patches of dense fog
I sat in a patch of shade under a belief
I was enjoying a purple patch and spent thousand moments in fidelity
fidelity to my principles
the fidelity of the faith to keep calm us in heart’s realm—
the perpetual moments of faith
I lived for years in a perpetual state of faith and compassion
my religious belief was always hedged with doubt though
a way of hedging against balance risks
hedging against protect myself against problems
especially against losing faith
I felt there was no fear though
time peaks covered with perpetual faith
and bliss

sometimes I found life made me feel hedged in and restless on some point
Time offer wasn’t hedged around with all sorts of conditions
I wanted to reduce the risk of losing & making a mistake by supporting more than one side in a competition, an argument
I hedged my bets by applying for various other direction and path
but all I found that I fenced by usual routine of life
restrict freedom
surround with a fence
divide one belief from another with a fence
divide one heart from another
fenced with barbed wire
different belief
different faith
the different colour of skin
How can humanity work with these perpetual interruptions?
One end of the heart had been fenced off for the hope
I was sitting in the fence
and thought that I would prayer
I would kiss the sky
and prayer for hearts are fenced with barbed wire.—
a little prayer to unfenced eyes from partial blindness
Kiss the sky and prayer for those fenced by a moment of blind panic
kiss the sky and prayer for skin that couldn’t breathe long in the air of discrimination
what if you allow skin to breathe
what if you open the heart and let air get in
through kiss to the sky to open heaven’s door without any discrimination on the grounds of race
kiss the sky and plead for mercy
so sky will mercy on us
we go to put us at the mercy of the bank?
through the kiss and plead for the open doors for all
look at the sky with pleading eyes
so God mercy on us
without any discrimination of race, colour of skin and religion
plead for mercy
so we could get out from fear
through the kiss to the sky
so human could unfenced from barbed wire—
through the kiss..
so humanity can breathe without fear
without boundaries
without discrimination
without barriers
do we effort to learn discrimination between right and wrong?
positive discrimination
the ability to judge what is good, and true?
we can learn?
can we?
through the kiss ..
close your eyes
make a wish
the hearts are open
the heaven’s door is open
Go through this gate, and you’ll see the house on your left—
through the kiss..
patches of dense fog
On The Fence love this!!
linaji thanks for this awesom piece of art my friend!
Snoboardnlife, 2 months ago
You really know how to put a beginning, middle, and end to all your writing!
Tom Broderick IPA, 2 months ago
good work ushna. tom
Ushna Sardar in reply to Snoboardnlife’s comment, 2 months ago
thanks sno my friend! so nice of you!
huggles
Snoboardnlife, 2 months ago
You’re very welcome
Ushna Sardar in reply to Tom Broderick IPA’s comment, 2 months ago
thanks tom! glad you liked :)
huggles my friend
linaji, 2 months ago
You know dear dear Ushna.. I am completely humbled to have you write such words as these and use my work.. I am so very pleased.. I love you.
linaji, 2 months ago
PS.. I shall post your words with link.. soon.. morning is cutting short..xox
Tony Gomes, 2 months ago
life’s confusing, but your head is clear Ushna for writing such a good piece
wendyL, 2 months ago
Brilliant composure pretty ladies! well done you two!
Sally Omar, 2 months ago
Ushna, An absolutely awesome collaboration!!!!!!! Hugs,Sally xxooo
Gregory John O..., 2 months ago
Wonderful, Ushna…........... I am constantly lost in doubt, but find faith there..
Shree, 2 months ago
Awesome thoughts with great pic to match up with your highly meaningful writeups….i love your flow of words which go like wispering winds all around us….great tallents must say.
webbie, 2 months ago
Just awsome Ushna, great job :)
barnsis, 2 months ago
Well written, so many thoughts, I like “so humanity can breathe without fear” This made me think how I feel like I don’t have a choice of who to vote for for president this time. To me it isn’t even a choice of the worst one. We have so many fears in our world how can we breathe easy.
