PATH TO ETERNITY

Ushna Sardar
Author: Ushna Sardar
Word Count: 172
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we always look for to help
we always need to get a clue
eye can see beyond the flesh
a thought that could make the sense
a hand that colud hold
we always look for hidden spirit
we look for guidline
we always search the helper
if not you, Lord…
Divine spirit
devine God
sacred firm
strengthen
merciful savior
you would not hand us conscientiously over to the bitter death
Oh dear God
I believe and love you with all my heart
I know you always there and look at us
you know where we need to guide
where we are waiting to get clue
You know us
you are knowing heart
you are knowing all that without telling
I know you will help us whenever we need
you will hear when we tell
you will always grant us when we ask
You will open door when we knock
I know you will hand us conscientiously over to the bitter death
You are Lord
divine God
sacred firm
holy merciful savior

  • barnsis

    barnsis, 3 months ago

    YES!

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar in reply to barnsis’s comment, 3 months ago

    I agreed byron!
    thanks for reading my friend! huggles

  • Neil Johnson

    Neil Johnson, 3 months ago

    Another great piece of writing Ushna! What can I say you do what you do very well! Not the religious person but I do like it works well. Well done Ushna the book will be fabulous!!!!!!!

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar in reply to Neil Johnson’s comment, 3 months ago

    glad you liked Neil!
    thank you so much! :)
    appreciate your precious comments!
    huggles

  • Sally Omar

    Sally Omar, 3 months ago

    Ushna, Awesome…Sally xxoo

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar in reply to Sally Omar’s comment, 3 months ago

    thanks Sally!
    a[ppreciate your precious comments! huggles

  • KBelleau

    KBelleau, 3 months ago

    Excellent collab…

  • Anthony Hedger

    Anthony Hedger, 3 months ago

    Anotheer wonderful piece my dear

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar in reply to KBelleau’s comment, 3 months ago

    thanks Kris! :)
    glad you liked! appreciate your precious comments! huggles
    keep reading ..

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar in reply to Anthony Hedger’s comment, 3 months ago

    thank you so much Anthony my friend! :)
    glad you liked! appreciate your precious comments!
    Huggles

  • Summayyah Sadiq-Ojibara

    Summayyah Sadi..., 3 months ago

    Very moving…well written Ushna

  • doug61853

    doug61853, 3 months ago

    this is amazing!! so introspective and stunning…......great job!

  • Metamorphosis

    Metamorphosis, 3 months ago

    you’re an amazing writer Ushna…. this is awesome! :)

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar in reply to Summayyah Sadiq-Ojibara’s comment, 3 months ago

    thank you so much sweet Summyyah! :)
    glad you liked hunnie! appreciate your precious comments! huggles

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar in reply to doug61853’s comment, 3 months ago

    thank you so much doug! :)
    thanks for reading .. appreciate your precious comments! keep reading and keep in touch! huggles

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar in reply to Metamorphosis’s comment, 3 months ago

    thank you so much Metamorphosis! so are you!
    thanks for reading .. glad you liked! :)
    appreciate your precious comments!
    keep reading and keep in touch! huggles

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