constriction

noisome situations
noisome smells
a constricted vision of the world
political constrictions
constricting rules and regulations
when the sun reclines
the night consumes light
the vast span of geological time
geological epochs
time marked the end of an epoch in the country’s history
a life of depravity
Clandestine democracy


dissenting voices
dissenting views and opinion
political dissent
religious dissent
Diplomacy is better than war ain’t it?

epochs fly
but the problems would be repeated ad infinitum
a primal urge
time is but the stream
fear for the future
a stream through which we crossed
In fetters of time lied a measureless space
a faint string of crimson hue
some clear concise instructions
some narrow victories
some narrow escape
some cosmic plans
some disasters on a cosmic scale
some narrow interests
a very narrow view of the world
it seems that we ignored some important issues
but through storms of cosmic dust we made our way
we reduced the number of possibilities and choices
the time blinded by a thousand dying suns

Exists in the notch
a palpable sense of relief
some obscure reasons
we failed to turn up
we found the way where a million realities exist
we traced our lines of descent from the past!
we have narrowed down the list of personal interests
to bring us back upon ourselves
we have notched up!
there is no more the feeling of constriction in the chest of the world!
the constricted vision of the world has changed
the political constrictions has been virtually eradicated in world.

  • linaji

    linaji

    Ohhhh do I love love love this one… the combo of you both is PERRRRRRRFECT!!! FAV FAV FAV!

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    lina thank you so much hunnie! you are such a sweetheart! glad you liked it means a lot! huggles n love from Ushna xoxoxoxox

  • Paul (Quixote) Alleyne

    Paul (Quixote)...

    Excellent piece and image, Ushna.

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thank you so much Paul! glad you liked! appreciate your precious comments! stay in touch!

  • Pet _

    Pet _

    Love this!! Great collaboration!!! mwaaaa xxxxx

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    hey long time Pet! how are you? u been good? what have u been up to? missed you my friend! thank you so much! glad you liked! it means a lot hunnie! huggles n love xoxoxoxox

  • Judi Taylor

    Judi Taylor

    Made me think … great piece, Ushna!

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thank you so much Judi! it means a lot! huggles my friend xoxoxox

  • margpie

    margpie

    beautiful work Ushna, I love doing collabs with you :)

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    ditto marina! i love to doing collab with u my friend! you are outstanding artist! love your art! thank you so much! glad you liked! huggles n love xoxoxoxox

  • nkbellani

    nkbellani

    Wonderful…..words and the artwork…I’m a fan of Margpie anyway!

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thanks Kumar my friend! glad you liked! i love her art too!
    appreciate your precious comments! huggles my friend

  • KEITH  R. WILLIAMS

    KEITH R. WILL...

    excellent writing again my friend huggles, and then some

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thank you so much Keith my friend! it means a lot! you are such a darling friend! huggles

  • devotee1

    devotee1

    “a very narrow view of the world
    it seems that we ignored some important issues
    but through storms of cosmic dust we made our way
    we reduced the number of possibilities and choices
    the time blinded by a thousand dying suns

    Exists in the notch
    a palpable sense of relief
    some obscure reasons
    we failed to turn up
    we found the way where a million realities exist
    we traced our lines of descent from the past!
    we have narrowed down the list of personal interests
    to bring us back upon ourselves”

    Absolutely beautiful poetry! A brilliant journey, and I also am confident that in time it will all work good for all. But it has been a difficult journey, not at all smooth, and, as you say, much yet to learn in the way of humanity.

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    yeah I agree Joe, that time will come then we see humanity have taken place! and the political constrictions has been virtually eradicated in world! thank you so much my friend! glad you liked! it means a lot! appreciate your precious comments!
    huggles my friend

  • devotee1

    devotee1

    Great collaboration! The artwork is superb. There is a brightness (hopefulness) evident, and also the many twists and turns of reality. I can see the wars and also the love that will heal. Tremendous image!

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thank you so much Joe, marina is a very talented artist i love her art work too! no doubt she depicted well! glad you liked that collab! so nice of you! appreciate your precious comments! huggles my dear friend

  • Wayne Cook

    Wayne Cook

    I am not able often to find your poems, but when I do, you never fail to excite images and thoughts. Thoughts that sometimes go against what we’ve been taught, but thought I know, have been carefully constructed in your soul. You do excellent, and sometimes disturbing poetry and it always leaves me wanting more….your work entrances this reader!! Beautifully written, Ushna….You have my admiration!!

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thank you so much Wayne my friend! it means a lot!
    appreciate your precious comments!
    huggles

  • Gregory John O'Flaherty
  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thanks Greg my friend!
    huggles

  • judithtaylor

    judithtaylor

    Sensational collaboration.
    Congratulations
    I love it

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thanks judi! glad you liked! it means a lot!
    huggles my friend!!!

  • barnsis

    barnsis

    very well done, so many thoughts and ideas.

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thanks byron my friend!it means a lot
    huggles

  • Del Millar

    Del Millar

    Brilliant and beautiful Ushna and a great art work.

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thanks Del my friend! glad you liked! it means a lot! huggles

  • Sally Omar

    Sally Omar

    Ushna, Absolutely brilliant…I love it…definite fav…Hugs, Sally xxxxoooo

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thanks Sal, you are such a sweetheart! huggles xoxoxox

  • Jen Whyte

    Jen Whyte

    Very thought provoking words my dear … beautifully written!

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thanks Jen my friend! it means a lot! huggles

  • chazz

    chazz

    Great writing….I love reading your work, it’s always so thought provoking.

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thanks chazz my friend!
    it means a lot!
    huggles

  • Symmetry44

    Symmetry44

    Perfectly written Ushna….

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thanks symmetry! appreciate your precious comments!
    it means a lot! stay in touch!

  • linaji

    linaji

    GLORIOUS WORK..

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