I didn’t think of you for last few days
It seems memories have forgotten home
your heart have forgotten my heart’s door
It seems lover’s moon forgotten road
like we are stranger
they are living on miles away
it seems they never met ever
it seems they don’t know each other
two lonely stranger
they seem like tracks
track ..
that they go together
but they never combine
like they are two opposite bank on the river
they are necessary for each other but never met
two hearts just trying to find their way
they are far from home
and they have forgotten way
I always found conflict between two hearts
I always felt that something is missing there
heart to heart
mind to mind
soul to soul
there was thousands gap
and I was just trying to filled them
but void couldn’t fill with love
and I’m seeing today
there’s no way
there’s no track
there’s no bank on the river
all I found is just emptiness
CONFLICT
It’s another collabration with Neil Johnson’s art “CONFLICT”
Please check out Neil’s awesome art work on RB!
Thank you so much Neil* :)
devotee1, 3 months ago
Very nice, Ushna. I particularly like the lines ”...like they are two opposite bank on the river
they necessary for each other but never met…”
Ushna Sardar in reply to devotee1’s comment, 3 months ago
thank you so much devotee! glad you liked :)
appreciate your precious comments! keep reading ..
and keep in touch! :)
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DiannaLee, 3 months ago
wow…..interesting piece of writing…touching. These words have so much meaning to them….deep, open and honest….:)
Ushna Sardar in reply to DiannaLee’s comment, 3 months ago
thank you so much Dianna! glad you liked hunnie!
appreciate your precious comments! :)
keep reading and keep in touch! huggles
Sally Omar, 3 months ago
Ushna , What a marvelous collaboration…love the words…love the art…Sally xxoo
Ushna Sardar in reply to Sally Omar’s comment, 3 months ago
thank you so much Sally! :)
glad you liked hunnie! appreciate your precious comments! :)
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richardredhawk, 3 months ago
very moving
WoodyWood, 3 months ago
Am I supposed to say something here? :)
beast, 3 months ago
there was thousands gap
and I was just trying to filled them
but void couldn’t fill with love
great stuff ushna, can feel a real force in these words
Neil Johnson, 3 months ago
You create such great visuals with words. Well done Ushna!
Summayyah Sadi..., 3 months ago
Oh conflicts that turns hearts into opposites….well written Ushna I loved the first and last three lines adds it up beautifully.
KEITH R. WILL..., 3 months ago
emptiness such a great word for lonliness great writing ushna
Metamorphosis, 3 months ago
awesome writing Ushna- very deep & the painting is… haunting..
Ushna Sardar in reply to richardredhawk’s comment, 3 months ago
thanks richard! :)
keep reading ..
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Ushna Sardar in reply to WoodyWood’s comment, 3 months ago
yeah sure WoodWood! I’m very welcoming! for any kind of critique!
thanks for reading! :) keep reading…
Ushna Sardar in reply to beast’s comment, 3 months ago
thank you so much beast! :)
glad you liked my friend!
appreciate your precious comments!
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Ushna Sardar in reply to Neil Johnson’s comment, 3 months ago
thank you so much Neil! glad you liked! :)
appreciate your precious comments! Huggles
Ushna Sardar in reply to Summayyah Sadiq-Ojibara’s comment, 3 months ago
thank you so much sweet Summayyah! :)
glad you liked hunnie!
appreciate your precious comments!
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Ushna Sardar in reply to KEITH R. WILLIAMS’s comment, 3 months ago
thank you so much Keith!
glad you liked my friend! :)
appreciate your precious comments! :)
keep reading ..
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Ushna Sardar in reply to Metamorphosis’s comment, 3 months ago
thank you so much Metamorephosis! :)
your screen name reminding me of my favourite author name called “Franz Kafka” just loved his writing .. “Metamorphosis” was his awesome novel!
thank you so much for reading ..
appreciate your precious comments!
keep reading and keep in touch! :)
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Anthony Hedger, 3 months ago
Beautiful my dear friend. Your words are lovely and always fit the picture you do a collabration on. Very moving and beautiful
Ushna Sardar in reply to Anthony Hedger’s comment, 3 months ago
thank you so much Anthony! glad you liked! :)
appreciate your precious comments!
keep reading ..
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WoodyWood, 3 months ago
Impressed, good job. :) Yes, I was supposed to say something. :)
mtda, 3 months ago
very powerful and well expressed
Ushna Sardar in reply to WoodyWood’s comment, 3 months ago
thank you so much WoodyWood!
you can say ..
appreciate your precious comments!
Ushna Sardar in reply to mtda’s comment, 3 months ago
thank you so much mtda! glad you liked!
keep reading ..
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WoodyWood, 3 months ago
Lol. What a sweet person you are, shoosh, don’t don’t don’t tell anyone that I’m still nice…. These years need their gold.
Take care, I’ll keep reading. Nice writing there. Be proud of yourself and don’t let anyone bring you down. You are indeed a writer. Keep it up- Wood
Ushna Sardar in reply to WoodyWood’s comment, 3 months ago
lol wood!
yeah you sound nice!
I was ready for any kind of critique though! :)
so nice of you!
Will try to do my best and yeah I proud of myself but sometimes..
anyhow appreciate your comments!
keep in touch! :)
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WoodyWood, 3 months ago
Thanks dear.
Ushna Sardar in reply to WoodyWood’s comment, 3 months ago
you’re welcome wood!
WoodyWood, 3 months ago
Need your op since you’re on here….. thank you socially lol wood
Ushna Sardar in reply to WoodyWood’s comment, 3 months ago
oh ok!
butchart, 3 months ago
wonderfully written ushna… the poignancy comes through….. b
Ushna Sardar in reply to butchart’s comment, 3 months ago
thank you so much b!
glad you liked! it means a lot!
Rita Iszlai, 2 months ago
very intense….
Ushna Sardar in reply to Rita Iszlai’s comment, 2 months ago
thanks Rita! :)
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