My eyes are seeing the situation that I don’t understand
seeing the scenes that depicted the visual I couldn’t get
It’s seem I’ve broken link
from a heart to mind
from a body to soul
from a thought to senses
Yeah the link has broken!
all I’m seeing is maybe an illusion
all colours stay the same in the darkness
The black illusion
sense has failed
heart is quiet
mind doesn’t say anything
soul is empty
blank spaces
empty places
I don’t know what to put up to filled the void
what that element could be
does it love?
does it greed?
doest it hate
does it peace
I asked to the mind and found just a silent
all I’m seeing is just black
the black Illusion siege to my soul
unprecedented situation
I’ve been trying to unravelled
unpalatable fact
unparalleled success
I’ve been trying to sort of them
all my life ..
I’ve been trying to get out of this
I’ve been trying to find a trapdoor
I’ve been finding the path to walk on
I titivated to the whole situation
I’ve been looking for the talisman
but found the chaos within my heart and mind
but now I found that heart is sceptic
mind can’t be wise forever
if I want to get rid of the black illusion
I must compile to my scattered will
nigelnash, 3 months ago
I must compile to my scattered will –
-– a great saying and great words ! thank you ! we must do a cllaboration !Dave Sandersfeld, 3 months ago
Lao Tzu, a chinese philosopher once wrote “Muddy water in bowl; let it stand quietly & it will clear!
Ushna Sardar in reply to nigelnash’s comment, 3 months ago
thank you so much nigel!
glad you liked! it means a lot!
yeah sure nigel! I would love to collab! :)
you are a talented artist so it would be great!
appreciate your precious comments!
keep reading and keep in touch!
huggles
Aritheeagle, 3 months ago
“I’ve been looking for the talisman
but found the chaos within my heart and mind”
Sort of sums up all our journeys very well…. where we search and search for that ideal…. that LOTTO # which will turn our lives around and we blame everybody else but ourselves for our lack of enthusiasm and willingness to clear the cobwebs inside us.
Good stuff here Ushna….
Ushna Sardar in reply to Dave Sandersfeld’s comment, 3 months ago
Well said Dave!
your knowledge is great and perception very clear about things!
appreciate your precious comments Dave it means a lot!
huggles my intellectual friend!
Ushna Sardar in reply to Aritheeagle’s comment, 3 months ago
thank you so much Ari my friend!
well said! thanks for sharing nice thought!
appreciate your precious comments!
it means a lot! huggles my friend!
keep reading and keep in touch!
pixie3, 3 months ago
so very true, I must say. You write beautifully.
Ushna Sardar in reply to pixie3’s comment, 3 months ago
thank you so much pixie!
it means a lot!
appreciate your precious comments! so nice of you!
keep reading and keep in touch!
huggles xox
Antanas, 3 months ago
great work
Ushna Sardar in reply to Antanas’s comment, 3 months ago
thank you so much Antanas!
SMiXX, 3 months ago
great writting Ushna
Ushna Sardar in reply to SMiXX’s comment, 3 months ago
thank you so much SMiXX!
it means a lot!
glad you liked.. appreciate your precious comments!
keep reading ..
huggles
mtda, 3 months ago
All colours stay the same in the darkness
what a beautiful flow to this, pulled me in completely. Excellent work.
Ushna Sardar in reply to mtda’s comment, 3 months ago
thank you so much mtda! and congratulations to got published into 5th issue of WM! well you deserve! glad to see you there! :)
appreciate your precious comments! it means a lot!
huggles
wendyL, 3 months ago
Ushna, you are truly a gifted and unbelievable writer…Your words are so powerful and deep..
Ushna Sardar in reply to wendyL’s comment, 3 months ago
thank you so much wendy! you are such a sweetheart! *:):) xox
thanks for kind words wndy my friend! it means a lot!
glad you liked hunnie! appreciate your precious comments!
especially for fav! huggles
barnsis, 3 months ago
Beautifully written, Ever been in a cave and turned off the light, total black, I guess that would be what it is like for those whose heart and mind are in the dark. Total black, freightening with a weight you can feel.
wendyL, 3 months ago
you are so welcome!!!!!
Anthony Hedger, 3 months ago
wonderful words beautiful again my dear
Ushna Sardar in reply to barnsis’s comment, 3 months ago
thank you so much byron!
glad you liked my intellectual friend!
thanks for sharing thoughts
appreciate your precious comments!
huggles
Ushna Sardar in reply to wendyL’s comment, 3 months ago
so sweet of you wendy! xox
Ushna Sardar in reply to Anthony Hedger’s comment, 3 months ago
thank you so much Anthony my friend! so nice of you!
glad you liked!
appreciate your precious comments!
huggles my nice friend! :)