Half Forgotten Memories
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Art Inspired by Dreams, Beach Art, Cards: Best of Your Best, Live, Love, Dream: , Out of the Blue (75%+ Blue), Passions, Purple Passion Gallery. 2 per day , Realist Traditional Art, Safe Haven, Self as Other, Two Beings Group, Vibrant and Vivid Color and WMGI can hear the voice deep inside the silence
I can see staring out upon the sea
The waves were washing over half forgotten memories
You, your love is now just a forgotten memory!
And I won’t pretend we never met
Won’t think the time we had
Won’t see into your eyes
There’s no love
There’s no feel
You are just a empty picture
Without colours
without feel
Without love!
I’m seeing in to your heart
I can feel the emptiness!
And deep within the moment
dreams floats upon the breeze
I can hear your voice too
but its too far away
and it rising and falling dying down within me
I never knew how it could be
I tried but never could see that all I had inside
I never see the waves how they crash at heart’s door
Beyond that beautiful horizon, lies a dream for you and I
This tranquil scene could not depict the picture of broken dreams
You couldn’t see the storm
You just couldn’t heard when wind was crying
I won’t tell you, the serenade is growing colder
It breaks my soul, don’t you know!
There’s so many thoughts but, I won’t sing
I won’t writing about broken dreams
Nor I fly with broken wings!
but I feel better when I’m with you
Maybe Its a sort of temporary peace!
T.D. Ruley
very heartfelt inspiration
Ushna Sardar replied
thanks Ruley!
Sally Omar
Ushna .. So much emotion..you are so talented..Sally xxoo
Ushna Sardar replied
thanks sally!
glad ya like hunnie!
your words are great compliments for me!
appreciate your precious comments! :)
Tom Broderick IPA
ushna you write so well to deep for me as i am only a poet at times lol. tom
Ushna Sardar replied
thanks tom!
glad you like my writing work!
so kind of you!
appreciate your precious comments like always! :)
Suzanne German
well some men are just plain stupid sorry guys! it’s so true!!!
this is lovely – so are you – kick him in the arse!!!
Ushna Sardar replied
I agree suzanne! :)
glad you liked it, thanks for precious comments! keep reading and keep in touch! :)
darkofnight
Contagious this stupidity is, 3 reads in the past 20 minutes all relating to much the same, lack of communication, conveyance of feelings, hearbreak, dreams smothered, astray etc. The writings all heartfelt, sincere, and unbelievably kind to the one addressed, no vengence, no other woman or man, no hateful words or wishes. Ushna Your writing just so sincere, beautifully and tastefully done, but unfortunate also.
PJC
Ushna Sardar replied
Thanks darkofnight,
glad you like, thanks for sharing your deep thoughts and very brief comments on work, appreciate your precious comments!
keep reading and keep in touch! :)
Suzanne German
always hunxx!
Ushna Sardar replied
Huggles so nice of ya suzanne! :)
Naylor
You write with a passion that a true writer either has or does not … and you have it girl!!!!! I love the passion in which you write … your words are placed perfectly to impact your reader right from the start and hold their attention till the end ! Bravo!!!
Ushna Sardar replied
AWWWW its a great compliment Naylor!
thank ya so much for such a brief and deep comments!
glad you like it!
keep reading and keep in touch! so nice of ya!
pheonixit
AHHHHHHH Love no feeling or experience could ever teach us more about life and truth.
Ushna Sardar replied
Glad you like Joe!
appreciate your precious comments on work! keep reading and keep in touch!
sometimes love just complicated! yeah but it teaches a lot! and we can learn more!
Tony Ryan
Love is so hard to understand. There is such deep feeling but so little ownership of knowing. Best to try and flow with fate. To love in the moment and stay open for more love. I feel that we often feel rejection so deeply that much of our true learning is lost. However when we do embrace all experience we seem to become so much more knowledgeable ans so much more open to true love.
Ushna Sardar replied
absolutely true tony!
I agree, love is all about a experience! you just can’t feel anything with observation, and thats true we all learn from experience!
but its not easy to find a true love! nowadays true love is rare! and journey of that experience! it hurts bad!
Ushna Sardar replied
thanks for sharing such a lovely and deep thought tony!
I appreciated! keep reading and keep in touch! :)
Antanas
beautiful
Ushna Sardar replied
thanks Antanas!
butchart
i feel a beautifully written sad acceptance here…but with that acceptance also comes enlightenment….... and with it the strength to work harder for what you need or the strength and wisdom to let it go…........ best of luck on whichever path you follow…......... thank you for sharing…........b
Ushna Sardar replied
glad you like butchart!
thanks for you kind words, appreciate your precious comments on work!
JaneAParis
Wow, Ushna, this is beautifully written. There are many heartfelt lines that I loved. “I never knew how it could be.” This is so sad – lost love. And I loved the way you ended it. “but I feel better when I’m with you – Maybe Its a sort of temporary peace!” Like she really couldn’t let go of the shelter of his memory. So was he really so forgotten. The love was real and painful, but now the love is gone, now it is lost love, a half-forgotten memory as she stares out at the very serene sea pondering what could have been. I liked it very much. It is very deep.
Ushna Sardar replied
Thanks Jane!
glad you like! appreciate your precious comments on work!
and thanks for all kind words! .. keep reading and keep in touch! :)
Gregory John O...
Thanks for the writing. I enjoyed the read.
Ushna Sardar replied
thanks for reading Gregory!
Appreciate your comments!
keep reading and keep in touch!