Dance With Me

I led a solitary life
my nerves were in shreds
before we met
I closed my eyes and found myself on the secluded beach
I couldn’t enjoys long solitary walk
without you!

I looked so forlorn, standing there in the rain
your hand met mines
I gazed at you in amazement
you met my gaze without flinching
It seems our eyes met across the crowded room
you snuggled your head onto my shoulder
you snuggled closer
so..
wont you dance with me
come close
and
dance with me!!!!

  • linaji

    linaji

    WOW ! you two are great together..just beautiful!

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thanks lina!
    glad you liked hunnie! :)

    huggles

  • Sally Omar

    Sally Omar

    Ushna & Butchart, You both ROCK!!!! amazing collaboration…Sally xxoo

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thank you so much sweet Sal!
    glad you liked hunnie!
    huggles

  • Sally Omar

    Sally Omar

    Ushna & Butchart, You both ROCK!!!! amazing collaboration…Sally xxoo

  • Prasad

    Prasad

    Fantastic work.

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thanks Prasad my friend! :)

    huggles

  • Tom Broderick IPA

    Tom Broderick IPA

    ok i will dance with you. tom

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thanks tom! :)

    could you believe that I can’t dance!!! :O
    huggles my friend!

  • Anthony Hedger

    Anthony Hedger

    wonderful words and beautiful art

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    long time Anthony!!
    good to hear from you my friend!
    thanks you so much! glad you liked!
    huggles

  • kjgordon

    kjgordon

    may I have the next dance wahini

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    I can’t dance! :(
    huggles

  • barnsis

    barnsis

    Beautiful abstract, great words with a great feel.

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thank you so much byron!
    glad you liked!
    huggles

  • kjgordon

    kjgordon

    then we can sit the next one out…....

  • Gregory John O'Flaherty

    Gregory John O...

    OK ,just write me down for the next one …..... Thanks Ushna

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thanks Greg!
    huggles

  • olawunmi

    olawunmi

    Well done Ushna…takes the mind to places…

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thanks Summayyah!
    huggles
    xoxox

  • Snoboardnlife

    Snoboardnlife

    Beautiful Ushna

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thanks Snoboardnlife!

  • devotee1

    devotee1

    Words and image go together perfectly. I think I will just sit here and watch the surf. Of course I have something to write with just in case. Excellent collaboration!

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thanks Joe! glad you liked my friend!
    appreciate your comments!
    huggles

  • nkbellani

    nkbellani

    Love the colors of the poem and the artwork.

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thanks N Kumar my friend!
    glad u liked!
    huggles

  • suzanneran

    suzanneran

    Ushna, loved the sentiment here, well done again.

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thanks sweetie Suz!
    glad you liked hunnie!
    huggles
    xoxoxox

  • butchart

    butchart

    beautiful interpretation Dear Ushna…. thank you so very much….. your written words are always paintings of their own…....... you are gifted…....................b

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thank you so much b! you are such a sweetheart friend! loved that art work!
    glad you liked!
    huggles

  • Snoboardnlife

    Snoboardnlife

    You’re welcome!

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