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The heart was half empty
the soul was hollow inside
like it’s having a hole
empty space inside
hollow eyes
empty words were walking around
with no meaning; not meaning what is said
an empty promise with myself
thousand hollow promises
kindle a fire
I watched as the fire slowly kindled
like it takes dry wood to kindle
I saw the night has grown dark
Suspicion kindled within me
the time for the smoke to start
a shroud of smoke
I have a sneaking suspicion that life knows more than it’s telling us
I have a sneaking suspicion that it’s not telling the truth
water from shallow wells should be regarded with suspicion, as it may be contaminated
time
life
and
circles
they were so secret about everything
it seems, things are not yet fully understood
sometimes that is difficult to understand
the secrets of the universe


the secret of the time
the secrets of life
time have been revealing secrets
but life made thousand secrets
do we need to jump through the fire
to cleanse the soul
to know all secret?
to take away life’s guilty feelings and sin?
we felt cleansed of our sins after confession
ethnic strife
ethnic cleansing
here in the garden
the life is hidden by secrets
the research of life has yielded useful information
a garden of secrets have many solution?
I yielded to temptation and had a new path
It is one of the great unsolved mysteries of this life
Hidden dangers lurk in the ocean depths
the past was shrouded in mystery
shrouded in dust
shrouded in mist
future is shrouded by mystery
time keeps it secret and mysterious
their motives remain a mystery
but I know by the moon
that we are not too soon
a life of sin..
Confess your sins to God and he will forgive you
or we should jump through the fire to cleanse the soul
how we can find a new path?
the garden of secrets could let us know that?

  • KEITH  R. WILLIAMS

    KEITH R. WILL...

    very nice

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thanks Keith my friend!
    huggles

  • RMonroe

    RMonroe

    Absolutely beautiful Ushna, great image and your words speak for the image…great work:)

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thank you so much Robin! you are such a sweetheart!
    glad you liked hunnie! it means a lot!
    huggles xoxoxox

  • barnsis

    barnsis

    “It is one of the great unsolved mysteries of this life ” Is the heart half full or half empty, I say half full and waiting for more. Well written, Like it.

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thank you so much byron my friend! you are such a sweetheart!
    glad you liked!
    appreciate your precious comments!
    huggles

  • Sally Omar

    Sally Omar

    Ushna, Another profound beautiful piece that goes so well with Marlo’s awesome pic…..
    Sally xxoo

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thanks Sal!!!
    you are such a sweetheart! especially thanks for fav hunnie it means a lot! appreciate your precious comments!
    love & huggles to you my friend xoxoxoxo

  • mtda

    mtda

    Great flow Ushna, I really liked this.

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thanks mtda! glad you liked!
    it means a lot!
    huggles my friend!

  • red addiction

    red addiction

    You have a way with words and it’s a beautiful poem. Although I have my doubts about God. He or she is the suspicion of life as I only know as the punisher. I have different religious beliefs and I don’t believe in everybody elses God. If there was a God, he or she is very selfish. And we the people are suppose to be the whole of God? The whole is a mess, full of pain made of hatred, greed, lies, hypocracy and much suffering, which has always been the mark of God. Our hearts will always crave more because life can be too questionable for us to bare.

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thanks Marlo! we can disagree on some point and i dont mind it! :)
    all we have different believe and path to go aint we? for me believe is only a path marlo! appreciate your precious comments! :)
    glad you liked!
    huggles xoxoxox

  • red addiction

    red addiction

    I’m happy you liked my image. Thank you so much for writing for my print. You have much love to give.

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    your welcome hunnie! you are such a sweetheart!
    huggles xoxoxox

  • nkbellani

    nkbellani

    A beautiful poem and a superb work of art…so very well done dear.

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    Kumar thank you so much my friend! glad you liked!
    it means alot!
    huggles

  • Gregory John O'Flaherty

    Gregory John O...

    Nice one Ushna, thanks

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thanks Greg my friend! it means alot!
    huggles

  • nigelnash

    nigelnash

    u have a way with colloaborations ushna , both works are excellent , keep this going .

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thank you so much nigel my friend! glad you liked!
    appreciate your precious comments!
    huggles xoxox

  • Antanas

    Antanas

    beautiful emotion work

    Tik žodis eina ir ateina.
    Tik tu ne žodžio lauki
    Kažkas už rankos laiko…

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thanks Antanas my friend! I dont understand that words though :)
    huggles

  • wendyL

    wendyL

    Sweet Ushna! Brilliant again! hugs and love to you!

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thank you so much sweet wendy! glad you liked hunnie!
    appreciate your precious comments!
    huggles hunnie xoxoxox

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