trauma

extreme aggression
extreme emotions
extremely insane mind
resting fear
resting unconscious
the subconscious mind
unconscious desires
a strange inhuman sound
living in the circle
Pushed up by lines
we are fish out of water
on the wrong side of the tracks





standing against the opposed
we do not want war
nor want to escalate the war

our life’s diary is a record of our inner conflict
We should do all we can to help our less fortunate brethren
will we die for our brethren, that we had chose?
Our side seemed under the cosh
we are experiencing a lot of pressure
strayed into the path of an oncoming danger
it seemed, we strayed a few blocks in the wrong direction and became hopelessly lost
We seem to be straying from the main theme of the debate
are we fish out of water
on the wrong side of the tracks?
we have taken to living like a duck to water.—
strapped, a broken pact
caught in a trap
It seemed the tide has got and we watch as your life starts to divide
we just managed to duck out of sight
We ducked down behind the wall so danger wouldn’t see us
we have got to get back from the wrong
side of the tracks
a tide of optimism
our chance to turn the tide
a blizzard of thoughts
a howling gale
the blizzard is still raging outside
can we go against the tide
it feels like we’re drowning
can we realise that we are losing time
there are very real grounds for optimism

a fly trapped in a jar
is it a fly the coop
we seem to fly off the handle about the slightest thing these days
off-the-wall ideas
we confronted us with a choice between war and peace
we chose the path
where there the walls just keep on closing in
we were unable to deny the challenges in the face of new horizons
we knocked on the door with some trepidation
ran around in the circle
but minds have wrapped up in cellophane bag
might we keep crawling on and on
fell into the trap
cant even breath
trapped in the burning house
like a fire in a glass!

  • kamel

    kamel

    very cosmic very descriptive
    but the picture is fantastic…

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thanks kamel my friend huggles

  • kamel

    kamel

    I like the colors the perspective and also the harmony
    very much

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thank you so much kamel my friend so nice of you! :) huggles

  • Wayne Cook

    Wayne Cook

    Your word pictures are vivid, Ushna…scary, making me want to hide behind those very walls. I was in a war, before i was even of age to serve. The images still come back in these kinds of writings and haunt me.

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thank you so much Wayne my friend! glad you liked! it means alot! appreciate your precious comments!
    huggles

  • Tom Broderick IPA

    Tom Broderick IPA

    love you as your work is great . tom

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thanks tom my friend! glad you liked! huggles my friend

  • linaji

    linaji

    You are so clever my dear… long time gone I.. miss you and this just is fantastic work.. love the collab too!

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thank you so much lina! missed you too hunnie! glad you liked! appreciate your precious comments! you are such a sweetheart! huggles xoxoxoxox

  • Yool

    Yool

    Great image and you sure have a way with words Ushna !!!!

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thank you Yool my friend! glad you liked! it means a lot!
    huggles xoxoxox

  • Nvision Ink

    Nvision Ink

    This is amazing Ushna! Great colab!

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thank you so much Neil my friend long time!
    glad you liked!
    huggles xoxox

  • kjgordon

    kjgordon

    wonderful combo….......

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thanks gordon my friend! huggles

  • devotee1

    devotee1

    Very emotive writing, Ushna! I have faith in humanity to succeed at ever lasting peace…but it does seem like it is taking forever…. Sad so many children are suffering. Another moving and profound work.

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thank you so much Joe my friend! so nice of you!
    glad you liked and I agreed to you! hope it gets better soon!
    well hope for the best! thanks you so much for fav!
    huggles my friend

  • devotee1

    devotee1

    Also, great art Romo!!!

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thanks Joe! no doubt! huggles

  • VanSnuG

    VanSnuG

    Traumatic Indeed.
    Great Collaboration, Ushna and Romo.

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thank you so much Van my friend! glad you liked!
    huggles my friend

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thanks for fav Van my friend! it means a lot! huggles

  • Romo

    Romo

    Very powerful, deep and emotive writing Ushna…Excellent…I always love to collab with you, you have such a powerful way with words….Love it…hugs my friend:)

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thank you so much Robin my friend! i loved to collab with ur art! glad you liked my friend! it means alot! you are such a sweetheart! huggles xoxoxox

  • Anthony R. Plastino III

    Anthony R. Pla...

    Nice flow from concept to concept. Awesome with the artwork included… Nice work :)

  • redhawk

    redhawk

    Your collobarations have been beautiful works of art and writings, Ushna. Another wonderful piece.. Hugs xoxo

  • Kaika

    Kaika

    Beautiful words. It still amazes me the pictures a person can invoke with writing. Lovely picture as well, compliments the writing nicely

  • TheWanderingBoo

    TheWanderingBoo

    once again, absolutely brilliant…the words and picture come together so beautifully as always

  • Gregory John O'Flaherty

    Gregory John O...

    Deep. Like it

  • barnsis

    barnsis

    So true, how I wish people like you and I could stop those at the top from making the decisions for all of us even when they know they are wrong. Excellent conbination of words and image.

  • EarthGipsy

    EarthGipsy

    Deep, descriptive, emotive…great imagery. Congrats on the feature.

  • anaisnais

    anaisnais

    Great very evokative, lovely imagery.

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thanks ana! glad you liked! it means a lot! stay in touch! huggles xoxoxox

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