MAGNOLIA TREE SILHOUETTE

Sally Omar
Author: Sally Omar
Word Count: 148
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I will always remember
I will never forget
How our hearts were drawn together
Under the Magnolia Tree Silhouette

You were only twenty
I was seventeen
When I first saw you
The most handsome man
I’d ever seen

Our eyes met for a moment
And really not more than that
You were wearing a suit
And a handsome black hat

Although I didn’t know you
I was very bold
Asking you your name
And now remembering
when we are very old

We said only a few words
Meeting the next day
Your kiss was like a whisper
What more can I say

We married six months later
In the church up on the hill
Everyday with you my love
Has been such a thrill

I will always remember
And I will never forget
The day that you and I became lovers
Under the MAGNOLIA TREE SILOUETTE

MAGNOLIA TREE SILHOUETTE

Thank you Mel for the beautiful Magnolia Tree Silouette

Please check out my friend Mel’s(Mlgkats) other awesome artwork on the RB

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar, 6 months ago

    well done sally!
    Your kiss was like a whisper
    What more can I say
    love these lines!

  • Sally Omar

    Sally Omar in reply to Ushna Sardar’s comment, 6 months ago

    Ushna, Thank you so much..you are also a romantic..wonderful..
    Sally xxoo

  • mlgkats

    mlgkats, 6 months ago

    love it , really rings true , this is perfect.

  • Vulcan

    Vulcan, 6 months ago

    wow!!!!!!

  • Sally Omar

    Sally Omar in reply to Vulcan’s comment, 6 months ago

    Thank you so much…I loved the photo and honestly love the poem
    too…Sally xxoo

  • Sally Omar

    Sally Omar in reply to mlgkats’s comment, 6 months ago

    Mel, Thank you so much…loved your photo..it spoke..Sally xxoo

  • kim Davitt

    kim Davitt, 6 months ago

    beautiful words, very heart felt.

  • Angela Harburn

    Angela Harburn, 6 months ago

    So very beautiful – romance in every line! Love it my friends – what a team! xxx

  • Sally Omar

    Sally Omar in reply to kim Davitt’s comment, 6 months ago

    Kim, Thank you so much..I am so happy you enjoyed it..Sally xxoo

  • Sally Omar

    Sally Omar in reply to Angela Harburn’s comment, 6 months ago

    Angela, Thank you so much..We both thank you…Glad you enjo yed
    it…Sally xxoo

  • red addiction

    red addiction, 6 months ago

    Good morning Sally, havent had coffee yet and already I feel good from reading your beautiful thoughts.

  • SuliHawk

    SuliHawk, 6 months ago

    Sweet and sentimental, a lovely piece to read.

  • photos40

    photos40, 6 months ago

    Beautiful work. Love it.

  • Sally Omar

    Sally Omar in reply to red addiction’s comment, 6 months ago

    Marlo, Thank you so much..hope you enjoyed your coffee..glad you
    had good thoughts…Sally xoo

  • Sally Omar

    Sally Omar in reply to SuliHawk’s comment, 6 months ago

    Thank you so much…I am so happy that you enjoyed it..Sally xxoo

  • Sally Omar

    Sally Omar in reply to photos40’s comment, 6 months ago

    Wayne, I’m so happy you enjoyed this…Thank you so much..Sallyxxoo

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