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Burnt Out Heart

Ill conceived perceptions
far away
from true.

This is not mine
It belongs
to you.

Fragmented
Iced
Untouchable cold.

The vision
of my heart
you hold.

Burn me,
Singed
Broken down.

Your ice cold heart
Charred
Brown.

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How you see me is wrong.

Don’t look at me judge me on how you are. I invite you to know my heart

It is then you will learn the difference between your ill conceived perceptions and the truth.

There is power in being able to express something emotive through art and let it go, I find it’s this that keeps me engaged in using art to grow and heal…

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Comments

  • George Coombs
    George Coombsalmost 4 years ago

    Brilliant poetry, the structure suits the mood so well- what you say is very true and stated in a deeply thought and felt way – this is very much “my” kind of poetry and is therefore a favorite with me

  • Thank you so much George. I enjoyed doing this piece. Hope you are well.

    – Jak Savage (aka Unbeknown)

  • shootback
    shootbackalmost 4 years ago

    Great, strong emotional writing. :)

  • Welcome shootback, thank you for the time to view and your lovely comments

    – Jak Savage (aka Unbeknown)

  • charliethetramp
    charliethetrampalmost 4 years ago

    yes its all to human …..to transfere ideas and feelings on to others
    its the self obsessed and the self righteous approach to understanding
    which we are probably all guilty of from time to time
    i do like the way you explore the emotional and pyschological grey areas
    unbeknown

  • It seems an inherent thing with me charliethetramp… cant help it. Thank you so much for coming over here again and having time to view :)

    – Jak Savage (aka Unbeknown)

  • hsien-ku
    hsien-kualmost 4 years ago

    elegant and minimal writing – very strong.

  • Thank you so much hsien-ku

    – Jak Savage (aka Unbeknown)

  • Arco Iris  R
    Arco Iris Ralmost 4 years ago

    Very well written. There is a lot more to a person than what shows on the outside. All you have to do is take a look at the heart. I saw the image that went with this and it was beautifully done.
    An instant favorite.

  • Thank you so much Iris a wonderful comment here, your time and consideration is much appreciated, :)

    – Jak Savage (aka Unbeknown)

  • Leon A.  Walker
    Leon A. Walkeralmost 4 years ago

    I enjoyed this very much!!!

  • Thank you so much Leon, I appreciate another visit from you on my work here and your comments :)

    – Jak Savage (aka Unbeknown)

  • lisameryl
    lisamerylalmost 4 years ago

    SIMPLY LOVELY!!! Big hugs, Lisa =) XO

  • You know, you are the diamond in the rough sand for me Lisa, a wonderful comment on this piece as always dearest friend, i appreciate your continued support x

    – Jak Savage (aka Unbeknown)

  • Chris G. Vaillancourt
    Chris G. Vaill...almost 4 years ago

    Brilliant piece of writing.

  • Thank you so very much Chris, I appreciate your comment :)

    – Jak Savage (aka Unbeknown)

  • Robin Monroe
    Robin Monroealmost 4 years ago

    love this…:)

  • Thank you so very much :) You are a star :)

    – Jak Savage (aka Unbeknown)

  • uncleblack
    uncleblackalmost 4 years ago

    i hope will not mind, you can find a musical interpretation here burnt out heart

  • OMG that’s bloody amazing! I can’t believe it! Oh WOW uncleblack… I just may need this to be in my first journal! Yikes… Jakki x

    – Jak Savage (aka Unbeknown)

  • Impressive work uncleblack!

    – Jak Savage (aka Unbeknown)

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