So many walls around me
I couldn’t find the way to escape
where I find the trapdoor
between the walls
I won’t crawl more on my knees
It seems Ive been demolished
and there’s no way
I hate that demolition
I want to get out of this
maybe I could condemn that situation
I calculate to the whole situation
I tried to retrospective
I tried to retaliate
relinquish control!!
I won’t live helpless like that
world divided in the many ideologies
where I find myself
I don’t know where I stand
I couldn’t see the point of my living in this world
there’s no life
if I can’t think what I want to think
there’s no freedom if I couldn’t break that walls
I tried and I have broken many walls made by bogus ideology
I tried but I couldn’t break all
there’s still many walls stay the same
and I’m keep crawling like a sick mind
I’m restless though but I won’t quit
I would like to keep trying
see if I could break that walls
or it remains the same!

RESURRECTION- RELINQUISH CONTROL
It’s another collabration with a talented artist Neil Johnson!
I saw the art name called ESCAPE and tried to relate some thoughts!
Please check out Neil Johnson’s awesome art work on RB!
Thank you Neil! :)
Patricia Anne ..., 3 months ago
It’s Lovely
Ushna Sardar in reply to Patricia Anne McCarty’s comment, 3 months ago
thank you so much Patricia! it means a lot! huggles xoxo
Anthony Hedger, 3 months ago
A prison, a claustrophobic sensation, the need to escape. Do we all at some point in our short lives feel this. Is this what they call ‘Mid Life Crises’? Who knows who cares we just live for the day and get out of any hole we fall into and move on. Fantastic writing my dear. Well done to both of you again.
Ushna Sardar in reply to Anthony Hedger’s comment, 3 months ago
Well said Anthony my friend!
I agreed! we all are prisoner in this world and world divided into many idiologies! and we just don’t know where to go! or where we stand!
thank you so much for sharing brief and deep thoughts!
appreciate your precious comments!
Sally Omar, 3 months ago
Ushna & Neil, Absolutely AWESOME!!!!!! Sally xxoo
devotee1, 3 months ago
”...I’m restless though but I won’t quit…” That’s a good reminder for all of us. Thank you, Ushna & Neil.
Ushna Sardar in reply to devotee1’s comment, 3 months ago
thank you so much devotee!
it means a lot!
keep reading and keep in touch! huggles
Ushna Sardar in reply to Sally Omar’s comment, 3 months ago
thank you so much Sally!
appreciate your precious comments!
Metamorphosis, 3 months ago
awesome statement Ushna & brilliant arwork Neil!
Ushna Sardar in reply to Metamorphosis’s comment, 3 months ago
thank you so much Metamorphosis!
glad you liked!
appreciate your precious comments!
huggles
Riyllan, 3 months ago
Fantastic!
barnsis, 3 months ago
“Ideology” Interesting word, your idea or mine? As my mom said. ” I might not be right but I am never wrong” Each of us is entitled to our own ideology but we are not entitled to impose ours on yours.
Ushna Sardar in reply to barnsis’s comment, 3 months ago
well said byron! what a beautiful words you’ve spoken! I agreed .. you really can’t impose your ideology other! as your mum said “I might not be right but I’m never wrong!”
we leave space for other person too .. he and his ideology also can be right .. why we think only we are right and other are wrong! it makes issue, starts conflicts! and conflict ain’t good!! it should be resolve soon!
thanks for sharing nice thoughts & experiences as you always do byron! pay my best regards to your mum!
appreciate your precious comments my friend! Huggles
Ushna Sardar in reply to Riyllan’s comment, 3 months ago
thank you so much Riyllan!
keep in touch!
Riyllan, 3 months ago
Will do.. :-)
Ushna Sardar in reply to Riyllan’s comment, 3 months ago
good to hear :)