First Rain
Prasad
thanks for the lovely image of First Rain Of The Season
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"Stream Crossings" 2 posts a day!, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Art Inspired by Dreams, Bubblettes, Cards: Best of Your Best, Collaboral Damage, End Times, Experimental, Live, Love, Dream, Self as Other, The Sensual Word, Two Beings Group, Vibrant and Vivid Color and WMGIt was scorching and there wasn’t a cloud in the sky
I walked all the day in the scorching heat
drifted aimlessly from one place to another
It was hot and getting hotter
then I saw the sun went behind a cloud
grey and white
many clouds…
that were floating in the sky
I still remembered
you once said
“I love rain and …
I love to see clouds in your eyes!
cause it shows you are thinking ..
this shows how you are seized by love ..
and It shows you’re madly in love
I always see clouds in your eyes!”
you whispered!!!
Our love grew with the years
you seized hold of my hand
you seized me by the arms
I still remembered!
clouds in my eyes ..
I saw It was pouring with rain
First rain!
I think I felt a drop of rain on my skin
many clouds
grey
white
a soaking wet afternoon
the air smelling sweet with wet ground
many clouds
It’s raining ..
you leaned over and whispered something in my ear
I love rain!
all I’m seeing grey and white mass made of very small drops of water
first rain came again!
the thoughts of life’s misery
to be replaced
by new hope and delight!!
linaji
wow and more wow.. just beautiful dear one.
Ushna Sardar replied
thanks sweet lina!
glad you liked hunnie!
huggles
xoxox
KEITH R. WILL...
this is so beautiful
Ushna Sardar replied
thanks Keith!
it means a lot!
huggles my friend!
TeriLee
Wonderful…I love rain too :)
Ushna Sardar replied
thanks TeriLee!
huggles hunnie xoxox
Prasad
So stunning and EMOTIVE, Ushna. This is absolute beauty in words, that’s beyond expression and framed PERFECTLY :)
Stunned with selecting my photograph. You are really an awesome friend.
Ushna Sardar replied
thanks Prasad!
glad you liked my friend!
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Tom Broderick IPA
great job on this one. tom
Ushna Sardar replied
thanks tom!
glad you liked!
big bunnie huggles my friend!
theyellowfury
I love seeing clouds in people’s eyes and I imagined what you wrote instantly when I read it. This is lovely Ushna. Very positive and warm.
Ushna Sardar replied
long time S! good to hear from you my friend!
thank you so much!
glad you liked!
appreciate your precious comments!
huggles
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theyellowfury
You’re welcome. Clouds are powerful things in literature as they have many meanings.
And they’re something I know how to draw so I’ve always liked them in art.
Ushna Sardar replied
well said S! I saw your new work! its amazing! Congratulations for sell! I’m looking forward to more …huggles
Sally Omar
Ushna, This is so awesome…you are such an amazing writer…when I read your work I feel
the emotions brought forth…this is a definite fav…Sally xxoo
Ushna Sardar replied
thank you so much Sal! you are such a darling friend!
thanks for fav!
glad you liked!
huggles hunnie xoxoxox
Nvision Ink
oooohhh Whoa wow! So sweet Ushna great colab! Awesome writing and photo to accompany it!
Ushna Sardar replied
thank you so much Neil! you are such a sweetheart friend!
glad you liked Neil!
appreciate your precious comments!
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Anaa
Wow !! Really great colab work Ushna …. an wonderful poem ….a beautiful photo to match …. the feelings of first rains cant be more beautiful i guess ! Cheers :)
Ushna Sardar replied
thank you so much Anna!
glad you liked hunnie!
appreciate your precious comments!
keep reading and keep in touch!
huggles xoxoxox
dpennyor
this is lovely, wonderful words and lovely photo!!
Ushna Sardar replied
thanks Dennis! glad you liked!
keep in touch!
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checkma8
stunning work Ushna
Ushna Sardar replied
thanks checma!
glad you liked!
it means a lot!
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Wanda Raines
Very beautiful words.
Ushna Sardar replied
thanks onedas!
it means a lot hunnie!
stay in touch!
huggles
xoxox
GailD
Just brilliant Ushna. Goes so well with the photo.
Ushna Sardar replied
thanks Gaila! glad you liked hunnie!
keep reading and stay in touch!
huggles
xoxox
barnsis
I was driving home today and the clouds were building ahead of me. Then I smelled the rain before it even started. Love the smell, nothing like it.. Excellent work.
Ushna Sardar replied
thank you so much byron my friend!
I smelled that too! love that!
appreciate your precious comments!
huggles my friend!
Juni
love it, darling – very well done!
Ushna Sardar replied
thanks Juni!
glad you liked hunnie!
it means a lot!
huggles xoxoxox
Rocketchook
Love the rain , love love , love your writing.
Ushna Sardar replied
love the rain too Aaron!
glad you liked! thank you so much! it means a lot!
huggles my friend!
Antanas
great work
Ushna Sardar replied
thanks Antanas! huggles
DanaMS
So very beautiful Ushna! I love rain… :)