RMonroe, 2 months ago
This is fantastic what great words for a great image….Awesome….Hugs:)
Neil Johnson, 2 months ago
Wow Ushna! You always put such good vivd visuals in my head! Cause you writing is just sooooo GOOD!
JaneAParis, 2 months ago
Your writing is always so beautiful Ushna, you truly have the touch. I love the collaboration. The artwork is gorgeous, and seems to flow so well with your words. Smiles from Jane:-)
Ushna Sardar in reply to Tony Gomes’s comment, 2 months ago
thanks Tony! glad you liked my friend
appreciate your precious comments!
huggles
Ushna Sardar in reply to wendyL’s comment, 2 months ago
wendy thanks hunnie! you are darling!
glad you liked hunnie
it means a lot!
huggles xoxox
Ushna Sardar in reply to Sally Omar’s comment, 2 months ago
thanks Sal! you are sweetheart!
glad you liked!
huggles xoxoxox
Ushna Sardar in reply to Gregory John O'Flaherty’s comment, 2 months ago
Greg thank you so much my friend!
especally for fav!
you are sweetheart friend!
huggles
Ushna Sardar in reply to Shree’s comment, 2 months ago
thank you so much Shree for thos all kind words! so nice of you!
glad you liked my friend! it means a lot!
huggles
Ushna Sardar in reply to webbie’s comment, 2 months ago
thank you so much webbie!
appreciate your precious comments!
huggles xoxox
Ushna Sardar in reply to barnsis’s comment, 2 months ago
thank you so much byron my friend! well said!
appreciate your precious comments!
you are such a sweetheart!
huggles
Ushna Sardar in reply to RMonroe’s comment, 2 months ago
thanks Robin! glad you liked hunnie!
it means a lot!
huggles xoxoxox
Ushna Sardar in reply to Neil Johnson’s comment, 2 months ago
Neil you are such a sweetheart friend!
thanks for the kind words! you are an awesome artist! love your art!
appreciate your precious comments!
huggles xoxox
Ushna Sardar in reply to JaneAParis’s comment, 2 months ago
thank you so much Jane hunnie!
especailly for fav! glad you liked! appreciate your precious comments! you are such a darling!
huggles xoxoxoxox
TeriLee, 2 months ago
Fantasic Ushna….wonderful collab!! That was a fave image of mine already…these words are wonderful!!!
Anthony R. Pla..., 2 months ago
Awesome! Cool collaboration! Excellent poem too on its own. :)
Devalyn Marshall, 2 months ago
The two peices fit together brilliantly!!
mikequigley, 2 months ago
nice words and art mq
Ushna Sardar in reply to mikequigley’s comment, 2 months ago
thanks mike! it means a lot! huggles
cloudsdreams, 2 months ago
absolutely so beautiful and words so perfect…wow you got that “it” factor, such a talented one you…love this…huggles and love janet
Petra xxx, 2 months ago
It shows what a beautiful person you are!
Ushna Sardar in reply to TeriLee’s comment, 2 months ago
thank you so much Teri! glad you liked hunnie!
it means a lot!
huggles xoxoxox
Ushna Sardar in reply to Anthony R. Plastino III’s comment, 2 months ago
thanks Anthony! glad you liked!
appreciate your precious comments!
huggles my friend
Ushna Sardar in reply to Devalyn Marshall’s comment, 2 months ago
thanks Devalyn! :)
glad you liked!
stay in touch! huggles xoxoxox
Ushna Sardar in reply to cloudsdreams’s comment, 2 months ago
thank you so much Janet! glad you liked! it means a lot!
huggles xoxoxox
Ushna Sardar in reply to Petra xxx’s comment, 2 months ago
thanks Petra! so nice of you!
stay in touch my friend!
huggles
chazz, about 1 month ago
Great work!! Really pulls the reader into it!!
keet, about 1 month ago
just WOW.