ON THE EDGE OF LOVE

Author: Ushna Sardar
Word Count: 139
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I was sitting on the edge of bench
you were sitting beside me
but we both were quiet
It was dark where I was sitting
you couldn’t see my face
I was weeping
That was a first day of fall
leaves were falling
like my tears on cheeks
I saw and found him stranger
we were all alone in that together
as far as I’m concerned ..
It was a long journey home
I’m just thinking about the situation
just thinking about us
What we thought and what we found
long journey out of nowhere
and long long way to go
I know its the end of the journey
so why I want that
you hold me once and say
don’t go anywhere
Just stay with me
I’m your home
so live in me!

ON THE EDGE OF LOVE

Its Collabration with Niel Johnson!
kindly see the picture Long Journey on RB!

ON THE EDGE OF LOVE belongs to the following groups:

Aboriginal Art, Art Inspired by Dreams, Bits and Pieces , Blue Room, Bridges, Cards: Best of Your Best, Collaboral Damage, Graphic Scratch, Hands, Happy Haven, Live, Love, Dream, Passions, Purple Haze, Safe Haven, Self as Other, The Sensual Word, The Two Of Us, Vibrant and Vivid Color and WMG

JaneAParis, 6 months ago

Yes, I am looking for him too. So very nice Ushna. Sometimes we need to be comforted don’t we, it is human. Lovely writing. Smiles from Jane.
Ushna Sardar in reply to JaneAParis’s comment, 6 months ago

thanks Jane! glad ya like hunnie! :)
yeah ya are right! I agree!
appreciate your precious comments! :)
Huggles.
Darkmonkey, 6 months ago

Lovely Ushna!
Ushna Sardar in reply to Darkmonkey’s comment, 6 months ago

thanks Darkmonkey!
glad ya like! :)
KBelleau, 6 months ago

a real plea to your love…
Ushna Sardar in reply to KBelleau’s comment, 6 months ago

thanks LBelleau! its a collabration writing with my RB friend Niel Johnson, have a look hope ya like that too! :)
appreciate your comments on work! keep readong and keep in touch!
Neil Johnson, 6 months ago

Well done Ushna!!! You’re a very talented writer. Works well with the image.
Ushna Sardar in reply to Neil Johnson’s comment, 6 months ago

thanks Neil!
glad ya liked! :)
thanks for kind words!
your photography is also out standing!
moonlightwater, 6 months ago

Nice work Ushna, something tells me this may be a story from the mind???
Ushna Sardar in reply to moonlightwater’s comment, 6 months ago

yeah it is moon!
thanks glad ya like!
keep reading and keep in touch!
Juni, 4 months ago

very well done, have just stumbled over that now, but this one is amazing!
Ushna Sardar in reply to Juni’s comment, 4 months ago

thank you so much hunnie!
you are such a sweetheart juni!
good to hear from you!
glad you liked!
huggles
xoxoxox