rhapsody - a moment in love

secret thoughts
stolen moments
compassion and tenderness
emotions overflow
like clouds drifted across the sky
all I desire
temptation
keep climbing higher and higher
in your arms

startling revelations
sweet & sensational
startling disclosures of sweet secrets
beyond what we thought
kissing passionately
I can still vividly remember
at that moment
your sense of magic
had brought me closer to you
snuggled close up
sweet surrender
i felt and knew..
was love
that flowed through those veins
you whispered or voice of an angle spoke to me
the star travelled in disguise
reality locked us in memory banks
wishful thinking
you are thinking of me!
cause I could not resist the temptation to be with you
I’m thinking and missing you massively
in a speechless way!

  • kjgordon

    kjgordon

    OH MY>>>>>>>>>>>>>

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thanks gorden my friend!

  • linaji

    linaji

    Oh Yahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhxoxoxo I love when you speak of love.. you Rock!

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thank you much lina my friend! glad you liked! it means a lot! I like that too! for a change! :)
    huggles my friend

  • Romo

    Romo

    this is brilliant….Your words are pure magic for this magical image….excellent collab my friend:)

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thank you so much Robin my friend! you are such a sweetheart friend! appreciate your precious comments! huggles

  • Snoboardnlife

    Snoboardnlife

    This is awesome too

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thanks sno my friend! glad you liked! it means a lot!

  • Shaida  Parveen

    Shaida Parveen

    sensational, well done.

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    long time Shaida my friend! how have you been? hope you been good and everything good on your end! thank you so much reading and comments! glad you liked! it means a lot!
    huggles my friend

  • Shaida  Parveen

    Shaida Parveen

    Huge Hugs to you to my freind. will bubblemail you shortly. xx

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    I will wait my friend! have a nice week! :) huggles

  • BehindBlueEyes

    BehindBlueEyes

    Absolutely beautiful!

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thanks Behindblue! especially for fav! it means a lot! glad you liked! appreciate your precious comments! stay in touch!
    love&peace – Ushna

  • TheWanderingBoo

    TheWanderingBoo

    as always beautiful words and a wonderful piece of art…romantic and if I maybe so bold; Sensuous

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thanks Boo my friend! glad you liked! it means a lot! huggles

  • Agnes McGuinness

    Agnes McGuinness

    Wonderful image and writing. A poignant and sensual poem. Agnes:)))

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thanks Agnes my friend! it means a lot! appreciate youe precious comments! huggles my friend

  • barnsis

    barnsis

    Ahh a sweet lovely one, like the collaboration.

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thanks byron my friend! glad you liked! it means a lot! huggles my friend

  • kalaryder

    kalaryder

    Lovely words and interesting image

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thanks Kalaryder my friend! it means a lot! huggles

  • jomei249

    jomei249

    beautiful Ushna!

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thanks JL my friend! it means a lot! huggles

  • Shree

    Shree

    Simply magical..dear Ushna….your words always makes me speachless and i read and read it over and over again…only a born poet can write such heartfelt emotions and you indeed are blessed with soulful art of playing with wordly wonders…you rock dear everytime you pick a pen so there you go once again with your yet another master stroke….thanks anyways for choosing my artwork am so honoured and proud for all our joint colloborations..Good luck.!!!

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thank you so much Shree for all kind words my friend! it means a lot! glad you liked! thanks for giving me beautiful piece of art! can i put up a price on that piece of art? if you want I will do it! it could be a nice card! what you think? check oit large view of that piece of art at art work! hope you like!
    appreciate your precious comments!
    huggles my friend

  • KEITH  R. WILLIAMS

    KEITH R. WILL...

    it’s beautiful ushna

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thanks Keith my friend! it means a lot! glad you liked! huggles my friend

  • Gregory John O'Flaherty

    Gregory John O...

    Lucky bastard .,... Nice one Ushna, I enjoyed that

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thanks Greg my friend! glad you liked! it means a lot! huggles my friend

  • ufosIsee

    ufosIsee

    Good placement of words I really like this alot…

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thanks ufoslsee! glad you liked! it means a lot! appreciate your precious comments! stay in touch my friend! -huggles

  • devotee1

    devotee1

    Beautiful writing! And great art, very expressive of passion. This is an excellent collaboration!

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    Thank you so much Joe my friend! glad you liked! appreciate your precious comments! huggles my friend

  • Shree

    Shree

    Hey Ushna..go ahead and keep whatever price you like…its your joint effort now so no need to ask anything…just do what your heart says and it will be fine for me…..i think it will surely work out to be a great card with your lovely thoughts around it..Good Luck.!!

  • Jeff  Burns

    Jeff Burns

    Just breathtaking

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thanks Jeff! glad you liked! it means a lot!
    stay in touch – many blessings for you

  • H M Bascom

    H M Bascom

    Moving words. amazing writing

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thanks Helen my friend! glad you liked! it means a lot! appreciate your precious comments! huggles my friend

  • amarica

    amarica

    Very passionate poem Hun!

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thanks Ann my friend!! huggles

  • Proust

    Proust

    Lovely

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thanks Proust! :)

  • Andrew Price

    Andrew Price

    This is outstanding as is the rest of your work.

  • Faith Donovan

    Faith Donovan

    How beautiful!

  • cathrinedp

    cathrinedp

    So touching and emotive. Wonderful

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thanks sweetheart xo

  • Rex Inkpen

    Rex Inkpen

    eeek! very good..hmmm

  • Astoreth

    Astoreth

    Gorgeous. Wonderful. Beautiful. xx

  • Genevieve Robey

    Genevieve Robey

    beautiful.
    “the star travelled in disguise
    reality locked us in memory banks”
    far out that’s good.

  • ufosIsee

    ufosIsee

    I can still taste the beauty in this superb poem… Well done..

  • lazydaze

    lazydaze

    magic words! so well written !

  • GreenWitch

    GreenWitch

    This is so beautiful!!!

  • linaji
  • cougarfan

    cougarfan


    And Congrats In Being Our Inspired Art Of The Day!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thanks dear Trena! i m so honoured! xo

  • Astoreth

    Astoreth

    How BEAUTIFUL.....congratulations hun. xxxx

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thank u so much sweet Astro! it means a lot! huggles xo

  • Elizium

    Elizium

    Wonderful writing and a beautiful worded last line “I’m thinking and missing you massively in a speechless way!” ...sometimes the inner silence of love can speak louder than words…

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thank you so much Eli! glad u liked! huggles

  • BiographyofRed8

    BiographyofRed8

    All of this so beautiful, the image and the words.. tender and passionate and beautiful..
    when I get the time I need to read more!!

  • oneperfectkiss

    oneperfectkiss

    whew….this is utterly beautiful Ushna!! xxxx

  • Cassey

    Cassey

    Beautiful

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thanks Cass!

  • Mudsoldat

    Mudsoldat

    Ushna. The responsibility we have when we love someone is so romantically highlighted here. Thank you for that. peace to you. MS

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  • Robin Brown

    Robin Brown

    With so many features Ushna yuo don’t need me to tell you this is quality work!! xx

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