9/11

Ushna Sardar
Author: Ushna Sardar
Word Count: 1344
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“I was an angel!”
“were you?”
“Yeah I was!”
“then?”
“long story!”
“tell me all”
“you seem very curious!”
“yeah, I’m”
“I know”
“what?”
“all human are…”
“what they are?”
“curious!!”
“yeah”
“you conceded cause you’re a human, curiosity is the main factor in human’s blood”
“yeah I conceded!”
“what you think of me?”
“I’m curious, just want to know”
“what do you want to know?”
“all about you”
“he he”
“I’m serious”
“I told you that I was an angel!”
“yeah?”
“yeah”
“then..?”
“I’ve been stranding on the World Trad Centre’s roof while it has collapsed”
“Ah”
“Stop kidding, you’re just trying to make me fool”
“No, I won’t”
“then”
“I fell down while the building collapsed and I found I changed into human.
I had undergone an amazing metamorphosis from an angel to a human”

“ain’t it funny”
“so you say”
“I do say” (smiling)
“I saw, I got hurt bad while I fell. it was bleeding from my wounds. I saw blood came out from my body first! never think if I had blood in my vein before”
“Huh”
“Do you think I’m a fool?”
“No!”
“then why you’re trying to make me!”
“if you don’t believe so”
“I won’t believe”
“Look at my wounds, they are still the same”
“yeah I can see blood”
“so why couldn’t you believe”
“you aren’t human”
“I’m now”
“oh come on”
“you meant to say, I wasn’t an angel?”
“I don’t know! you lost me”
“look that’s blood! red blood!”
“but how you got hurt?”
*
“Aw it bleeds, it ain’t good! you need cure. why don’t you tell me”
“you’re asking a lot”
“so?”
“I won’t say”
“Okay don”t say, but let me cure”
“Okay!”
“what you have been doing?”
“not a lot, i won a tracksuit last night off a radio show under the pretense that i wear it on the Jeremy kyle show in the audience he he”
“You’re kidding”
“No!”
“stop kidding”
“HUH”
“so you really won?”
“yeah”* (smiling)
“congratulations”
“which is a talk show with fucked up inbred guests being manipulated on TV by a snivelling little know it all ..so should be fun”
“cool”
“what that show called”
“Do you think I’m lying?”
“No, not at all .. just little curious”
“you would have some coffee?”
“Are you scared?”
“no I’m not! just ..”
“yeah I understand!”
“you are understanding!”
“the Jeremy kyle show”
“Oh OK”
“don’t you still believe?”
“you said you fell down from the World Trad Center’s building while it has collapsed so how come you’re in England then”

“I’m travelling to the whole world and trying to discover and sort out things”

“which kind of things?”

“he he! I’m not supposed to say, I know you would not believe”
“Rath I do!”
“It seems you don’t”
“you went to that show?”
“no, I’ve got to be in the audience wearing the tracksuit”
“Oh okay”
“thought you became a celebrity”
“he he”
“it could be though”
“he he I’d rather die”
“It would be nice! don’t you like fame?”
“I’d like to be known amongst certain circles for my music yeah”
“You like music? I meant you into music?”
“I generally despise celebrities
vain, talentless, soulless, sell-out corporate little hacks”
“true talent doesn’t need publicity”
“I mean sometimes it does, sometimes it deserves it. but the likes of say Jolly Croucher. she is just a talentless greedy media whore and she is of no value to society whatsoever she merely invades our collect unconscious with her banal existence”
“yeah I agreed”
“she is one of Satan’s helpers”
“she is a woman and u should respect her, whether she is good or not, whether you like her or not”

“she is scum and she needs a good kick up the arse, I’d quite happily be the one to do it”
“you sound nice, I think, we should be nice to each other”

“I’d pin her down on the ground and sit on top of her and say listen up bitch! people are dying all over the world. they have no food or water or clothes or prospects. they have no chance in life and you have the audacity to walk around in a £10,000 dress. you are scum of the highest level”

“you seem annoyed to the system”
“you seem very sensitive and humanitarian”
“and I’d say its time you realised what is happening in the world and that being worth £200 million is not acceptable anymore
I’d spit to her”

“Oh’ not nice!”

“some things aren’t nice, can you imagine if I did that it would make the news and more people would hear the message and more people would be affected by it and it would have a more positive effect”

“You have to be a nice and optimistic”
“the affect they have on the world is massive though. especially to children which is their target audience
a 5 year old Jolly Croucher’s fan will want to wear fashionable clothes and be vain and greedy like Jolly, her idol. and so the whole world suffer and more people become hypnotized under the spell to consume”

“I see”
“it’s all government planned

its all planned, its quite obvious when you look out for it”
“good to hear you’re a liberal soul and at least you’re thinking of it”

“do you think the governments really care for the people?”

