CRYSTAL VISION - USHNA SARDAR & KEITH WILLIAMS

Ushna Sardar
Author: Ushna Sardar
Word Count: 75
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i saw the crystal vision
when i closed my eyes
i kept this vision to myself
across the universe
against the wind & dust
away from reality
under the burning mortal sun
i’m walking away
i want freedom
i want to breathe
i wont sell my soul
i want them safely in my eyes
from this cruel world they will stay
yet my lips will always say
what they mean to me
sheer beauty
sheer poetry

  • Sally Omar

    Sally Omar, 4 months ago

    Ushna and Keith, Amazing…Sally xxoo

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar in reply to Sally Omar’s comment, 4 months ago

    thanks sweet Sally :)
    huggles xXx

  • Carol & Kev Haberle

    Carol & Kev Ha..., 4 months ago

    Simply beautiful words, beautifully put together!!!

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar in reply to Carol & Kev Haberle’s comment, 4 months ago

    thanks sweet Carol :)
    glad you liked hunnie
    appreciate your precious comments
    keep reading ..
    huggles

  • Anthony Hedger

    Anthony Hedger, 4 months ago

    well done guys, this is so beautiful

  • Naylor

    Naylor, 4 months ago

    Great job between the two of you .. beautifully written

  • KBelleau

    KBelleau, 4 months ago

    Wonderful….

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar in reply to Anthony Hedger’s comment, 4 months ago

    thank you so much Anthony my friend.. glad you liked :)
    appreciate your precious comments- huggles

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar in reply to Naylor’s comment, 4 months ago

    thank you so much sweet Naylor! glad you liked hunnie
    appreciate your precious comments – big bunny huggles

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar in reply to KBelleau’s comment, 4 months ago

    thank you so much Kris :)
    huggles

  • Aritheeagle

    Aritheeagle, 4 months ago

    What a great duo!

    So harmonious!
    ~Ari

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar in reply to Aritheeagle’s comment, 4 months ago

    thank you so much Ari my friend!
    glad you liked .. appreciate your precious comments!
    keep reading ..
    huggles

  • Neil Johnson

    Neil Johnson, 4 months ago

    Very nice writing you guys! Well done!

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar in reply to Neil Johnson’s comment, 4 months ago

    thank you so much Neil! glad you liked!
    appreciate your precious comments! huggles

  • mtda

    mtda, 4 months ago

    “Under the burning mortal sun” Great expression good work

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar in reply to mtda’s comment, 4 months ago

    thanks mtda! glad you liked :)
    appreciate your precious comments .. keep reading and keep in touch!
    huggles

  • liesbeth

    liesbeth, 4 months ago

    Great collaboration.

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar in reply to liesbeth’s comment, 4 months ago

    thanks liesbeth :)
    glad you like hun .. appreciate your precious comments – huggles
    keep reading and keep in touch ..

  • beast

    beast, 4 months ago

    well done to both of you. You always capture the images so perfectly ushna

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar in reply to beast’s comment, 4 months ago

    thank you so much beast!
    glad you liked my friend – huggles
    appreciate your precious comments … keep in touch ..

  • Nicole Ryan

    Nicole Ryan, 4 months ago

    beautiful work Usher and Keith xx

  • Keeli

    Keeli, 4 months ago

    Kudos on being featured on the community page guys!

  • JaneAParis

    JaneAParis, 4 months ago

    This is very simply lovely. Lovely in words, and thoughts, and very inspiring. I like how they take a journey in time and space against the odds to find a safe place for creative inspirations. The artwork is succulent and colorful, I love the black background which makes the colors really stand out well. Trees are always a beautiful inspiration of life. Well done, both of you. Smiles from Jane:-)

  • Prasad

    Prasad, 3 months ago

    Awwwesome work, Ushna. It’s simple but touching…....

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar in reply to Nicole Ryan’s comment, 3 months ago

    thank you so much Nicole!
    huggles xoxox

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar in reply to Keeli’s comment, 3 months ago

    thank you so much keeli!
    huggles xoxox

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar in reply to JaneAParis’s comment, 3 months ago

    thank you so much sweet Jane!
    glad you liked hunnie!
    xoxox
    huggles

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar in reply to Prasad’s comment, 3 months ago

    thank you so much Prasad!
    glad you liked it!
    it means a lot!
    huggles

  • Erhan OZBIYIK

    Erhan OZBIYIK, 2 months ago

    COngs..
    An idea could be so simple but good work of art :)

  • Natella2020

    Natella2020, 2 months ago

    Congratulations on a this work, Ushna. It was a very close race, and you did well.

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