ooh, I like quite a much. Even minus the bottom text and gradient I think it would be just as strong. It definitely conveys a peaceful feeling. Almost reminds me of music, specifically the Sydney opera house, see the comparison. Great work. Maybe a tiny ornate element would be cool… I dunno just a thought bro
Cheers for the kind words and don’t be afraid to give new direction I know alot of designers get really attached to their work and will kill anyone who dares say anything bad about it, but sooner or later they’ll grow out of it.
haha kudos for that attitude, I appreciate criticism much more than I despise it. Well what I was kinda seeing in your piece was that awesome flowing element you have really dominates alot of space, but it’s not really detailed so it would be well balanced with a small emblematic element know what I mean. It would also add to the expansive feeling in your sweet pattern and without the bottom it would allow the eye to fall of the bottom of the page where I feel it’s led. Lol, give an inch and I take a mile eh
Yeah I know what you mean by the extra element to give that little extra viewing pleasure and sustaining power. This being a minimalist piece it’s hard find that perfect element that fits. I’ve done a few versions of this I’ll put acouple up over the next month or so when I get the chance. Cheers
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SpLotchy
ooh, I like quite a much. Even minus the bottom text and gradient I think it would be just as strong. It definitely conveys a peaceful feeling. Almost reminds me of music, specifically the Sydney opera house, see the comparison. Great work. Maybe a tiny ornate element would be cool… I dunno just a thought bro
Tyler Jackson replied
Cheers for the kind words and don’t be afraid to give new direction I know alot of designers get really attached to their work and will kill anyone who dares say anything bad about it, but sooner or later they’ll grow out of it.
SpLotchy
haha kudos for that attitude, I appreciate criticism much more than I despise it. Well what I was kinda seeing in your piece was that awesome flowing element you have really dominates alot of space, but it’s not really detailed so it would be well balanced with a small emblematic element know what I mean. It would also add to the expansive feeling in your sweet pattern and without the bottom it would allow the eye to fall of the bottom of the page where I feel it’s led. Lol, give an inch and I take a mile eh
Tyler Jackson replied
Yeah I know what you mean by the extra element to give that little extra viewing pleasure and sustaining power. This being a minimalist piece it’s hard find that perfect element that fits. I’ve done a few versions of this I’ll put acouple up over the next month or so when I get the chance. Cheers