A Yellow Rose
Kindly see the beautiful picture of yellow flower on davidburk’s art collection! Thanks
A Yellow Rose belongs to the following groups:
Art Inspired by Dreams, Cards: Best of Your Best, Collaboral Damage, Live, Love, Dream: , Passions, Safe Haven, Self as Other, Two Beings Group, Vibrant and Vivid Color and WMGHe said he loves me
I believed
He said he can’t live without me
I believed
He said he will be mine forever
I believed
He said he will bring stars from the sky
I thought he could do so
He said, I can die for ya
And I felt, I’m tumbling inside
He said time will never gonna change ever
And I thought nothing is impossible
He gave me 10,000 promises
And I thought he will keep them
But one day he gave me a yellow rose
And said sorry time to dash off!
olawunmi
Oh Gosh! I kept waiting for it…didnt see that coming! We know them…by their flowers we know them! Nice one Urshner…like the quick flow and pace…over before you could say Yellow… :)
Ushna Sardar replied
Thanks Summayya!
Appreciate your comments hunnie a big bear huggles
they say, great mind think alike so we are! :)
bellerjeau
Thanks for sharing! It was amazing.
Ushna Sardar replied
thanks for reading this work bellerjeau!
so nice of ya! keep reading and keep in touch!
butchart
i enjoyed this…. very good writing but unlike the others i saw that yellow rose coming… i hope that doesn’t make you and i jaded,,,,,,,,,,,,,,b
Ushna Sardar replied
yellow rose, it the sign to be a part butchart! then anyone gave yellow flower or rose it means all over!
I would take ever yellow rose from my love ones nor give them!
Won’t lose my love ones I’m bit scared to lose!
Thanks for reading this work appreciate your precious comments!
Sally Omar
Ushna, Love your writing…what a surprise ending..Sally xxoo
Ushna Sardar replied
thanks sally, glad ya liked it, got BubbleMail from davidburk, he said ‘see picture of rose if ya could write something related to that pic and then I wrote that poem within two minutes!
Appreciate your precious comments on work! thanks hunnie “Huggles :)
Bradley S. Har...
Men uh? Not all of us are like this, trust me. As far as your poem, you have a rare treat at seeing the obvious even if it’s after the fact. The way you use your words are both funny and heartwarming. By the end I wasn’t sure if i should feel sorry for you or laugh. nice job
Ushna Sardar replied
I know All aren’t same Bradley! I didn’t meant to possess that, women are faithful and men aren’t! I know man do anything ‘when the man loves the woman! Rather its not me nor my story so ya don’t need to laugh at me or feel bit sad! :) It was just a story about two people they were in love, and love is very complicated! not easy to understand, ya can’t assume end nor predict! love ain’t about imaginary things! its all about unpredictable things!
glad ya enjoyed! its not funny though :)
appreciate your comments on work, thanks for sharing thought :)
Antanas
beautiful words
Ushna Sardar replied
thanks Antanas! :)
JaneAParis
Believing in love, and then being broken…very sad. Sometimes people never recover. Life and relationships can be very hard. This work is marvelous with the yellow rose as its symbol. Good work Ushna, I enjoyed it.
Ushna Sardar replied
thanks Jane, glad ya liked it!
appreciate your brief and precious comments on work!
Thanks for kind words, keep reading and keep in touch!
AngelArtist
This is a very good Poem!
Ushna Sardar replied
thanks Angel!
glad ya like! appreciate your comments on work!
keep reading and keep in touch!
Tony Ryan
Everyone at some time has made a promise that they meant but didn’t end up keeping. None of us are 100% secure and sure of life and when the power of love is involved the pressure does bring weakness to light. However if we are hurt by the broken promises of another there is a chance that there are weaknesses within us that have yet to be acknowledged and understood.
Ushna Sardar replied
Absolutely true tony!
none of us are 100% secure and sure of life!
thanks for sharing thoughts, appreciate your brife and precise comments! keep reading and keep in touch!