I wanted to carry your worn disillusion
I wanted to keep walking with your shadow
I’ve been collecting all my broken dreams
wanted to show you once
I keep the every tear on my palm
I calculate days and night
I measure the distance
your heart to my heart
remoteness that could never end
your eyes to my eyes
tears ..
that we never shared
time have been unfair
truth have been untold
I scrambled memories
I won’t scupper his chances
It seems I’m the coin in your heart’s fountain
you’ve thrown and forgot
I’ve been lost and won’t remind you
maybe some moment that holds talisman
moment that get close us
I’m counting til it happens
your love is here
it remains forever
whether you’re around or not
your love wrapped me warm in the cold nights
your whisper is still alive in the air
where you hold me tight
I’m still feeling your sight at me
stillness speaks
I’m still hearing ..
every phrase you’ve barely spoken
I remembered all you’ve never said
I’m listening all you wanted to say ever
there’s many shadow
many lines
I’m trying to fix up the link between hearts again
there’s many circle
couldn’t get the clue what’s the right circle
my pathetic confusion
Kept me from saying to anything
but I’m trying to draw lines on the forgotten shore
depicting love
trying to say that I never said before
don’t know how things come up
but just wanted to say little
maybe you won’t see those lines
or maybe waves wash them off
maybe not …
who knows ..
SCUPPER-WRAPPED LOVE
NIGELNASH IS A AWESOME ARTIST AND IT’S MY FIRST COLLABRATION WITH HIM THAT I REALLY ENJOYED! PLEASE CHECK OUT NIGEL’S WORK ON RB!
THANK YOU SO MUCH NIGEL! :)
Snoboardnlife, 3 months ago
Great collaboration!
Sally Omar, 3 months ago
Usha, Brillant collaboration…both words and art…Sally xxoo
Aritheeagle, 3 months ago
Ahhhh …. the winning verse…..
“maybe you won’t see those lines
or maybe waves wash them off
maybe not …
who knows ..”
So well ldone….. thank you !
~Ari
liesbeth, 3 months ago
wonderfull writing, i also like that verse the most. amazing how lines can give you such an inspiration, but then again the image is more then just lines…
Anthony Hedger, 3 months ago
fantastic writing and wonderful art work
nigelnash, 3 months ago
THANKS SO MUCH USHNA ! TRULY WONDERFUL WRITING ! X X X X
Ushna Sardar in reply to Snoboardnlife’s comment, 3 months ago
thank you so much Snoboardnlife!
it means a lot!
appreciate your precious comments!
huggles
Ushna Sardar in reply to Sally Omar’s comment, 3 months ago
thank you so much Sally!
glad you liked!
appreciate your precious comments!
huggles xox
Ushna Sardar in reply to Aritheeagle’s comment, 3 months ago
thank you so much Ari my friend!
glad you liked!
appreciate your precious comments!
so nice of you!
huggles
Ushna Sardar in reply to liesbeth’s comment, 3 months ago
thank you so much liesbeth! glad you liked my friend!
it means a lot!
appreciate your precious comments! xox
keep reading and keep in touch!
huggles
Ushna Sardar in reply to Anthony Hedger’s comment, 3 months ago
thank you so much Anthony my friend!
glad you liked! it means a lot! :)
appreciate your precious comments!
huggles my friend!
Ushna Sardar in reply to nigelnash’s comment, 3 months ago
your welcome nigel!
glad you liked! it means a lot!
thank you so much!
huggles my friend
KEITH R. WILL..., 3 months ago
excellent ushna
mtda, 3 months ago
i love it too many great lines to repeat them all here wonderful expression
Ushna Sardar in reply to KEITH R. WILLIAMS’s comment, 3 months ago
thank you so much Keith my friend!
it means a lot!
huggles
Ushna Sardar in reply to mtda’s comment, 3 months ago
thank you so much mtda!
glad you liked! :)
appreciate your precious comments!
it means a lot!
huggles
Ushna Sardar in reply to mtda’s comment, 3 months ago
thanks for fav mtda! so nice od you! *:):)
barnsis, 3 months ago
Heart felt expressions, Great image by nigelnash.
devotee1, 3 months ago
Just beautiful progression of sentiment! You give us rare insight into your own life and struggles, and by doing so, help light the way for us as well. Thank you. Love this: ”...It seems I’m the coin in your heart’s fountain
you’ve thrown and forgot…” Great lines!
Juni, 3 months ago
love that, well done, ushna. great collaboration!
Ushna Sardar in reply to barnsis’s comment, 3 months ago
thank you so much byron!
glad you liked! it means a lot!
appreciate your precious comments!
huggles
Ushna Sardar in reply to devotee1’s comment, 3 months ago
thank you so much devotee!
glad you liked!
it means a lot!
appreciate your precious comments!
huggles my friend!
Ushna Sardar in reply to Juni’s comment, 3 months ago
thank you so much sweet Juni!
glad you liked!
it means a lot!
appreciate your precious comments! keep reading and keep in touch!
huggles
wendyL, 3 months ago
Another brilliant piece by you with another brilliant artist!!!! He is awesome, and so are you !
Ushna Sardar in reply to wendyL’s comment, 3 months ago
you are such a sweetheart wendy!
thank you so much sweet wendy so are you!
appreciate your precious comments my friend!
wendyL, 3 months ago
well deserved…I wouldn’t tell you, if I didn’t believe it! you are so welcome!
Ushna Sardar in reply to wendyL’s comment, 3 months ago
so nice of you my friend! xox
Metamorphosis, 3 months ago
absolutely awesome Ushna! so many emotions &images within the writing… & the artwork wow!
Ushna Sardar in reply to Metamorphosis’s comment, 3 months ago
thank you so much Metamorphosis!
glad you liked my friend! :)
appreciate your precious comments! huggles
Nicole Ryan, 3 months ago
this is fabulous
It seems I’m the coin in your heart’s fountain
you’ve thrown and forgot
beautiful work xx
linaji, 3 months ago
wow, I am so glad to know you.. what wonderful imagery and flow.. the art work amazes me too..
Ushna Sardar in reply to Nicole Ryan’s comment, 3 months ago
thank you so much Nicole!
it means a lot! xox
appreciate your precious comments hunnie!
huggles
Ushna Sardar in reply to linaji’s comment, 3 months ago
so nice of you linaji!
thank you so much! it means a lot!
appreciate your comments! keep reading and keep in touch! huggles
beast, 3 months ago
beautiful ushna, well done to both of you
Ushna Sardar in reply to beast’s comment, 3 months ago
thank you so much beast! it means a lot!
appreciate your precious comments!
keep reading and keep in touch .. huggles
josieandreou, 2 months ago
I LOVE IT! Nice work!
Ushna Sardar in reply to josieandreou’s comment, 2 months ago
thank you so much hunnie!
especially for fav!
huggles xoxox