CONFLICT
It’s another collabration with Neil Johnson’s art “CONFLICT”
Please check out Neil’s awesome art work on RB!
Thank you so much Neil* :)
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It seems memories have forgotten home
your heart have forgotten my heart’s door
It seems lover’s moon forgotten road
like we are stranger
they are living on miles away
it seems they never met ever
it seems they don’t know each other
two lonely stranger
they seem like tracks
track ..
that they go together
but they never combine
like they are two opposite bank on the river
they are necessary for each other but never met
two hearts just trying to find their way
they are far from home
and they have forgotten way
I always found conflict between two hearts
I always felt that something is missing there
heart to heart
mind to mind
soul to soul
there was thousands gap
and I was just trying to filled them
but void couldn’t fill with love
and I’m seeing today
there’s no way
there’s no track
there’s no bank on the river
all I found is just emptiness
devotee1
Very nice, Ushna. I particularly like the lines ”...like they are two opposite bank on the river
they necessary for each other but never met…”
Ushna Sardar replied
thank you so much devotee! glad you liked :)
appreciate your precious comments! keep reading ..
and keep in touch! :)
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DiannaLee
wow…..interesting piece of writing…touching. These words have so much meaning to them….deep, open and honest….:)
Ushna Sardar replied
thank you so much Dianna! glad you liked hunnie!
appreciate your precious comments! :)
keep reading and keep in touch! huggles
Sally Omar
Ushna , What a marvelous collaboration…love the words…love the art…Sally xxoo
Ushna Sardar replied
thank you so much Sally! :)
glad you liked hunnie! appreciate your precious comments! :)
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richardredhawk
very moving
Ushna Sardar replied
thanks richard! :)
keep reading ..
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WoodyWood
Am I supposed to say something here? :)
Ushna Sardar replied
yeah sure WoodWood! I’m very welcoming! for any kind of critique!
thanks for reading! :) keep reading…
beast
there was thousands gap
and I was just trying to filled them
but void couldn’t fill with love
great stuff ushna, can feel a real force in these words
Ushna Sardar replied
thank you so much beast! :)
glad you liked my friend!
appreciate your precious comments!
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Nvision Ink
You create such great visuals with words. Well done Ushna!
Ushna Sardar replied
thank you so much Neil! glad you liked! :)
appreciate your precious comments! Huggles
olawunmi
Oh conflicts that turns hearts into opposites….well written Ushna I loved the first and last three lines adds it up beautifully.
Ushna Sardar replied
thank you so much sweet Summayyah! :)
glad you liked hunnie!
appreciate your precious comments!
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KEITH R. WILL...
emptiness such a great word for lonliness great writing ushna
Ushna Sardar replied
thank you so much Keith!
glad you liked my friend! :)
appreciate your precious comments! :)
keep reading ..
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Metamorphosis
awesome writing Ushna- very deep & the painting is… haunting..
Ushna Sardar replied
thank you so much Metamorephosis! :)
your screen name reminding me of my favourite author name called “Franz Kafka” just loved his writing .. “Metamorphosis” was his awesome novel!
thank you so much for reading ..
appreciate your precious comments!
keep reading and keep in touch! :)
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Anthony Hedger
Beautiful my dear friend. Your words are lovely and always fit the picture you do a collabration on. Very moving and beautiful
Ushna Sardar replied
thank you so much Anthony! glad you liked! :)
appreciate your precious comments!
keep reading ..
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WoodyWood
Impressed, good job. :) Yes, I was supposed to say something. :)
Ushna Sardar replied
thank you so much WoodyWood!
you can say ..
appreciate your precious comments!
mtda
very powerful and well expressed
Ushna Sardar replied
thank you so much mtda! glad you liked!
keep reading ..
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WoodyWood
Lol. What a sweet person you are, shoosh, don’t don’t don’t tell anyone that I’m still nice…. These years need their gold.
Take care, I’ll keep reading. Nice writing there. Be proud of yourself and don’t let anyone bring you down. You are indeed a writer. Keep it up- Wood
Ushna Sardar replied
lol wood!
yeah you sound nice!
I was ready for any kind of critique though! :)
so nice of you!
Will try to do my best and yeah I proud of myself but sometimes..
anyhow appreciate your comments!
keep in touch! :)
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WoodyWood
Thanks dear.
Ushna Sardar replied
you’re welcome wood!
WoodyWood
Need your op since you’re on here….. thank you socially lol wood
Ushna Sardar replied
oh ok!
butchart
wonderfully written ushna… the poignancy comes through….. b
Ushna Sardar replied
thank you so much b!
glad you liked! it means a lot!
Rita Iszlai
very intense….
Ushna Sardar replied
thanks Rita! :)
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