Thoughts in a space

Vacancy
Author: Vacancy
Word Count: 105
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Thoughts in a space

This internet world
Is it a preparation
For evolution
For the time
When we destroy ourselves
And leave our husks behind

Becoming minds
In the ether
Physical binds
Left behind

Is that what we’re doing
In this world of words and picture
Readying our lives
For a life of mind
To mind

Do we know
What we’re doing
Are we heading
To that way
Where our thoughts
Take hold
And the body
Let’s go

And we meld
Through the world
With our words
That hold

Is that where we’re going
Is that our future showing
Are we ghosts on the wind

Thoughts in a space…?

  • flower68

    flower68

    This is brilliant Care,and is a great basis for a movie.AFI needs you! xo

  • Vacancy replied

    oh you are too lovely….Lovely…...a movie you think….um…what is AFI….maye I know…I just forget ; ) xo

  • flower68

    flower68

    Austraian Film Industry :-)

  • conceited

    conceited

    someone once wrote about what you were thinking care

    i’ll find it for you.. but very good write indeed i must say!
    you are great!

  • Vacancy replied

    ello Joe : )
    funny you should say that…you know…I feel any thought I’ve had…has been pre thought…in someone elses head..
    that would be great…would love to read it…thanks Joe : )
    oh and… You are!!! ; )

  • Amorous  Requiem

    Amorous Requiem

    i really love this writing!!! d=)

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