Have I been waiting long?
Have I been waiting long? belongs to the following groups:
"Streams & Stream Crossings" 2 posts a day!, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Art Inspired by Dreams, AW Welcome Center, Bubblettes, Cards: Best of Your Best, EF Welcome Center, End Times, Fantasy Art, Live, Love, Dream: May you have a Blessed Christmas Season , Rusty, Crusty and Falling to Bits - 2 Per 24 Hours, Safe Haven, Self as Other, The Sensual Word, Two Beings Group, Two Word Challenge, Vibrant and Vivid Color and WMGHe comes not when summer is on the roses
he comes not when the roses were in full bloom
he comes not when I rang the bell and waited in the winter
(Have I been waiting long?)
he comes not when September had come and the leaves were starting to fall
he doesn’t feel a drop of rain
he comes not when I walked along with a spring in my step
he comes not when flowers were blooming in spring
he comes not when the first rays of morning sun disturbed their repose
he comes not when my eyes were bright and excited
he comes not when a bright morning shining with the sun
but when the moon landing
the floor was dappled with pale moonlight
by the light of the moon I could just make out shapes and outlines
in the moonlight
a light rain began to fall
when a thought flitted through my mind
he comes to me
the rain was falling steadily..
a smile flitted across his face
the rain poured down
he grabbed hold of me and wouldn’t let go
PJ Ryan
lovely !!
Ushna Sardar replied
thanks Nicole! it means a lot hunnie huggles xoxoxoxox
Tom Broderick IPA
very nice. tom
Ushna Sardar replied
thanks tom! :)
huggles my friend
barnsis
I keep seeing an unnice person in this and yet it seems you have looked and looked for him. Maybe sometimes we don’t get what we wish for or think we are going to get?????
Ushna Sardar replied
well said byron! sometimes we don’t get what we wish for!!
appreciate your precious comments my friend!
thank you!
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theyellowfury
I’m liking this new personal direction from you Ushna.
Ushna Sardar replied
thanks S! :)
huggles my friend
Snoboardnlife
Brilliant Ushna!
Ushna Sardar replied
thanks my friend! :)
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mtda
Beautiful, haunting atmosphere that really pulled me in, nice work Ushna.
Ushna Sardar replied
thank you so much mtda!
glad you liked!
huggles my friend
olawunmi
Well done Ushna, reflective piece!
Ushna Sardar replied
thank you so much sweet Summayyah!
it means a lot!
huggles xoxoxoxox
olawunmi
Well done Ushna, reflective piece!
olawunmi
Well done Ushna, reflective piece!
KEITH R. WILL...
BEAUTIFUL
Ushna Sardar replied
thanks Keith! :)
huggles my friend!
Antanas
he doesn’t feel a drop of rain
he comes not when I walked along with a spring in my step
he comes not when flowers were blooming in spring
he comes not when the first rays of morning sun disturbed their repose
he comes not when my eyes were bright and excited
he comes not when a bright morning shining with the sun
but when the moon landing
Ushna Sardar replied
thanks Antanas!
wendyL
another brilliant writing by no other thank you!!!!
Ushna Sardar replied
thanks hunnie!
you are such a darling!
huggles xoxoxox
Sally Omar
Ushna, Definite fav…awesome!!!!! SAlly xxoo
Ushna Sardar replied
thanks hunnie Sal! huggles xoxox
nkbellani
Simply superb!
Ushna Sardar replied
thanks Kumar!
huggles my friend!