I wanna be your dreams
I wanna be your fantasy!
I wanna be your desire
I wanna be your love
I close my eyes
Just close to me
And tell me what you want
All my love?
All my soul?
All my fidelity?
Tell me that once!
What you need me?
Tell me once that you love me?
karldenton, 6 months ago
Some times you just want to shake them, make them listen..
I love your writing…:)
Ushna Sardar in reply to karldenton’s comment, 6 months ago
Thanks Karl so nice of you, glad you liked! your comments so precious to me.. appreciate your comment! :) Huggles
Sally Omar, 6 months ago
Ushna..Alot of emotion here..enjoyed it…Sally xxoo
Ushna Sardar in reply to Sally Omar’s comment, 6 months ago
Glad you liked and enjoyed that piece of work Sally :)
Thanks for your precious comments, keep in touch! :)
Lehane, 6 months ago
It is a beautiful poem – but I’m not sure how a poem was approved by the Mods in the Flash Fiction group?
Ushna Sardar in reply to Lehane’s comment, 6 months ago
Thanks DBA Lehane, appreciate your precious comments!
Tom Broderick IPA, 6 months ago
i love your words. to me words of gold. tom
Ushna Sardar in reply to Tom Broderick IPA’s comment, 6 months ago
Thanks Tom Broderick, appreciate you precious comments on my work. glad you liked, keep in touch! :)
JohnKing, 6 months ago
That was really great. Short, simple, so honest and open, and I think what we all feel. Nice :-)
Ushna Sardar in reply to JohnKing’s comment, 6 months ago
Thanks JohnKing, glad you liked it. appreciate your precious comments on my work :) .. keep reading and keep in touch!