“yeah sort of”

“America could feed the third world with the amount they spend on nuclear weapons. yet they don’t?!”

“It’s actually bad politics, it sees and holds own interest. Interest of state comes first. it’s just hunger to gain more, just a greed!”

“the simple fact is, the resources and money is there to help the third world. but they spend it on weapons. they do not care for us, and that’s a fact”

“yeah it seems!”

“we are a number, a statistic and all part of their plan. which is to create a consumer plantation, that’s why adverts make us feel inadequate. its called aspirational TV”
“yeah right


we aspire to be like the people on TV, in magazines, in adverts. they dazzle us with these false reality of perfection which life just never matches up to, there are things we can do. i would happily spit on Jolly face if it spread the message. the power is in the people. the people are just way too hypnotized to see whats happening”

“cause every government’s similar .. play the same politics! actually “interest” never change.. just face changes and the politics is the same!

“most people that is”
“yeah”
“without us there is no government, but I know what you mean the anti-war marches before Iraq were massive. millions of people world-wide, they didn’t listen because there are global motives. we didn’t go to war to find W.M.D, that was a lie. we didn’t go to find Saddam, that’s a lie!”

“I hate that dirty politics and hate wars! but we just can’t stop wars, why wars begin?

“it’s just country’s personal “interest”
“I know, but the more people with a voice the better. and nothing will ever change if everyone says “well we cant do anything about it”

“why one country attack on other? just of some purpose”
“oh I gotta go, rain have stopped now. thanks!”
“would you meet again?”
(he smiles and walked away)
(I saw, there was no any blood on the sofa. there was no evidence of his existence! even there was no another cup of coffee! I saw only a cup that I caught in my hand!)

  • Metamorphosis

    Metamorphosis, 3 months ago

    very interesting Ushna & powerful messages in your writing….

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar in reply to Metamorphosis’s comment, 3 months ago

    thank you so much Metamorphosis!
    glad you liked!
    appreciate your precious comments! huggles

  • Tom Broderick

    Tom Broderick, 3 months ago

    that was good ushna. tom

  • wynity2

    wynity2, 3 months ago

    Wow, Ushna, this is so powerful!! Thank you!!!

  • Anthony Hedger

    Anthony Hedger, 3 months ago

    great writing

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar in reply to Tom Broderick’s comment, 3 months ago

    thank you so much tom my friend! :)

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar in reply to wynity2’s comment, 3 months ago

    hey wynity! :)
    long time my friend! good to see you :)
    thank you so much for reading wynity! glad you liked!
    appreciate your precious comments!
    keep reading..
    huggles

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar in reply to Anthony Hedger’s comment, 3 months ago

    thank you so much Anthony my friend! :)
    appreciate your precious comments! huggles

  • KBelleau

    KBelleau, 3 months ago

    Ushna, excellent always. I agree with just about all of what you say.
    War is Control. Control is an Illusion. Media is the Wand of the Magician.
    It at times seems that we can do nothing against the monumental Greed that threatens to cover the earth. As though you can do nothing, but you are one in a growing number of people who are ready to evolve. The Greed that swamps the land is not all powerful, it is an old man behind the curtain and he is a coward.

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar in reply to KBelleau’s comment, 3 months ago

    very much true Kris! I agreed!
    your vision is clear about things .. but it takes ages to change things! it’s not really easy! you are right that control is an illusion! war is control! all we can do is just wait .. hope never ending .. so we should keep the faith!
    you are a highly mind person Kris! thanks for sharing nice and brif thoughts! appreciate your precious comments my friend! :)
    big bunny huggles

  • ladyb

    ladyb, 3 months ago

    Powerful. I like this a lot.

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar in reply to ladyb’s comment, 3 months ago

    thank you so much ladyb!
    glad you liked hunnie!
    appreciate your precious comments!
    keep reading and keep in touch! :)
    big bunny huggles

  • mtda

    mtda, 3 months ago

    excellent ideas but it is your dialogue that I love it casts a spell which really immersed me in this piece.

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar in reply to mtda’s comment, 3 months ago

    thank you so much mtda!
    appreciate your precious comments!

  • wendyL

    wendyL, 3 months ago

    You are truly a gifted and talented writer Ushna!

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar in reply to wendyL’s comment, 3 months ago

    thank you so much sweet wendy! :)
    especially for fav!
    glad you liked! appreciate your precious comments!
    keep reading and keep in touch! :)
    big bunny huggles

  • wendyL

    wendyL, 3 months ago

    Indeed I will Ushna, you are a brilliant writer!

