Dance With Me

Author: Ushna Sardar
Word Count: 107
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I led a solitary life
my nerves were in shreds
before we met
I closed my eyes and found myself on the secluded beach
I couldn’t enjoys long solitary walk
without you!

I looked so forlorn, standing there in the rain
your hand met mines
I gazed at you in amazement
you met my gaze without flinching
It seems our eyes met across the crowded room
you snuggled your head onto my shoulder
you snuggled closer
so..
wont you dance with me
come close
and
dance with me!!!!

Dance With Me

Dance With Me its awesome butchart my friend!
loved it!!!

Dance With Me belongs to the following groups:

"Stream Crossings", All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Art from the Workplace, Art Inspired by Dreams, Beach Art, Bits and Pieces , Bubblettes, Cards: Best of Your Best, Collaboral Damage, End Times, Experimental, Happy Haven, Lighthouses, Live, Love, Dream, Musical Art, Rain Drops, Safe Haven, Self as Other, The Beginners' Corner, The Sensual Word, The Two Of Us and WMG

linaji, 4 months ago

WOW ! you two are great together..just beautiful!
Sally Omar, 4 months ago

Ushna & Butchart, You both ROCK!!!! amazing collaboration…Sally xxoo
Sally Omar, 4 months ago

Ushna & Butchart, You both ROCK!!!! amazing collaboration…Sally xxoo
Prasad, 4 months ago

Fantastic work.
Tom Broderick IPA, 4 months ago

ok i will dance with you. tom
Ushna Sardar in reply to linaji’s comment, 4 months ago

thanks lina!
glad you liked hunnie! :)

huggles
Ushna Sardar in reply to Sally Omar’s comment, 4 months ago

thank you so much sweet Sal!
glad you liked hunnie!
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Ushna Sardar in reply to Prasad’s comment, 4 months ago

thanks Prasad my friend! :)

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Ushna Sardar in reply to Tom Broderick IPA’s comment, 4 months ago

thanks tom! :)

could you believe that I can’t dance!!! :O
huggles my friend!
Anthony Hedger, 4 months ago

wonderful words and beautiful art
Ushna Sardar in reply to Anthony Hedger’s comment, 4 months ago

long time Anthony!!
good to hear from you my friend!
thanks you so much! glad you liked!
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kjgordon, 4 months ago

may I have the next dance wahini
barnsis, 4 months ago

Beautiful abstract, great words with a great feel.
Ushna Sardar in reply to kjgordon’s comment, 4 months ago

I can’t dance! :(
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Ushna Sardar in reply to barnsis’s comment, 4 months ago

thank you so much byron!
glad you liked!
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kjgordon, 4 months ago

then we can sit the next one out…....
Gregory John O..., 4 months ago

OK ,just write me down for the next one …..... Thanks Ushna
Ushna Sardar in reply to Gregory John O'Flaherty’s comment, 4 months ago

thanks Greg!
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Summayyah Sadi..., 4 months ago

Well done Ushna…takes the mind to places…
Snoboardnlife, 4 months ago

Beautiful Ushna
devotee1, 4 months ago

Words and image go together perfectly. I think I will just sit here and watch the surf. Of course I have something to write with just in case. Excellent collaboration!
N Kumar Bellani, 4 months ago

Love the colors of the poem and the artwork.
Suzanne Randles, 4 months ago

Ushna, loved the sentiment here, well done again.
butchart, 3 months ago

beautiful interpretation Dear Ushna…. thank you so very much….. your written words are always paintings of their own…....... you are gifted…....................b
Ushna Sardar in reply to Summayyah Sadiq-Ojibara’s comment, 3 months ago

thanks Summayyah!
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xoxox
Ushna Sardar in reply to Snoboardnlife’s comment, 3 months ago

thanks Snoboardnlife!
Ushna Sardar in reply to devotee1’s comment, 3 months ago

thanks Joe! glad you liked my friend!
appreciate your comments!
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Snoboardnlife, 3 months ago

You’re welcome!
Ushna Sardar in reply to N Kumar Bellani’s comment, 3 months ago

thanks N Kumar my friend!
glad u liked!
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Ushna Sardar in reply to Suzanne Randles’s comment, 3 months ago

thanks sweetie Suz!
glad you liked hunnie!
huggles
xoxoxox
Ushna Sardar in reply to butchart’s comment, 3 months ago

thank you so much b! you are such a sweetheart friend! loved that art work!
glad you liked!
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