SURREALISM

You were in the heart
you were in the soul
you were in the goal
tore a hole in my heart
I was holding my goals
didn’t see where I made mistake
why goes all wrong!
won’t blame you
won’t blame me
you were not wrong
neither me
torn in two, why the blame at you
Surreal image
a very strange dream of love
more like a dream than reality
surreal love
images mixed together in a strange way
the love was the surreal mix of fact and fantasy
like we have not been loving each other
like we never met
like we never dreamed

  • JaneAParis

    JaneAParis

    This is very nice Ushna. You always do such an excellent job of writing about love. I enjoy your work very much. Your friend, Smiles from Jane:-)

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thank you so much sweet Jane! so nice of you hunnie!
    it means a lot!
    appreciate your precious comments!
    huggles xoxox

  • Franka  Zaumseil

    Franka Zaumseil

    well done, ushna – really like that! you paint a lovely picture with your words…

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thank you so much Juni! it means a lot hunnie!
    thank for your support!
    huggles
    xoxox

  • Anthony Hedger

    Anthony Hedger

    beautiful writing

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thank you so much Athony my friend :)
    huggles

  • Nvision Ink

    Nvision Ink

    Very nicely done Ushna! I think it fits perfectly with image. Without even knowing what the image looks like. I would picture my picture…If that makes sense.

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thank you so much Neil!
    glad you liked! :)
    I tried to put up image with that piece but it doesn’t work! I will try again Neil!
    Please try to put that picture .. if you could!
    It seems incomplete without image!
    huggles

  • pixie3

    pixie3

    I love your writing, You have an amazing talent and it is always so deep. Awesome.

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thank you so much pixie!
    it means a lot hunnie!
    glad you liked!
    keep in touch ..
    huggles xox

  • Metamorphosis

    Metamorphosis

    very beautifully written Ushna…

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thank you so much Bernadette!
    glad you liked! appreciate your precious comments!
    huggles xox

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  • barnsis

    barnsis

    Ushna love is where you find it, some of us just look to hard and then fail to find love because we expect it to be like we wish it was not what it is, Like this one a lot.

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    Well said! I agreed!
    appreciate your precious comments!
    thank you so much byron my friend! huggles

  • devotee1

    devotee1

    Great collaboration! Words and image work perfectly together.
    “…Surreal image
    a very strange dream of love…” I especially like these lines. Often what is and what we would like instead are in conflict.

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thank you so much devotee my friend!
    you are such a sweetheart friend!
    appreciate your precious comments!
    it means a lot!
    huggles

  • Aritheeagle

    Aritheeagle

    a reality shake for sure….. so well written Ushna Sardar!

    ~ Ari

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thank you so much Ari! glad you liked! :)
    appreciate your precious comments!
    huggles

  • KBelleau

    KBelleau

    Wonderful collaboration….

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thanks Krish my friend! it means a lot!
    huggles

  • Sally Omar

    Sally Omar

    Ushna, You and Neil are marvelous together..this is beautiful..both words and art..Sally xxoo

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thank you so much Sally!
    glad you liked hunnie! xox
    huggles

  • Antanas

    Antanas

    very beautifully written

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thank you so much Antanas my friend :)

  • Silvia Manuela

    Silvia Manuela

    Beautiful writing Ushna.

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thank you so much Silvia hunnie!
    glad you liked! xoxox
    huggles

  • olawunmi

    olawunmi

    Well done…Ushna, always with your special style

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thank you so much sweet Summayyah!
    glad you liked hunnie!
    appreciate your precious comments!
    huggles
    xoxox

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