CHAOS BETWEEN HEART AND MIND

Could you find the balance between heart and mind
could you draw the line between them
could you close your eyes and ears when your heart spoke
could you pass by quietly when your heart asked
could you …
its hard to find way
its hard to find balance when you are in love
you lost in the middle
you have to decide between heart and mind
would you go with your heart
would you listen to your heart
could you close your eyes
could you close your ears
could you stopped listening to your mind?
you should not lost in middle
you asked me and don’t know what to say
just do what your heart says
Heart is the engine of my body
but mind is the engine of my life
I can’t ignore any
and won’t close my eyes and ears
I can’t pretend I did hear nothing
I won’t lost in the middle
but I can’t go with heart
nor with mind
great bewilderment
chaotic heart
chaotic mind
great chaos between heart and mind!

  • lolowe

    lolowe

    This is really sweet Ushna. :]

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thanks sweet loowe :)
    appreciate your precious comments – huggles

  • Naylor

    Naylor

    Such a hard thing to chose from .. heart and mind…. one will lead you with rational thoughts but also will find doubt and put up walls first but the other will jump so quick and bathe in PASSION,,, wonderfully written !!!!!! ((((((HUG)))))) sometimes you just gotta take that chance … go with your passion cause that is what life is about .. as long as no one is getting hurt in the process :)

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thank you so much sweet Naylor xXx
    glad you liked .. yeah I agreed .. you are absolutely right .. its difficult to draw line between them! one will lead!!
    appreciate your precious comments- huggles
    keep in touch x

  • Sally Omar

    Sally Omar

    Ushna, Many difficult decisions in life…put so beautifully…went to favs…Sally xxoo

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thank you so much Sally .. you are such a sweetheart! x Xx
    you’re right its really difficult!
    glad you liked my friend- appreciate your precious comments!
    huggles

  • i ♥ u... do u ♥ me too?

    i ♥ u... do u ...

    hottt… HELLA CREATIVE!

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thanks believe! :)
    glad you liked .. appreciate your precious comments!
    keep reading and keep in touch! :)
    huggles

  • olawunmi

    olawunmi

    Oh that can be a real battle…some people say ‘don’t let your heart rule your mind’ but I wonder about that, if we refused the heart a say, wouldn’t we all be mercenaries of thought…no place for compassion and love…Well done Ushna

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    its difficult to go with one Summayyah you are absolutely right I agreed. sometimes i really felt chaos between heart and mind!!
    thanks for reading sweet Summayyah , glad you liked hunnie.. appreciate your precious comments .. keep reading .. huggles xXx

  • Tony Ryan

    Tony Ryan

    Hi Ushna,

    I believe the heart contains all wisdom. I believe that the mind is the weak link in most. The heart may provide the most powerful feeling yet it is the mind that doesn’t work to understand the power. To me love is the one absolute truth but the human mind takes the feeling and becomes dependant and open to hurt rather than working deeply to understand and be secure in love’s precence.

    Deep feeling in my opinion does not have to create deep chaos. I feel the chaos is the creation of immature minds.

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    Hiya Tony my friend!
    I feel the same Tony but its difficult to let your heart rule sometimes i felt chaos.. hard moment! but heart’s decision always make you happy .. so i conceded we let heart rule and stop listening to the mind sometimes. thanks for sharing nice and deep thoughts tony .. you are highly mind person and its always good to heart from you .. appreciate your precious comments! :)
    keep reading .. and keep in touch .. big bunny huggles

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  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thanks Ros :)

  • Anthony Hedger

    Anthony Hedger

    very very good

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thanks Anthony my friend :)

  • Tony Ryan

    Tony Ryan

    Thanks for your response Ushna. I feel that you and I perhaps feel with similar depths. For me the gradual move away from chaos has come by not judging my mind as being against my heart. I just think that our minds have become conditioned to listen to society beliefs over our own hearts.

    In my opinion society almost controls us to rush and panic especially under the pressure of any deep feeling. I truly think we need to slow right down and connect deep feeling to our minds. Only then will we begine to understand deep emotions of which pure love is the deepest.

    Best Wishes Tony.

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    yeah we feel similar Tony, I agreed what you said society beliefs ..
    thanks for sharing nice thoughts like always I would say keep reading and keep in touch tony!

    appreciate your comments my friend – big bunny huggles
    best wishes from Ushna. :)

  • peterT

    peterT

    beautiful peace :)

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thanks Peter :)

  • Brandylynn

    Brandylynn

    I can relate to this well. There are times that the conflict between heart and mind causes turmoil. Especially if the mind is stubbornly holding on to an idea and wreaking havoc as a mercenary. Nice comments.

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thank you so much Brandy!
    You are absolutely right and I agreed! but sometimes we should do what heart says .. mind’s decision an important but sometimes we let rule heart only.
    appreciate your precious comments Brandy! keep reading and keep in touch .. huggles

  • mtda

    mtda

    I find that when I do follow my heart and abandon all reason that if my heart ends up broken I am more likely to hear it’s voice only as a whisper the next time have I grown colder because I followed my heart only to have it ripped apart? These are the questions this wonderful piece of work caused me to ask. Well written.

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    you cant actually blame your heart mtda! anyone could be wrong. sometimes we go with mind but we also feel regret! it happens!!
    you just can’t listen to your heart.. heart always can’t be wrong .. yeah sometimes things don’t work .. but we should’nt blame only heart .. don’t neglect other people!
    thanks for sharing deep thoughts mtda! :)
    appreciate your precious comments .. keep reading and keep in touch! huggles

  • beast

    beast

    great poem ushna, you capture that dilema perfectly, thanks :-)

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thank you so much my friend beast!
    glad you liked .. appreciate your precious comments! huggles

  • KEITH  R. WILLIAMS

    KEITH R. WILL...

    the heart and mind battle all the time sometimes the mind is wrong

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thank you so much Keith! thanks for sharing thoughts!
    sometimes heart could be also wrong!
    appreciate your precious comments! keep reading ..

  • KEITH  R. WILLIAMS

    KEITH R. WILL...

    yeah your right

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    thanks Keith my friend!

  • Mechellerene

    Mechellerene

    the heart does control the body. it’s the visceral part. it pours into your bloodstream and nervous system…what you said…sigh….it can be such a dilema, like beast said. sometimes it’s a wave tha nees to be “ridden out”. sometimes it’s a passion that needs to be given into. UGH!!! :) :)

    Congrats on your Feature!!!!! You deserve it!

  • Ushna Sardar replied

    well said Mechellerence! so sweer of you!
    appreciate your precious comments on work!
    huggles xoxox

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