She hid the bruises
Hidden pain
Of a life
So insane
Parents beating on a child
A good little girl
Not at all wild
She sits in the corner
Afraid to utter even a word
Will be beaten
If she is heard
Bruises on arms
And legs too
A little child
Life so new
Knowing if they are mad
Will blame her
For being bad
Goes to school
No one cares
Goes home
And fear tears
Through her little heart
Broken in half
After they beat her
They both laugh
Crushed soul
Broken bones
Pain tears at her
All alone
Goes to the hospital
Lies told
Not believed
Too many bruises old
They are reported
At long last
Child saved
Cannot forget the past
A BEATEN CHILD
Angela Harburn
Oh Sally – this is so very sad. It really brought a tear – so many terrible people in the world! But also so many good ones too! xxx
Sally Omar replied
Angela, It is so sad..no child should ever be beaten..they are so
innocent…Thank you so much..Sally xxoo
ferndesign
Oh my gosh this is me this is good
Sally Omar replied
Elisabeth, I am so sorry..cruelty is some prevalent with children..
you read about it every day..hope I didn’t open any wounds..the
good thing..you are so safe now..thank you so much..Sally xxoo
mlgkats
this is so true to life and so sad , it is even sad when an adult goes through so many wonds
that are not easily healed, you can feel the pain as you read, well written
Sally Omar replied
Mel, Thank you so much..unfortunately wounds like this never
ever heal…Sally xxoo
mlgkats
yes i know how it goes, but i am strong enough to deal with them , you are so welcome
Sally Omar replied
So sorry to hear that anyone ever went thru this as a child..Sally xxoo
Ushna Sardar
Sally its very real! Well done! it goes to my fav!
Sally Omar replied
Ushna, Thank you so much..it is so sad for those poor little ones
who are abused and cannot help themselves and no one helps them.
Sally xxoo
dannielle
This gave me chills and made me tear up! wonderful writing, sad but you have done an excellent job!
Sally Omar replied
Dannielle, Thank you so much..the plight of abused children is sad..
and many times they are not saved…Sally xxoo
mlgkats
more my upper teens and not with parents, my parents are great, more like boyfriend for 6 years
Sally Omar replied
Glad you’re out of that situation…I didn’t think it was your parents…
you speak so well of them…Sally xxoo
olawunmi
Sad reality Sally…well written!
Sally Omar replied
Summayyah, Thank you so much..It is very sad and many times
ignored until the tragedy ends in death…Sally xxoo
mlgkats
i am too one thing it made me strong, and i put all my energy in to the animals they are like the children they can not do it for them selves
Sally Omar replied
You know how wonderful I think you are Mel for all your care of those
little ones that have no voice..and your beautiful heart..Sally xxoo
ferndesign
u r fine thanks for writing this though it needs to be told and u got it so perfect
Sally Omar replied
Elisabeth, I think it is so important that people outside the family
who notice bruises or children hurting help..if one poem helps one
child..it would be wonderful..it is a subject that will come up many
times in my poetry..I am glad you are now safe..my beautiful
friend…Sally xxoo
ferndesign
thank u so much and i am so glad that i am safe endured it for 19 years sad to say
Pagly2
I am sad to say and even ashamed that I have case loads full of these children….....and ashamed that I belong to a Society that perpetuates this form of torture…....No child should live in Fear…NO child should know physical pain from its Parents….inflicted mindlessly…...NO child should know hunger…....BUT THEY DO…........each day many still live with this…....and until WE stop it..it will continue…................
Sally Omar replied
Trisha, It amazes me that we have evolved to this level and yet
there are people so cruel as to hurt a child..it just breaks my
heart..I know you help all that you can..Thank you so much.
Sally xxoo
Pagly2
so true Sally and ‘We” are supposedly “Civilised’...........?
photos40
Man’s inhumanity to man …......is a horrible thing to behold, yet it is all you see on the T.V. everytime you turn it on. Wonderfully written with a great ending. Lovely.
Sally Omar replied
Wayne, Thank you so much..I am horrified everyday hearing the
stories of brutality against children..makes my heart hurt..Sally xxoo
Dawnsky2
Oh god, thats sad. Unfortunately very true too, how can anyone hurt and beat a child!
My heart bleeds sometimes. But as for your work, it is wonderfully heart felt :)))))))))
EDGYONE
SALLY,VERY HEART TUGGING,THIS KIND OF REMINDS ME OF THE COUNTRY SONG ALYSSA LIES, IF YOU HAVENT HEARD IT YOU MAY WANT TO CHECK IT OUT,ITS POWERFUL TO SAY THE LEAST. COMING FROM A BACK GROUND OF SEVERE BEATINGS AND NO ONE HELPING ME, I AM SO THANKFUL IT IS NOW SEEN AS IT REALLY IS AND NOT JUST A PARENT TEACHING THEIR CHILD.I FEEL THEIIR MAY BE LONG TERM AFFECTS THAT HAVE THE ABILITY TO CAUSE PROBLEMS LONG AFTER IT STOPS. BUT HEY,WHAT DO I KNOW