APATHY

Ushna Sardar
Author: Ushna Sardar
Word Count: 215
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APATHY

ITS A FIRST COLLABORATION WORK WITH MY NICE RB FRIEND butchart
I SAW HIS ART WORK AND IT ALWAYS MOTIVATE ME TO WRITE SOMETHING, I HAVE BEEN LAZY THOUGH SO COULDN’T WRITE BEFORE THOUGH BUT WHEN I SAW
APATHY * THAT MOTIVATE TO WRITE THIS WRITING!
THANKS butchart
PLEASE CHUCK OUT butchart GREAT ART WORK ON RB!*

APATHY belongs to the following groups:

Complex Simplicity of Art, Art Inspired by Dreams, AW Welcome Center, Bubblettes, Cards: Best of Your Best, Childhood, Collaboral Damage, Core [C.O.R.E], Freedom In Words & Art, In Another World .., Live, Love, Dream: , Living Christianity, Purple Passion Gallery. 2 per day , Safe Haven, Self as Other, Spiritual Art, The Artistic Nude, Two Beings Group, Up & Coming Writers, Vibrant and Vivid Color, WMG and † The Picture of Scripture †

I feel my skin is cold
I’m always so tired
maybe it’s for many reasons
but Lately I couldn’t find my enthusiasm
I have been lazy
I stopped watching television
I’ve stopped talking my friends
I won’t be a coward any more
So, I sell my all dreams
I closed my eyes
I won’t listen to any voices
I find myself helpless
so what reason to get involved anymore
if i cant resolve any conflicts

they say all is good and we are at peace
I cant deny, cause I’m not gonna take an interest anymore
I’m tired of all things now
cause I find myself simply helpless
I have been just a silent observer
they are signing many agreements
thousands of treaties
where is the agreement that could bring peace?
where is the treaty that could bring true friendship
why do they keep making bombs and won’t el

why do they keep making bombs and won’t eliminate weapons
Why can’t I feel the existence of Law and order?
I have been watching as a silent witness lately
and I find myself utterly helpless
it seems I have no senses
no eyes
no ears
It seems like apoplexy
or Is it actually apathy!!

  • Paul Rees-Jones

    Paul Rees-Jones

    Thought I would let everyone see the piece. It is awesome….

  • Paul Rees-Jones

    Paul Rees-Jones

    The poem is wonderful. It spirals very much like the artwork. Intense and heartfelt. Lovely…great job to you and Butchart.

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thank you so much Paul! glad you liked, Buchart is a great and wonderful artist I just tried to do my best :)
    appreciate your comments :)
    keep in touch! Huggles

  • Hilton Briscoe

    Hilton Briscoe

    thanks for adding this to the phantasmagorical group, I was going to make a special request that you do. lol.

    Apathy is something I know a lot about and fight against so much, I connect with this poem

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    Your welcome Hilton! and thanks you so much for reading and adding comments! glad you liked :)
    appreciate your precious comments, keep reading and keep in touch! Huggles

  • Gregory John O'Flaherty

    Gregory John O...

    You’re reading my mind. Wonderful stuff, thankyou both

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thanks you so much Gregory! glad you liked!
    appreciate your precious comments! Huggles

  • Sally Omar

    Sally Omar

    Ushna, Awesome words…awesome artwork…Sally xxoo

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thanks Sally! butchart is a great artist, his art just motivated me to write that poem! I really enjoyed that Collabration!
    appreciate your comments hunnie :)
    Huggles

  • butchart

    butchart

    ushna my wonderful friend… your poem gives me those goosebumps you are always talking about….. it is wonderful…everything i could ever hope for and more… you are truley gifted…. it’s my honor to work with you…................ thank you…thank you…..................b

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    Awwww butchart you are such a sweetheart friend! thanks for all kind words! the truth is that you are a wonderful artist, your work is utterly amazing itself! I love apathy it was amazing when I saw!
    It’s just a bigenning b! would like to do more!
    thank you so much b! my my honour to do work with you!
    glad you liked :)
    Huggles

  • californiagirl

    californiagirl

    hmmm i like it

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thanks californiagirl! glad you liked hunnie! :)
    appreciate your comments! keep reading and keep in touch!
    Huggles

  • brendanconnolly

    brendanconnolly

    Lovely poetry

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thanks brenden! glad you liked :)
    appreciate your comments!
    keep reading and keep in touch!

  • butchart

    butchart

    i’d be proud to work with you any time you’d like…. thank you once again….....:)

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    your very welcome b! would love to do work with great artist like you! :)
    thanks you! Huggles

  • Roscoe Davis III

    Roscoe Davis III

    Great poem

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thanks Ros! glad you liked! :)
    keep reading and keep in touch!

  • justinaaronlee

    justinaaronlee

    Very nice. I find I have been writing close to the same topics, it’s time for a change, new birth or revolution, I know how you feel. Well written.

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thanks Justin! I didn’t read your poem but would like to read justin :)
    yeah true its time for a change! so we should keep the faith and hang on with hope!
    appreciate your precious comments!
    Huggles

  • KBelleau

    KBelleau

    Great piece, it’s good you can write when these feelings hit you. When I’m feeling lethargic all I can do is sweet F A….. or stare down the neck of a brown bottle….

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    writing is the best way to get throw out things from u KB! you should write when feel things like that, you will get relief! try it! :)
    thanks KB glad you liked!
    appreciate your precious comments from you!
    Huggles

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