She danced around wanting more
Full length gown touching the floor
No shoes on her feet
Tall but dancing petite
Colors filling every inch of her mind
Having always felt left behind
But tonight she would make a show
And everyone would really know
She was so exotic
EROTICA
She loved to dance like this
Feet lifting off the ground like a kiss
Never wanting the music to stop
Feeling like she was a top
Spinning and spinning
Never stopping, finally winning
Everyone would see her dance
With a man who wanted romance
She was so exotic
EROTICA
She thought of him in bed
On his breast she’d lay her head
He would touch her gently
And she would only see
She finally got to the place
It was no great disgrace
She was with the man of her dreams
Finally life was as it seems
She was so exotic
EROTICA
He kissed her as they spun
She was his only one
She so desired
Her hips were on fire
Lips touching so slow
Colors spinning as they go
He would make her his only one
This would not be for fun
She was so exotic
EROTICA
Life took a twist that day
In a very strange way
She found that she was the one
Only looking to have some fun
That night while in bed
She made crazy in the head
Wildly attacking him
She committed the first sin
Beating heart beating soul
Something she couldn’t control
She was so exotic
EROTICA
EROTICA
Marlo, Thank you so much…Your artwork Erotica was amazing
Please check out my friend Marlo’s (redbubble addict) other awesome art
and writings on the RB.
Ushna Sardar, 6 months ago
beaitiful Sally! i like it!
red addiction, 6 months ago
You rock!!! this one I really, really like. You are the best! thank you so much!
Sally Omar in reply to red addiction’s comment, 6 months ago
Marlo, You blew me away with this one…thank you so much..Sally xxoo
Angela Harburn, 6 months ago
Excellent writing Sally – wow – this is a passionate piece! Looking forward to the pic later – I’ll be back! xxx
mlgkats, 6 months ago
this is well written, and i really like it
Jodie Elchah, 6 months ago
Fantastic writing Sally and the art work is fantastic too..Marlo. Well done to both of you. JodieXX
Sally Omar in reply to Angela Harburn’s comment, 6 months ago
Angela, Thank you so very much..The colors were compelling and
I just looked at it and wrote…Sally xxoo
Sally Omar in reply to Ushna Sardar’s comment, 6 months ago
Ushna, Thank you so much..the image spoke words to me.. Sally xxoo
Sally Omar in reply to mlgkats’s comment, 6 months ago
Mel, Thank you so very much..I enjoyed doing it so much..the words
were flowing..Sally xxoo
Sally Omar in reply to Jodie Elchah’s comment, 6 months ago
Jodie, Thank you so much..This was a fun collaboration..Sally xxoo
mlgkats, 6 months ago
i can tell you did , i am still working on it , where you just look at it comes out , your welcome
Nancy Fischer, 6 months ago
Nice Sally. Very tastefully done.
Sally Omar in reply to Nancy Fischer’s comment, 6 months ago
Nancy, Thank you so much…I looked at Marlo’s artwork and the
words just started..they flowed as if they were always there and
just needed that slight push to come out…Sally xxoo
photos40, 6 months ago
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!! AMAZING WORK !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sally Omar in reply to photos40’s comment, 6 months ago
Wayne, Thank you so much..I must admit I love this one…Sally xxoo