A raging storm out on an empty sea
heart was now a raging inferno
Don’t know if your claim still stay the same
that you love me
Cause I’m seeing that you want to neglect
An important part of the story
and you forgot!
forgot that you said that love will still remain
“deep down I love”
Air whispers, you said that last we met
air still knows how you love me
it was the cherish to love
a moment that I can’t forget
and the moment maybe you forgot!
Just don’t know if it’s love
just don’t understand your love
I’m trying to read your eyes
you possessed, you love me
and you can read me
I’m wondering how you said that
cause there’s no bridge I could find
your heart to my heart
Just don’t know why I’m thinking all that
Why I’m holding dreams in my hands
why eyes keep waiting…
if you have gone and I’m lonely castway!
POSSESSED
It’s another collabration with Neil Johnson!
I found Neil’s art “POSSESSED” awesome!
Please check out Neil Johnson’s art on RB!
thank you Neil
Tom Broderick, 2 months ago
very nice. tom
Ushna Sardar in reply to Tom Broderick’s comment, 2 months ago
thank you so much tom! :)
Aritheeagle, 2 months ago
Well written – sad in many ways!
Nice
~Ari
Tom Broderick, 2 months ago
;-)
Ushna Sardar in reply to Aritheeagle’s comment, 2 months ago
thank you so much Ari!
it means a lot!
huggles
Ushna Sardar in reply to Tom Broderick’s comment, 2 months ago
:)
Natalie Broome, 2 months ago
Sad and moving and written with much emotion
Ushna Sardar in reply to Natalie Broome’s comment, 2 months ago
thank you so much Natalie!
glad you liked!
appreciate your precious comments!
keep reading and keep in touch! :)
huggles
Naylor, 2 months ago
WOW …. I am choked up…. your words touch me deeply as they always do , but this one really hits home….. (((((((hug))))))))
Ushna Sardar in reply to Naylor’s comment, 2 months ago
thank you so much Naylor!
it means a lot!
glad you liked .. appreciate your precious comments!
((((((Huggles)))))))
beast, 2 months ago
beautifully haunting poem usha, excellent :-)
linaji, 2 months ago
the collaboration with you two is Phenomenal!! great work Ushna!
Ushna Sardar in reply to beast’s comment, 2 months ago
thanks beast my friend!
it means a lot! huggles
Ushna Sardar in reply to linaji’s comment, 2 months ago
thank you so much lina my friend!
glad you liked!
appreciate your precious comments!
huggles xox
wendyL, 2 months ago
beautifully done UShna, your words have such power behind them!
Ushna Sardar in reply to wendyL’s comment, 2 months ago
thank you so much wendy my friend!
it means a lot!
huggles
Anthony Hedger, 2 months ago
Beautiful, Beautiful, Beautiful. Lovely words fantastic photo a great collabration well done to you both
devotee1, 2 months ago
Love can transform. Hang in there, Ushna. Alive in your heart, if it is not right you will attract right. Love is your personal Sun. Great stuff, Neil! Congradulations.
TeriLee, 2 months ago
Fantastic work…..really great writing :)
Sally Omar, 2 months ago
Ushna & Neil…this is a marvelous collaboration..I love it…you both ROCK!!!!!! SAlly xxoo
Ushna Sardar in reply to Anthony Hedger’s comment, 2 months ago
thank you so much Anthony my friend!
appreciate your precious comments! Huggles
Ushna Sardar in reply to devotee1’s comment, 2 months ago
well said devotee!
absolutely true!!
I like how you describe .. “love is your personal sun!”
thank you so much devotee!
appreciate your precious comments my friend!
Ushna Sardar in reply to TeriLee’s comment, 2 months ago
thank you so much Terolee!
it means a lot!
appreciate your precious comments hunnie! I read your writing and liked so much! you got spark in your writing! love it!
keep reading and keep in touch! :)
Huggles
Ushna Sardar in reply to Sally Omar’s comment, 2 months ago
thank you so much Sally! you are such a sweetheart friend!
appreciate your precious comments sweet Sally!
huggles my friend! :)
xoxoxo
JaneAParis, 2 months ago
‘cause there’s no bridge I could find
your heart to my heart
Just don’t know why I’m thinking all that
Why I’m holding dreams in my hands’, WONDERFUL EMOTIONAL THOUGHTFUL WORDS USHNA, THIS REALLY TOUCHES MY HEART. SMILES FROM JANE:-)
Ushna Sardar in reply to JaneAParis’s comment, 2 months ago
thank you so much sweet Jane! you are such a sweetheart!
appreciate your precious comments!
huggles my friend! xoxoxox
barnsis, 2 months ago
“Why I’m holding dreams in my hands” seems that you always have words that arouse thoughts or remembrances to my mind.
Ushna Sardar in reply to barnsis’s comment, 2 months ago
thank you so much byron! you’re such a sweetheart friend!
it means a lot! huggles
Antanas, 2 months ago
beautiful
Ushna Sardar in reply to Antanas’s comment, 2 months ago
thanks Antanas!
Metamorphosis, 2 months ago
amazingly written Ushna.. you can feel the longing and the disbelief ‘holding dreams in my hands’... just beautiful… & Neils’ artwork is great!
Ushna Sardar in reply to Metamorphosis’s comment, 2 months ago
thank you so much sweet friend! :)
glad you liked! huggles xoxo
josieandreou, 2 months ago
Im so fixed! Cause its something that I can really relate to. Thanks again! Your Brill!xxxxxx