
Longing
Lost.

A tear wells in the corner of my eye
Full
Complete.

With a deep sigh it bursts forth
Exploding
Crashing.

written by vampvamp.

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Tags

tear, burst, crash, explode, full, longing, lost, sadness, sigh, chest

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areas i dabble in … photography, digital art, drawing, manipulations, writing, etc.

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Comments

  • carnal
    carnalover 3 years ago

    This pain of yours is deeply painful to my sharing your aching chest. Excellently written.

  • bows merci monsieur carnal.

    – vampvamp

  • Rusty Gentry
    Rusty Gentryover 3 years ago

    This hurts me, friend. I’m sorry. Big Hug! xo

  • thanks big hugs are good! :)

    – vampvamp

  • Alain Christopher
    Alain Christopherover 3 years ago

    Tomorrow the sun will rise again
    Tomorrow your smile will shine again
    Tomorrow will be today that you´ll never remember again.

  • thank you alain…. :]

    – vampvamp

  • Thea T
    Thea Tover 3 years ago

    I love both versions :)

  • wonderful thank you tate…. ;]

    – vampvamp

  • SimplyRed
    SimplyRedover 3 years ago

    xx …says so much with small amount of words love it

  • thank you simplyred! ;)

    – vampvamp

  • TheBrit
    TheBritover 3 years ago

    Interesting and emotive write Vanpyvamp!

  • well thank you so much, glad you think so…

    – vampvamp

  • CreativeKitty
    CreativeKittyover 3 years ago

    great work … congrats

  • super thank you very much! ;)

    – vampvamp

  • tori yule
    tori yuleover 3 years ago

    Great write! so real!

  • bows why thank you tori… :]

    – vampvamp

  • allicata
    allicataover 3 years ago

    real and beautiful!

  • wonderful of you to say thanks so much…

    – vampvamp

  • abigcat
    abigcatover 3 years ago

    Simple, touchingly direct :-))

  • thank you..appreciated.

    – vampvamp

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