SOUL FREE THROUGH ETERNITY

Author: Ushna Sardar
Word Count: 271
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SOUL FREE THROUGH ETERNITY

Its Collabration with Niel Johson! he is artist and his artwork awesome!”
Please see the picture* “Down Below”

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I wish I’d never say it, though
but that’s true
my life was passing through in eternal misery
I heard but I was denying
I have misled through false ideas
I realised I’m frustrated
that was unbearable misgiving
Life was an enemy and I couldn’t ever think
I couldn’t set goals
couldn’t find the way
I mislaid
Don’t even remember
Where I made mistake
I always had a problem of my soul
tempered and grumpy!
Why I couldn’t set my soul free through eternity

Why always escaped
always wanted to run away from truth
I wanted to close my eyes
Ah’ but I fell into mire
far from life
far away to mirth
Ah’ miserable!
I saw that was a new world
and I was alone
I lied to myself
Life was just an illusion
And I wanted to live so much
at that time I was facing many questions
Why I couldn’t realise
why always denied
why I couldn’t ask for reasons
there was so many questions
why never asked
why I couldn’t see that life could be enemy
why i didn’t set my soul free through eternity

There was many keys
and I couldn’t find even
I have lost dreams
Lost my will
and all strength
Never thought just my will could be a key
to fight my destiny
never think my soul should be from desire
free through eternity!
It makes me move when I thought!

The sanity opened up my mind and I saw
My soul rose to never ever more to fall

SMiXX

that was awsome
it was like i was reading my own thruoghts
loved it
Ushna Sardar replied

thanks SMiXX!
glad ya liked!
yeah we all feel the same about life!
appreciate your comments!
keep reading and keep in touch!
Nvision Ink

that’s fantastic! Flows very well.
Ushna Sardar replied

thanks Niel! glad ya like! :)
Tom Broderick IPA

love your words. tom
Ushna Sardar replied

thanks tom!
glad ya do!
bellerjeau

you did it again, great work!
Ushna Sardar replied

thanks bellerjeau!
glad ya like!
appreciate your precious comments! keep reading and keep in touch!
olawunmi

Nice one…brings the depth of the feelings to fhe fore!
Ushna Sardar replied

thanks Summayyah! glad ya like hunnie!
appreciate your comments!
keep in touch!
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judithtaylor

your poem is a testament to all of us on the journey to discover ourselves i love it
Ushna Sardar replied

thank you so much judith!
gkad ya do!
appreciate your precious comments!
keep reading and keep in touch!
Bones

I can relate to this, awesome
Ushna Sardar replied

Thanks Rhys!
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Gregory John O...

Lift me up ! And you did
Ushna Sardar replied

Thank ya so much Gregory!
Russell Holder

I love your conclusion to this work… so positive vs. “I couldn’t” and “I didn’t” in contrast. The eternal struggle we all face, whither in the mirror or our daily lives and those that see us struggling with it all. It all comes down to self-realization… doesn’t it? Great piece!
Ushna Sardar replied

thanks Russel!
I agree ya are right!
glad ya liked!
appreciate your precious comments!
keep reading and keep in touch!
DiannaLee

This is a wonderful piece of writing.
Ushna Sardar replied

thanks Dianna!
glad ya liked hunnie!
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KEITH R. WILL...

it’s beautiful ushna
Ushna Sardar replied

Thanks PORASK! glad ya liked!
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