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A FIRST SIN

once on the earth was all good
Once In the heaven was all peace
things were under controlled
all was good
nothing was wrong at all
birds were chirping
a garden was planted
peaceful
delightful
that was a perfect heaven!
one day …
in that silence
they committed a sin on this earth
first mistake
first guilt
first lust
first greed
first wicked act
which broke religious laws
done wrong!
pity!
were they ashamed
While they were committing a sin on earth
were they knowing its a sin actually
they have sinned!
But why they committed a sin
so that was the actually beginning of sin
why they have started doing wrong
how did they think that
how could it happened
how could they done wrong
As I heard, sinful nature all of human beings since the time of Adam’s sin
so all we got sinful nature from them
so that was the beginning actually!!!!

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ITS ANOTHER COLLABRATION WITH “NEIL JOHNSON”
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Comments

  • Sally Omar
    Sally Omarover 6 years ago

    Ushna, Awesome….and I am so happy to see image with it..they go hand-in-hand…Sally xxoo

  • Awww you are such a sweetheart Sally! glad you liked hunnie, actually I didn’t know how I can do it with discription! silly me lol
    thank you so much! appreciate your comments- big bunny huggles x

    – Ushna Sardar

  • Sally Omar
    Sally Omarover 6 years ago

    Ushna, Mel puts the images on for me…I still can’t figure it out…hope I will figure it out soon…
    Sally xxoo

  • I can do it now Sally! its easy now.. was very complicated before I did lol, I tried over and over and finally I succeeded :D

    – Ushna Sardar

  • KEITH  R. WILLIAMS
    KEITH R. WILL...over 6 years ago

    so true ushna, so true

  • thanks Keith my friend :)
    appreciate your precious comments!
    keep reading ..
    huggles

    – Ushna Sardar

  • Sally Omar
    Sally Omarover 6 years ago

    Ushna, That encourages me and I will keep trying…Sally xxoo

  • good to hear Sally! thats nice :)

    – Ushna Sardar

  • Nvision Ink
    Nvision Inkover 6 years ago

    Very nice piece of writing. Lust is the positive impulse of greed. Your writing is very enjoyable and enlightening to read. Well done Ushna!

  • thank you so much Neil! glad you liked :)
    appreciate your comments .. its more to come .. :)
    I’m looking forward to do some more collabration as I found you awesome artist Neil!
    huggles my friend

    – Ushna Sardar

  • olawunmi
    olawunmiover 6 years ago

    Hmmm, nice Ushna, you told a well told tale with so much freshness..

  • thank you so much sweet Summayyah! gl;ad you liked hunnie
    appreciate your precious comments!
    keep reading ..
    big bunny huggles my friend

    – Ushna Sardar

  • Rocketchook
    Rocketchookover 6 years ago

    As in :sin or good , saviour or sitter . What is god . The wise ones on earth , our indigenous , say. We don’t even have the brain power , ideas to even come close to knowing what , or who god is. We as mortals can never come close to it . Our brains and enviroment just can not reach the realms. Fuck I love being human.

  • Neil if we can’t live if we care about good and bad .. in religious point of view, we can’t even breath .. there’s many limit ends and people just can’t follow all! your good and bad can be your own .. and other person’s perspective can be change at point! so just don’t care about sin!
    enjoy your life :)
    thanks for reading Neil!
    appreciate your precious comments :)
    friendly big bunny huggles

    – Ushna Sardar

  • JaneAParis
    JaneAParisover 6 years ago

    In regard to Rocketchook’s comment: How can you love being human when we are so confined? I understand, I guess! But wouldn’t it be awesome to be able to be closer to God, without our stupid problems like sin getting in the way? Ushna, as always you are a super marvelous very expressive and beautiful writer. I like the things that you write about. And the artwork that accompanies your enlightening thoughts is tremendously colorful and gorgeous. Smiles from Jane:-) As to Neil Johnson, I am going to go check out his art now. Wow!

  • thanks sweet Jane! you are such a sweetheart friend and let me say I love your writing too x
    thanks you so much hunnie Mwaahh
    we can have different point of view and perspective about things Jane! Rocket’s (Neil) perspective different .. we can’t say he is wrong .. we both could be wrong and we both could be right!
    breaking law .. breaking will .. it could be sin .. or not .. we have to live so sometimes we don’t follow religious law! its difficult to follow laws sometimes hunnie Jane!
    anyhow thank you so much for reading sweet Jane! appreciate your precious comments! big bunny huggles x

    – Ushna Sardar

  • JaneAParis
    JaneAParisover 6 years ago

    Oh sweet Ushna, I probably wasn’t clear, I am so sorry, I Iiked his comment, it was very intelligent, and yes I agree we all have a right to see things the way we do. I was just not liking being human very much, that is what I meant. Smiles from Jane:-)

  • Rocketchook
    Rocketchookover 6 years ago

    Well Ushna , where did you get the name Neil from. I was talking about within , not from any book . I am a true believer , we are all born to know the difference between right or wrong . Then society changes , distorts and corrupts from that point on . Neil , at least if you are going to call me something else , just call me Mate.

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