CLIMAX

Ushna Sardar
Author: Ushna Sardar
Word Count: 85
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We shared many moments together
precious and beautiful time
we shared emotions and feelings
we walked on the beach
we watched the sunset
we made wishes
We dreamed together
we flew up on clouds
we held many dreams
we were so much in love
I felt, your love is so rare
I wanted to tell you
your love is so beautiful
But I caught glimpse in your eyes
I saw ..
there’s some gap
in your eyes
It shows you are not the same!!

  • richardredhawk

    richardredhawk, 3 months ago

    great this tugs at the old heart strings

  • beast

    beast, 3 months ago

    well done to you both, another amazing intruiging collaberation, keep them coming :-)

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar in reply to richardredhawk’s comment, 3 months ago

    thank you so much rich! glad you like!
    appreciate your precious comments .. Huggles

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar in reply to beast’s comment, 3 months ago

    thank you so much beast! glad you liked :)
    appreciate your precious comments! big bunny huggles

  • Tom Broderick

    Tom Broderick, 3 months ago

    very nice ushna. tom

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar in reply to Tom Broderick’s comment, 3 months ago

    thanks my friend tom! :)

  • Neil Johnson

    Neil Johnson, 3 months ago

    very nice Ushna! I like it! It’s deep and works very well with the image.

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar in reply to Neil Johnson’s comment, 3 months ago

    thank you so much Neil! glad you liked!
    there’s more to come .. :)
    appreciate your precious comments .. especially for fav!
    big bunny huggles

  • devotee1

    devotee1, 3 months ago

    Yes, Ushna—I have felt this distance, not only in relationships at times, but in every connect. I think it is the mystery that makes me seek. Very nice. Thank you.

  • barnsis

    barnsis, 3 months ago

    The eyes never lie. Did you know that if you look someone right in the eye and ask a question the eye will dilate if they lie! True as accurate as a lie detector test.

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar in reply to devotee1’s comment, 3 months ago

    I agreed devotee1!
    it happens! sometimes you just don’t understand love!
    its like a mystery!
    thanks for reading .. appreciate your precious comments!
    keep reading and keep in touch! huggles

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar in reply to barnsis’s comment, 3 months ago

    You are absolutely right byron.. eyes never lie!
    Thanks for reading .. appreciate your precious comments!
    keep reading .. huggles

  • Sally Omar

    Sally Omar, 3 months ago

    What an amazing collaboration…this is awesome…Sally xxoo

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar in reply to Sally Omar’s comment, 3 months ago

    thanks sweet Sally! glad you liked hunnie! :)
    appreciate your precious comments! huggles

  • Rocketchook

    Rocketchook, 3 months ago

    I reckon we can all relate to this one , well done girl . Keep it up.

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar in reply to Rocketchook’s comment, 3 months ago

    thanks you so much Aaron! glad you liked my friend :)
    appreciate your comments.. keep reading .. huggles

  • KBelleau

    KBelleau, 3 months ago

    Every time we hit a new height, we are changed…. the old person surpassed by the new. I like.

  • Anthony Hedger

    Anthony Hedger, 3 months ago

    beautiful

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar in reply to KBelleau’s comment, 3 months ago

    yeah but facing it all not easy though Krish! bearing all that is hard!
    thanks for reading and sharing nice thoughs! appreciate your precious comments! huggles

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar in reply to Anthony Hedger’s comment, 3 months ago

    thanks Anthony! :)

  • mtda

    mtda, 3 months ago

    mesmerizing takes me to a place outside of myself and drops me into memories that I find both comfortable and unnerving all at once. Well done.

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar in reply to mtda’s comment, 3 months ago

    thank you so much mtda! glad you liked!
    appreciate your precious comments! thanks for reading .. keep reading .. Huggles

  • Summayyah Sadiq-Ojibara

    Summayyah Sadi..., 3 months ago

    The eyes…the eyes…they do give the fulness or the emptiness away! Nice Ushna

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar in reply to Summayyah Sadiq-Ojibara’s comment, 3 months ago

    very much true Summayyah!
    thank you so much! glad you liked!
    keep reading ..
    huggles

  • Peter Allton

    Peter Allton, 3 months ago

    Beautiful.

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar in reply to Peter Allton’s comment, 3 months ago

    thank you so much Peter! it means a lot! :)
    keep reading and keep in touch!

  • conceited

    conceited, 2 months ago

    nice expression of emotions, i really could relate

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