HALF UNTOLD
This is a collabration writing with my RB Friend Neil Johnson, kindly have a look of “Neil Johnson’s” out standing photography and the picture I choosen “UP ABOVE”
As far as I know the lighting is awesome and that pic got lots of camera techniques I love about that sort of photography! he is into filmmaking like me! well done Neil! keep up great work! :)
HALF UNTOLD belongs to the following groups:
Cards: Best of Your Best, Collaboral Damage, Fantasy Art, Live, Love, Dream: , Passions, Safe Haven, Self as Other, Two Beings Group, Vibrant and Vivid Color and WMGI think of you
I think of rose
I saw roses were getting blue
I think of rain
I feel your touch
I saw rain on shingles
I think of you
my heart was trembling
sometimes you won’t get out of it
You are the circle
I couldn’t tell you ever
I liked that circle of your love
Your eyes were looking into my eyes
Half told, half untold
sometimes less is more
but sometimes time passed by soon
so moments gone away
and I couldn’t stop you
you, your love were only the matter of time
so moment gone
end of the story
chapter closed!
Perhaps you would like to re open that book again
then you see into my eyes and realise
what you got and what you have lost!
Tom Broderick IPA
wow. tom
Ushna Sardar replied
thanks tom! :)
gladya liked
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Sally Omar
Ushna, How very beautiful…Love lost..Sally xxoo
Ushna Sardar replied
thanks Sally!
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Michael Brooks
Ushana you have a wonderful way to your writing!! This was a very heart felt poem!! Very well done!!!
Ushna Sardar replied
thanks Michael!
glad ya like!
appreciate your precious comments on work!
keep in touch! :)
Corinne Noon
Torn inside ! awww
Ushna Sardar replied
thanks Corinne!
glad ya liked hunnie!
appreciate your precious comments on work! keep reading and keep in touch!
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butchart
you always write so beautifully….......... b
Ushna Sardar replied
thanks b! :)
glad ya like!
appreciate your precious comments on work!
Nvision Ink
Well done!!!! Very moving writing works well with the photo. And thanks for promoting my photography!!!! You’ve got talent!
Ushna Sardar replied
Glad ya like Neil!
Your welcome! :)
thanks for kind words!
Thank ya! Huggles
Darkmonkey
Lovely writing! Poetic…
Ushna Sardar replied
thanks Darkmonkey!
glad ya like!