suicide

a broken vase
dying roses
on the edge of insanity
walking between
the lines drawn
each row straight
falling to the right
falling to the left
thoughts invading
a brain so drained
looking for answers
a shard of glass
blood flows
she feels no pain
the heat of her blood
elicits excitement
the warm flow
dripping from her veins
no answers needed now
slowly drifting
drifting
into the realm
of the unknown
her life flickers
in small segments
holding onto a childhood memory
she passes into the other world
finally seeing
the light at the end of the tunnel
Angels surround her
all is forgiven
she is at peace

suicide

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Just a poem….no one I know…..


Comments

  • Maree Cardinale
    Maree Cardinaleover 3 years ago

    I’m glad it’s noone you know Sally.
    It’s beautiful… and disturbing. Scary because you make it sound so warm and inviting.

  • Rocky Loder
    Rocky Loderover 3 years ago

    even though the undertones are very sad and you touch a delicate subject that most will go out of their way too evade…you have written a beautiful poem with a truly beautiful ending…sometimes its good to take the edge off….awesome

  • TheBrit
    TheBritover 3 years ago

    An absolutely amazing write!! BRAvo!!

    Brit ……

  • Redviolin
    Redviolinover 3 years ago

    Beautifully handled

  • Paulina Kazarinov
    Paulina Kazarinovover 3 years ago

    One of a very emotional subjects that people don’t talk about in western cultures. Brilliantly written dear!

  • Lisa  Jewell
    Lisa Jewellover 3 years ago

    such a tough write but oh Sally you did it so well. Powerful and haunting xxx

  • Arcadia Tempest
    Arcadia Tempestover 3 years ago

    It is very difficult to see such subject matter as tender time but your poetry I feel shows the rawness that may be there….. a rawness of life that bruises one heart. xx

  • sandra22
    sandra22over 3 years ago

    A thoughtful poem Sally, powerful yet eloquently handled
    Sandra xx

  • Karen Gingell
    Karen Gingellover 3 years ago

    I happy it is no one you know but it is so chilling and effecting I’m sure it reflects many people’s thoughts

  • montdragon
    montdragonover 3 years ago

    poignant…sigh…and then the pause…eternal…the suspense flicker flickers flickering…stardust…applause applause.


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