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar in reply to wendyL’s comment, 3 months ago

    so nice of you sweety! *:):)
    thank for kind words! XOX
    thanks for your support hunnie!
    huggles

  • wendyL

    wendyL, 3 months ago

    you are so welcome….:)

  • C.C. Arshagra

    C.C. Arshagra, 3 months ago

    Excellent! The mad ranting of an Angel, no less!
    OK I’ll say it
    “9/11 was an Inside job!” Believe otherwise and you mine-as-well vote to enslave yourself!
    Consume that!
    Ooh, Ushna! Venting is contagious!

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar in reply to C.C. Arshagra’s comment, 3 months ago

    thank you so much C.C!
    appreciate your precious comments!
    keep reading and keep in touch!
    huggles

  • caitlynnn

    caitlynnn, 3 months ago

    this is wonderful.
    you have such talent at writing.
    there is no way I could convey the intensity of such a powerful message in dialogue alone like you have.
    superb, you are ace.

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar in reply to caitlynnn’s comment, 3 months ago

    thank you so much caitly!
    thanks for all kind words! that means alot!
    glad you liked! :)
    appreciate your precious comments!
    keep reading and keep in touch!
    so nice of you!
    huggles

  • devotee1

    devotee1, 3 months ago

    Poignant writing Ushna. Well-you are certainly not bashful when it comes to saying what you feel-and motivating people to think for themselves. Excellent!

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar in reply to devotee1’s comment, 3 months ago

    thank you so much devotee!
    it means a lot! glad you liked!
    appreciate your precious comments!
    keep reading and keep in touch!
    huggles my friend! :)

  • Snoboardnlife

    Snoboardnlife, 3 months ago

    Great work!

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar in reply to Snoboardnlife’s comment, 3 months ago

    thank you so much Snoboardnlife!
    it meas a lot!
    appreciate your precious comments!
    keep reading and keep in touch!

  • Snoboardnlife

    Snoboardnlife, 3 months ago

    You’re very welcome! Please tell Mishaal, that I said “Hello.”

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar in reply to Snoboardnlife’s comment, 3 months ago

    will do that Snoboardnlife!
    thanks for saying “hello” :)

  • barnsis

    barnsis, 3 months ago

    Lot of half hidden thoughts in this one. Few have seen the photos taken when the towers burned of the people who jumped instead of burning to death, their bodies falling down the outside of the building. I have actually been a candidate for state office twice so have first hand knowledge of how the system works and how corrupt it is and how hard to change it is. Yes lot of hidden thoughts and reminders of things many try to forget. Thank you

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar in reply to barnsis’s comment, 3 months ago

    thank you so much for sharing thoughts byron my friend!
    appreciate your precious comments!
    it means a lot!
    huggles

  • Dave Sandersfeld

    Dave Sandersfeld, 3 months ago

    You hit the crux of the human dilemna! military’control” or human freedom. cant do both! later Dave

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar in reply to Dave Sandersfeld’s comment, 3 months ago

    thank you so much Dave my friend!
    appreciate your precious comments!
    it means a lot! huggles

  • butchart

    butchart, 3 months ago

    just read this ushna.. funny that i wrote never ending streams yesterday.. we are pretty intuned.. wonderful work….b

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar in reply to butchart’s comment, 3 months ago

    I read that writing b! was fabulous!
    thank you so much for reading and comments b! it means a lot!
    appreciate your precious comments!

  • Damian

    Damian, 3 months ago

    An interesting stream of dialogue Ushna. I agree with you on the motives behind wars, guns, WMD and politics.

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar in reply to Damian’s comment, 3 months ago

    thank you so much Damian! it means a lot!
    appreciate your precious comments!

  • Gregory John O'Flaherty

    Gregory John O..., 19 days ago

    Nice one Ushna, very powerful. Ruffle a few feathers. Good on you

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar in reply to Gregory John O'Flaherty’s comment, 19 days ago

    thank you so much Greg! glad you liked!
    huggles my friend!

  • theyellowfury

    theyellowfury, 19 days ago

    You’ve really excelled here Ushna.
    Media keeps the rich white people scared and voting and convinced into spending their money on crap to distract them.
    30% of America’s tax money goes on “defence” 2% on education.
    I have no hesitation in saying that I think people in the East see little difference between Bush and Hitler.
    The Olympics will show something major, remember 1936.
    Keep it up, if you want any more info Bmail me and I’ll pick out ome nice juicy truth for you, now that you’ve seen the one I reccommended the last time.
    S

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