Homogeneity

Ushna Sardar
Author: Ushna Sardar
Word Count: 328
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John Frusciante is my favourite artist..he doesn’t want to be famous
his solo work is extremilly special
very pure
very honest music
it sounds from within
feelings and emotion
..beauty

a lot of time when i hear his music… the individual notes he plays on the guitar….. it’s like he is plucking the nerves in my body
I feel it physically
John Frusciante – Unreachable
that song inspired me to write this piece of writing!

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an ancient cosmologies
esotericism
Gnosticism
empyrean
warp
decomposition
shattered pleroma
the totality of divine powers
humans are divine souls?
trapped in a material world
the non-physical realm of space
daemonic and chaotic entities reside
somewhere dwelling-place in my soul
empyrean heaven
my beliefs
were the source of light
somewhere on the seventh heaven
on the seventh sky
the dwelling-place of God and the blessed
where I’ve been seeing facts with blind eyes
I kept my eyes peeled for any signs of life
I was keeping my eye on the ball
my wisdom and faith
the holding of esoteric opinions
the element of fire somewhere in my soul
there I’ve been speaking in the tongues of men and of angels
I have had prophecy, and knew all mysteries and all knowledge
there I have had all faith so that I could remove mountains
I gave away everything I own, and I gave over my body in order to boast
but did not have love…
I received no benefit
I was a noisy gong or a clanging cymbal
I have had everything
but did not have love
It always seemed, I was nothing

the highest heaven…
I felt my empyrean had fallen onto the floor
in one fell swoop…
like trees were felled and floated downstream
the experience left my feeling absolutely shattered
tears scalded my eyes
I made a loss on
time had led to widespread loss of life
there was an aching emptiness in my heart
shattered belief
shattered faith
and my shattered empyrean
false belief shattered the Empyrean?
I was accused of obtaining benefit under false pretences
I was knackered…
I wanted to cut my losses
dimensional homogeneity
evolution to revolution
reliability and homogeneity

interpretations & momentum

astronomical observation

my empyrean was a scar

I found myself in conflict with my soul

The fought for my release gathers momentum each day

I gradually fought my way

the scar of my soul has healed

  • valzart

    valzart

    Wow! this is totally amazing writing sweetheART love it ;} happy hippy hugglez

  • H M Bascom

    H M Bascom

    It is the dawning of a new age. Beautiful writing and thought provoking as well.

  • colorblind

    colorblind

    i love the impact this sent through me
    nice vibrations
    love the gravity this bears
    awesome piece

  • Jordan Busson

    Jordan Busson

    Brilliant! Profoundly psychological, theological and philosophical.

  • Sally Omar

    Sally Omar

    An excellent writing!!!!!!! A fav for me!!!!!!!!!! oxoxooxoxxoo

  • Aritheeagle

    Aritheeagle

    CReative and inspiring emotionally!

    Well done Ushna …. keep the flag flying!

    ~Ari

  • montdragon

    montdragon

    all in harmony harmony in all…agape love…excellent…

  • linaji

    linaji

    Wow Sista.. Good to have you writing again.. thank you for sharing such WONDER!!! XOXO

  • tkrosevear

    tkrosevear

    Now that’s what I call an “EPIPHANY” Ushna, beautifully felt and written ;) xoxoxox

  • mikequigley

    mikequigley

    cool piece – mq

  • JonoCarrick

    JonoCarrick

    wow! this reverberated through my soul.

  • Cassey

    Cassey

    No fair. I was going to say wow, but Jono said it first, and he’s right above me. So, instead I say a dazzling display of profound written expression!

  • Sally Omar
  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thanks sweet Sally! I’m so so honoured! huggles xo

  • DanaMS

    DanaMS

    Wonderful writing sweetheart! Congratulations on the feature!

  • joyousmoon

    joyousmoon

    Congratulations on your feature! Beautifully written.

  • Michael Scholl

    Michael Scholl

    So wonderful!!!

  • RosaCobos

    RosaCobos

    Unconviniences…
    Empyeran minds….
    hubrys selection on dreaming.
    Behind the desire of being accepted.
    Nothing happens… crisis are revolting
    Just what is needed does not glitter..
    not have any echoes…
    moving sands…
    engulfing the aroma of the thoughts…
    for certain souls
    and undestanding..
    like coupling clouds…
    sexually active in circumstances..
    Little by little the demand is there,
    crashing the brilliant independence.
    Or I love or I die..
    and then…
    one realize sthat love has no design…
    is a metaphor of a breathing Life..
    is not anuything to hold, neither to achieve…
    is not a conundrum…is not a must, is not a need..
    but a vivid flow…
    from which hatred is so loving…
    solitude is a crowd…
    and vacuum… a plentiful mistery..
    Rosa (Yours has been the best I have read here.. for a time… direct to my heart-mind…so good to have read it.. has shooting my words like a rosary…beading to the Cross…thanks a lot Ushna.. you have an strong, sensible and revolting soul-mind)

  • Isa Rodriguez

    Isa Rodriguez


    05/01/09

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thank you so much Isa & Boni!! I’m so so honoured! huggles xo

  • RosaCobos

    RosaCobos

    Your work has been featured in NIRVANA….
    Glad to announce it!!
    A hug!
    Rosa

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thank you so much Rosa!! i m so so honoured! huggles xo

  • silverstrummer -  David Everitt

    silverstrummer...

    Beautifully written with your heartful soul to healing your scar. – Congratulations too Ushner on your well deserved features – David

  • Astoreth

    Astoreth

    Beautiful journey of revelation Ushna. xxxx

  • Shoaib .

    Shoaib .

    hmmmm i dunno WHY i havent gotten into your poetry yet… its like on another level
    i’m very intrigued….

    must say your writing feels like …a final fantasy game, where its epic and otherworldly…
    flippin brilliance

  • wigs

    wigs

    wonderful work…

  • linskudd

    linskudd

    Amazing writing.

  • linaji

    linaji


    I THINK THIS IS SO BRILL!!!

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thank you so much Lina! I’m thrilled! xo

  • Terry Hinkle

    Terry Hinkle

    That took my breath away. Powerful combinations of words. Such feeling.

  • Leon  Walker

    Leon Walker

    This is a very special piece of writing!!! Excellent in every way!!!

  • TheWanderingBoo

    TheWanderingBoo

    awesome piece of writing

  • Robin Brown

    Robin Brown 14 days ago

    I know what you mean about scar’s Ushna. I can relate to your fine words in many ways!! xx

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