stand the coin on its edge
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thanks for this piece of art …
She Waits…!! it’s awesome!!
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Lights were burning upstairs, but no one answered the door
she walked slowly away from him
she heard the door slam behind her
The rims of her eyes were red with crying
no body knows that she suddenly burst into tears behind closed doors
she could hear the sound of her ragged breathing
she tried to stand the coin on its edge
she set off along the cliff path.—

She couldn’t stand being kept waiting
A window slammed shut in the wind
she has been waiting…
she has been thinking of him but pretending
she has been waiting for the candle to burn with a bright flame
she snuffed out a candle but a hope flamed in her
‘There you are,’ said a voice behind her.
a tiny inner voice insisted, “You’ll just have to wait your turn”
she heard her inner voice
but she pretended that nothing had happened
she was seized by a sudden pang of conscience
she is under no illusions about what she have been feeling
she remembered that they talked about everything under the sun
she heard the voice of the rain in the silence
she heard some empty words
she thinks she felt a drop of rain under the burning sun
but It seemed, the volcano erupted, raining hot ash over a wide area
she waited her chance and slipped out when no one was looking
she saw the house had been standing empty for some time
sometimes she emptied out her pockets but could not find her keys
she has often wondered what happened to her
she never felt nothing in the world like this before
she emptied the ashtrays, washed the glasses and went to bed
she pretended to be asleep
she busied herself with the preparations for the things
she never felt nothing like this before
she had a busy time lined up but ..
she felt like a part of her was missing
today she thought about him
today she realised something
and she discovered it was him
she realised she has wishing that he would come back through her door
Now she knows that she has been waiting for him
She loves how being just who they are is enough
she missed that today and she waits for him
she is under no illusions about what hard time this will be
without him…
she doesn’t want to burn her bridges
so..
She waits…
she will wait for him!
Yool
Well done you are a writing star my friend !!!
Ushna Sardar replied
thank you so much my friend Yool, so nice of you hunnie! huggles n love xoxoxoxox
VanSnuG
Fabulous Writing.
Ushna Sardar replied
thank you so much Van my friend! especially for fav! it means a lot!!!you are such a sweetheart! love and huggles xoxox
KEITH R. WILL...
I REMEMBER WHEN U FIRST STARTED, AND NOW YOU’RE A BLOSSOMING YOUNG POET FULL OF POTENTIAL. IT’S AMAZING TO SEE HOW U HAVE PROGRESSED EXCELLENT WORDS USHNA HUGGLES
Ushna Sardar replied
thank you so much Keith my friend! i agreed yeah i conceded that i learnt loads n loads with the time being! thanks for kind words, so nice of you my friend! glad you liked, huggles n love my friend!
navybrat
excellent words…..BRAVO!!
Ushna Sardar replied
thanks my friend!!! it means a lot!
Tom Broderick IPA
great work again ushna. tom
mikequigley
lovely and nice piece of artwork also mq
Romo
Oh my dear friend…this is fantastic and speaks so well for my art…excellent…I love it….Hugs:)
WayoftheWarrior
Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Gregory John O...
Good one Ushna. I enjoyed it..
Agnes McGuinness
Wonderful writing. The poem and the image enhance each other so beautifully. Agnes:)))
Van Cordle
Excellent writing!! And wonderful work!!
tkrosevear
WOW, excellent collaboration ;)
barnsis
Awesome collaoration, I think this may be one of if not your very best at least I think it is my favorite of all of your work I have read.
Ushna Sardar replied
thanks byron my friend! it means a lot! huggles
nkbellani
Fab Fab you two..
Ushna Sardar replied
thanks Kumar my friend! it means a lot! huggles
JMerlin
Really nice.
Ushna Sardar replied
thanks Merlin! stay in touch!
huggles my friend
linaji
What a great collab!! Two of my fav gals with a HEEP OF TALENT!! HUGGELS AND LOVE TO YOU!
Ushna Sardar replied
thanks sweet lina! it means a lot! huggles n love xoxoxox
Rachael D
Incredible writing.. you are so very very talented. xx
Faith Donovan
WONDERFUL! I can feel her… in me.
montdragon
Yin yang…yen for the balance to balance the unbalance a flip of a coin chooses fate if fate hangs in the balance….”if.” Bittersweet is sometimes yin and yang…from the heart…a good read.
GreenWitch
:) Beautiful…
v Sinn v
This truloy captures my vision of what Immortal Love was meant to feature!