the bare bones

i COULD FEEL THE STRUGGLE TOO!!! GREAT WORK

Ushna, I felt the intensity of this revelation and all the conflict in it. Peace beloved. X

wonderful words Ushna great work

The push and pull of this was so strong….a real whirlpool of lies and truth…..really enjoy how you phrased this whole piece….really wonderful writing..XX

Brilliant, Ushna! This is so powerfully charged with words and imagery. Your writing never dissapoints.

Wow!!!! You are so talented … this is powerful and profound…def FAV!!!!!!! xoxoxoxo

wonderful writing..very strong….thank you…

Seems in despair…
that green scum…
like bubbling of gangrene,
that gets into the essential.
And spreads without mercy,
amputation required.
It has a cure…
yes.. but,
where can we start to amputate..
and ….who is going to be the surgeon?
Rosa (vivid and strong as always Ushna….)

very good words

There is no absolute evil in the world: Evil is relative. Recognize this fact.
In the realm of time there is nothing that is not a foot to one and a fetter to another.
To one a foot, to another a fetter; to one a poison, to another sweet and wholesome sugar.
Snake-venom is life to the snake, but death to man: the sea is a garden to sea-creatures, but to the creatures of earth a mortal wound.
In search of goodness in things evil; Do Not look for it with your own eyes – NO, borrow sight from it, look on its face with its eye, look on it with its heart and your lover’s eye.
Then, and only then, you will become its eyes, its face, its hands and its heart – and everything loathly becomes heavenly once it leads you to the Soul of Goodness.Search Well and You Shall Find.
...I am glad you are not hiding those burnt fingers that grip…!!! Sometimes, a scream is better than a thesis….

Wow Ushna.. absolutely spot on!! xoxoxo huggie and kissis too!!

an amazingly emotive writing Ushna, well done ;) xoxoxox

Wonderful writing sweetheART so profound ;} happy hippy hugglez

Profound. Where there is intent to deceive, there “evil” lurks. It seems as though humanity has slipped into more deception. I don’t know why, unless it is because that it is so often reasoned away, as being good business, or good to protect another one, or this or that. But I like to hold everything to the light. Your writing not ony holds the attention, but intrigues one to dig for hidden meaning. Impressive, Ushna.

All sounds like politics to me. It was the thick green scum that did it…

Great piece Ushna !!!!

You make me think Ushna. So here I sit in my cynical world, bitching and moaning…....still believing good will triumph evil, go figure. SZ

ambivalent…. provoking… really enjoyed this!!!

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wonderful writing Ushna and many congrats to you on your work . :)

So who won? Good or evil?I’ll have to meditate on it. Good write. JH

For showing us that sometimes we need a “soul surgeon” this poem deserves it
Rosa

this is very powerful Ushna ….

Amazing USHNA love your writing … always so powerful .. you do amazing things girl

interestion combination of imagery writing

Gorgeous writing! I love it so much.
Congratulations on your features :)

Congrats on all your features, most deserving of the honors.

Very strong and honest. Thank you. It went deep inside me as I read it. :0) Song

Love your style Ushnaa! So much food for thought!

hmm
need to be settled and unrushed to digest these interesting works..
immediately appealing however and oozing complexity.

lovingly yours… L&L

Yep…time to crack on and cleanse…MS

I don’t understand why I haven’t seen this piece before.. it is well worth the many features and more, so much more. So inspiring a writer with such depth

I feel like I’ve been here today.. LOL! It really hits home.

Wow!

I hold much resonance and offer my compassion.
Keep flying your beautiful spirit!

i am dumbfounded that i missed this before….it plays a melody remembered long after…thank you sharing this wonderful discovery….