I wish I could change the world
doubting state of attitude
lots of scepticism!
my thoughts are scattered
I don’t want to be a ritual
I wanna carry out some new way
it has nullified since I thought
Now I’m dying myself
I’m not economist nor numismatics
I can’t close my eyes!
I was mortified when I saw this world divided into several parts
different believe
different thoughts
different wants
crash!
why we don’t have just one path?
I saw discrimination of colour and different faith
did we ever see the God?
there were different school of thoughts
different kind of believe
I was so confuse to having one
I needed spirit that could make me move
If God is one and we are believer
Why difference races fight
I don’t understand that apprehensiveness
don’t understand that classification
don’t understand that faith and credulity
willingness may fake
they might took advantage of their credulity
Its beyond me!
what we want more?
why we always wanna win
why we won’t lose?
I would love the tranquillity of the world
Who gonna shape up this world
who gonna peace out?
FLEETING GLIMPSE
Its another collabration With my RB friend Neil Johnson!
Please see the pic “Beyond” on RB
Sally Omar, 4 months ago
Ushna, Incredible writing, as usual…going to check out Neil’s photo now..Sally xxoo
Ushna Sardar in reply to Sally Omar’s comment, 4 months ago
thanks hunnie!
glad ya liked!
appreciate your precious comments!
huggles xXx
red addiction, 4 months ago
Im quilty for wanting to win. Losing is for losers. But I grin and bare it for the most part. I will not stand to have something beat me down. Don’t want to get hurt either. I like to be ahead of the game.I like to win.
Tom Broderick, 4 months ago
your writeing is good. tom
T.D. Ruley, 4 months ago
radical thinking, interesting writing…nice work
butchart, 4 months ago
your soul is so open…. i want to make a bubble and blow it your way so you can sneak in and be protected but still see the world as you see it…. xoxoxo…...b
Ushna Sardar in reply to red addiction’s comment, 4 months ago
you shouldn’t guilty for it redbubble! cause we all wanna win! won’t ever lose! rather I would say that ya are bit realistic! I accepted that reality too!
no body wanna be a loser! but we should try!
thanks for reading and sharing thoughts!
appreciate your comments!
keep reading and keep in touch!
Ushna Sardar in reply to Tom Broderick’s comment, 4 months ago
thanks tom!
glad ya liked!
appreciate your comments!
Ushna Sardar in reply to T.D. Ruley’s comment, 4 months ago
thanks Ruley!
glad ya liked!
appreciate your precious comments! :)
Ushna Sardar in reply to butchart’s comment, 4 months ago
Awww so nice of ya b!
thanks ya so much for reading!
appreciate your precious comments!
Huggles
KBelleau, 4 months ago
Ushna, what you say is so true. You also already know the answer. There is an evil in the hearts of human kind the world over… like a cancer that means to destroy. This cancer, this evil does have a name…. it is so close to consuming us all.
Greed…. it is the root of all problems in this world, al the pain, wars, prejudice…. all take root in this cancer.
Ushna Sardar in reply to KBelleau’s comment, 4 months ago
Very much true KB! I agree!
we all are bit greedy as human! I’m against to the war but I can’t really stop it! but I can writing about it! thats a world of miracle so maybe one day we see a new world! only we can do it! maybe it takes time but one drop of water can make whole in stone’s heart so maybe…
Thanks for sharing such a brief and nice thought!
appreciate your precious comments!
Huggles
Tony Gomes, 4 months ago
one of my favorites. keep up the good work
Ushna Sardar in reply to Tony Gomes’s comment, 4 months ago
thanks Tony!
thanks for adding on fav!
glad ya liked!
appreciate your comments!
Huggles
Neil Johnson, 4 months ago
Your writing is just incredible! Another well done piece of writing. I like how you incorporated the word “Beyond” in there works well.
Rella, 4 months ago
Moving piece….human kind needs so much work!
Rhys Jones, 4 months ago
This is great, I had ti read it twice…
Ushna Sardar in reply to Neil Johnson’s comment, 4 months ago
Thanks Neil!
glad ya liked!
Huggles
Ushna Sardar in reply to Rella’s comment, 4 months ago
thanks Rella! glad ya liked!
appreciate your precious comments!
keep reading and keep in touch!
Ushna Sardar in reply to Rhys Jones’s comment, 4 months ago
thanks ya so much Rhys!
glad ya liked!
appreciate your precious comments on work!
so nice of ya!
Huggles
pheonixit, 4 months ago
When you peace out Beautiful girl, you will see the world has been at peace the whole time.
bellerjeau, 4 months ago
Well don elike always. You leave me want to read more.
Ushna Sardar in reply to pheonixit’s comment, 4 months ago
I hope Joe!
thanks for reading and adding such a nice thought!
Huggles
Ushna Sardar in reply to bellerjeau’s comment, 4 months ago
thank ya so much bellerjeau!
glad ya liked!
appreciate your precious comments!
keep in touch!
huggles