I wish I’d never say it, though
but that’s true
my life was passing through in eternal misery
I heard but I was denying
I have misled through false ideas
I realised I’m frustrated
that was unbearable misgiving
Life was an enemy and I couldn’t ever think
I couldn’t set goals
couldn’t find the way
I mislaid
Don’t even remember
Where I made mistake
I always had a problem of my soul
tempered and grumpy!
Why I couldn’t set my soul free through eternity
Why always escaped
always wanted to run away from truth
I wanted to close my eyes
Ah’ but I fell into mire
far from life
far away to mirth
Ah’ miserable!
I saw that was a new world
and I was alone
I lied to myself
Life was just an illusion
And I wanted to live so much
at that time I was facing many questions
Why I couldn’t realise
why always denied
why I couldn’t ask for reasons
there was so many questions
why never asked
why I couldn’t see that life could be enemy
why i didn’t set my soul free through eternity
There was many keys
and I couldn’t find even
I have lost dreams
Lost my will
and all strength
Never thought just my will could be a key
to fight my destiny
never think my soul should be from desire
free through eternity!
It makes me move when I thought!
The sanity opened up my mind and I saw
My soul rose to never ever more to fall
SOUL FREE THROUGH ETERNITY
Its Collabration with Niel Johson! he is artist and his artwork awesome!”
Please see the picture* “Down Below”
SMiXX, 5 months ago
that was awsome
it was like i was reading my own thruoghts
loved it
Neil Johnson, 5 months ago
that’s fantastic! Flows very well.
Ushna Sardar in reply to Neil Johnson’s comment, 5 months ago
thanks Niel! glad ya like! :)
Ushna Sardar in reply to SMiXX’s comment, 5 months ago
thanks SMiXX!
glad ya liked!
yeah we all feel the same about life!
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Tom Broderick IPA, 5 months ago
love your words. tom
Ushna Sardar in reply to Tom Broderick IPA’s comment, 5 months ago
thanks tom!
glad ya do!
bellerjeau, 5 months ago
you did it again, great work!
Summayyah Sadi..., 5 months ago
Nice one…brings the depth of the feelings to fhe fore!
judithtaylor, 5 months ago
your poem is a testament to all of us on the journey to discover ourselves i love it
Rhys Jones, 5 months ago
I can relate to this, awesome
Ushna Sardar in reply to bellerjeau’s comment, 5 months ago
thanks bellerjeau!
glad ya like!
appreciate your precious comments! keep reading and keep in touch!
Ushna Sardar in reply to Summayyah Sadiq-Ojibara’s comment, 5 months ago
thanks Summayyah! glad ya like hunnie!
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keep in touch!
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Ushna Sardar in reply to judithtaylor’s comment, 5 months ago
thank you so much judith!
gkad ya do!
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Ushna Sardar in reply to Rhys Jones’s comment, 5 months ago
Thanks Rhys!
appreciate your precious comments!
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Gregory John O..., 5 months ago
Lift me up ! And you did
Ushna Sardar in reply to Gregory John O'Flaherty’s comment, 5 months ago
Thank ya so much Gregory!
Russell Holder, 5 months ago
I love your conclusion to this work… so positive vs. “I couldn’t” and “I didn’t” in contrast. The eternal struggle we all face, whither in the mirror or our daily lives and those that see us struggling with it all. It all comes down to self-realization… doesn’t it? Great piece!
Ushna Sardar in reply to Russell Holder’s comment, 5 months ago
thanks Russel!
I agree ya are right!
glad ya liked!
appreciate your precious comments!
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DiannaLee, 5 months ago
This is a wonderful piece of writing.
KEITH R. WILL..., 5 months ago
it’s beautiful ushna
Ushna Sardar in reply to KEITH R. WILLIAMS’s comment, 5 months ago
Thanks PORASK! glad ya liked!
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Ushna Sardar in reply to DiannaLee’s comment, 5 months ago
thanks Dianna!
glad ya liked hunnie!
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