hazard of the precendent

blind eyes
lack of total vision
fastened with a lock
mind amputated
over the edge of the cliffs
managed to escape under cover of darkness
trying to take the plunge
fall into the trap of trying to do lock, stock and barrel for exist
struggle for life
the survival of the fittest
plans for a success now lie in ruins
far beyond thoughts
moral hazard of the precendent
mind would not act as a safety net underneath
wildly risky social acrobatics
survival became inevitable
thoughts burst the door open
there was an inevitability about defeat
time opened its spigots
the contagion of political & religious extremism
time to stop the contagion from spreading through the system
perpetuate injustice
makes life a misery
so traumatized by the situation
have to have manage to overcome all the obstacles that have been placed in path
the end of all the lack of vision
partial blindness…
Go to the end of the line!

  • valzart

    valzart

    WoW! this is wondrous thought provoking writing sweetheART excellent poetry ;} happy hippy hugglez

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thanks sweetheart Val! huggles :) xo

  • F.A. Moore

    F.A. Moore

    Wow, talk about stream of consciousness! Then POW!, “Go to the end of the line!”. Amazing writing.

    I’m not sure I’m absorbing all you say, intellectually; but I’m certainly feeling it.

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thank you so much F.A! glad you like! it means a lot!
    appreciate your precious comments! xo

  • linaji

    linaji

    mind amputated
    over the edge of the cliffs
    managed to escape under cover of darkness
    trying to take the plunge

    Gosh Ushna.. we are surrounded by this within and without.. superb as per your soul writing always is. xoxoxoxo

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thanks sweet lina! it means a lot my friend! huggles xo

  • kamel

    kamel

    philosophical speech…but what to do ?

  • tkrosevear

    tkrosevear

    so much depth to your words Ushna ;) xoxox

  • Carol Berliner

    Carol Berliner

    Wonderful depth!! Wonderful writing!!

  • montdragon

    montdragon

    fait accompli a meme virus rendezvous déjà rêvé or déjà vu…a double helix over and over again a condition not precognition…”the contagion of political & religious extremism
    time to stop the contagion from spreading through the system” a meme virus déjà vu contagion spread spreads spreading.

    huzzah huzzah huzzah…I like this.

  • Gregory John O'Flaherty

    Gregory John O...

    Nice read Ushna. Very deep, very thought provoking !!!!!

  • barnsis

    barnsis

    God I hate it when I have to go to then end of the line, great work.

  • RosaCobos

    RosaCobos

    Whati s the queueing for?
    Life it seems to be a caterpillar procession.
    Yes… urticant glands ready for explode
    at the minimum of excitation.
    Feeling trapped is enough tension.
    Seeing the wrong doings a challenge for patience.
    No way…no escape.
    Need to take the flood,
    not always wise to swim against current.
    Lay down….the means…
    and take the vows for self-listening.
    Peace.
    Rosa (brave as always, Ushna)

  • imagineering

    imagineering

    The truth is cruel, but it can be loved, and it makes free those who have loved it.
    Celestial writing….

  • BiographyofRed8

    BiographyofRed8

    you do have an extremely unique way of writing about conplex issues in a way that is tangible

  • BiographyofRed8

    BiographyofRed8

    complex rather and well written!!

  • Louise. C. Thomas

    Louise. C. Thomas

    This is the writing of an escapee, of a fugitive; really well captured. That desperate, organised chaos of quickly and logically working your way out of something. Love it.

  • Cassey

    Cassey

    Really awesome Ushna.

  • Shoaib .

    Shoaib .

    wow you never cease to amaze me .. your writing is always so BIG on is scale .. i love that

  • MrHill

    MrHill

    wildly risky social acrobatics….... great line..fantastic writing…

  • Impassioned

    Impassioned

    Nice writing Ushna…!

  • MarkezzAckui ...

    MarkezzAckui ...

    this is an exceptional piece of writing. I had to read this for a second time. the first time…I believe I missed something….this second time around I not only get it….I feeeeellll this. I can identify…....great writing!

  • Robin Brown

    Robin Brown

    Talented wordsmith Ushna!!

  • veritasunsaid

    veritasunsaid

    my goodness this is loaded!!!
    great writing (i will have to think more about it and get back to you)

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thanks veritas! glad u like! :)

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