"Love Or An Illusion"

I was seeing in your eyes
And wanted to get the clue
I was searching for a destiny
Destiny of love, In your eyes
In your soul
But It seemed I have been failed

There’s no destiny
there’s no feeling
there’s no more love
You are quiet but in your eyes
All it shows!

I won’t say
I don’t believe!
Hoping all couldn’t be true
But I have to open my eyes
I have to got up now
I have need to realised now
Your love just an illusion
Its not destiny!

  • botticcelli

    botticcelli

    beautiful poem

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    Thanks Rafael!

  • Karl Denton

    Karl Denton

    These are beautiful words Ushna,

    Love, destiny is that moment when everything goes quiet around you when eyes meet, the world stops spinning for just a fraction of a second, but in that time and in each others eyes, you have spent a lifetime…

    Always happy to read more form you…

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    Yeah you are absolutely right I agree Karl, thanks for adding your precious comments :) appreciated. keep in touch!

  • Sally Omar

    Sally Omar

    Ushna, This is absolutely beautiful and sad…Sally xxoo

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    Thanks Sally so nice of you, appreciate your comments thats precious to me! keep in touch :)

  • Mary Campbell

    Mary Campbell

    Who hasn’t though love was real only to find it an illusion, Ushna you say it so well.. very nice.

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    Thanks MyMindsEye9 glad you liked! :) thanks for adding your precious comments appreciated. yeah your are right somestimes its just an illusion! keep in touch. :)

  • Larry Varley

    Larry Varley

    Yes, It is a hard thing to bear, to find something you completely believe in is just an illusion. Thanks for adding this to “love is all you need”

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    i agree Larry Varley it hurts bad! thanks for taking my work in “love is all you need”, appreciate your precious comments on work. keep reading and keep in touch! thanks.

  • Snoboardnlife

    Snoboardnlife

    Very good piece

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thanks snoboardnlife!

  • Snoboardnlife

    Snoboardnlife

    no problem

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    cool!

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