He comes not when summer is on the roses
he comes not when the roses were in full bloom
he comes not when I rang the bell and waited in the winter
(Have I been waiting long?)
he comes not when September had come and the leaves were starting to fall
he doesn’t feel a drop of rain
he comes not when I walked along with a spring in my step
he comes not when flowers were blooming in spring
he comes not when the first rays of morning sun disturbed their repose
he comes not when my eyes were bright and excited
he comes not when a bright morning shining with the sun
but when the moon landing
the floor was dappled with pale moonlight
by the light of the moon I could just make out shapes and outlines
in the moonlight
a light rain began to fall
when a thought flitted through my mind
he comes to me
the rain was falling steadily..
a smile flitted across his face
the rain poured down
he grabbed hold of me and wouldn’t let go
Nicole Ryan, 3 months ago
lovely !!
Ushna Sardar in reply to Nicole Ryan’s comment, 3 months ago
thanks Nicole! it means a lot hunnie huggles xoxoxoxox
Tom Broderick IPA, 3 months ago
very nice. tom
Ushna Sardar in reply to Tom Broderick IPA’s comment, 3 months ago
thanks tom! :)
huggles my friend
barnsis, 3 months ago
I keep seeing an unnice person in this and yet it seems you have looked and looked for him. Maybe sometimes we don’t get what we wish for or think we are going to get?????
theyellowfury, 3 months ago
I’m liking this new personal direction from you Ushna.
Snoboardnlife, 3 months ago
Brilliant Ushna!
mtda, 3 months ago
Beautiful, haunting atmosphere that really pulled me in, nice work Ushna.
Summayyah Sadi..., 3 months ago
Well done Ushna, reflective piece!
Summayyah Sadi..., 3 months ago
Well done Ushna, reflective piece!
Summayyah Sadi..., 3 months ago
Well done Ushna, reflective piece!
KEITH R. WILL..., 3 months ago
BEAUTIFUL
Ushna Sardar in reply to barnsis’s comment, 3 months ago
well said byron! sometimes we don’t get what we wish for!!
appreciate your precious comments my friend!
thank you!
huggles
Ushna Sardar in reply to theyellowfury’s comment, 3 months ago
thanks S! :)
huggles my friend
Ushna Sardar in reply to Snoboardnlife’s comment, 3 months ago
thanks my friend! :)
huggles
Ushna Sardar in reply to mtda’s comment, 3 months ago
thank you so much mtda!
glad you liked!
huggles my friend
Ushna Sardar in reply to Summayyah Sadiq-Ojibara’s comment, 3 months ago
thank you so much sweet Summayyah!
it means a lot!
huggles xoxoxoxox
Ushna Sardar in reply to KEITH R. WILLIAMS’s comment, 3 months ago
thanks Keith! :)
huggles my friend!
Antanas, 3 months ago
he doesn’t feel a drop of rain
he comes not when I walked along with a spring in my step
he comes not when flowers were blooming in spring
he comes not when the first rays of morning sun disturbed their repose
he comes not when my eyes were bright and excited
he comes not when a bright morning shining with the sun
but when the moon landing
Ushna Sardar in reply to Antanas’s comment, 3 months ago
thanks Antanas!
wendyL, 3 months ago
another brilliant writing by no other thank you!!!!
Ushna Sardar in reply to wendyL’s comment, 3 months ago
thanks hunnie!
you are such a darling!
huggles xoxoxox
Sally Omar, 3 months ago
Ushna, Definite fav…awesome!!!!! SAlly xxoo
N Kumar Bellani, 3 months ago
Simply superb!
Ushna Sardar in reply to Sally Omar’s comment, 3 months ago
thanks hunnie Sal! huggles xoxox
Ushna Sardar in reply to N Kumar Bellani’s comment, 3 months ago
thanks Kumar!
huggles my friend!