SHHHH...WHISPER

shhhh…whisper
don’t let anyone hear
our secret words
just hold me near
the scent of your skin
your fingertips
my body tingles
tastes of your wine lips
embrace my heart
like never before
come in..my darling
close the door
the rosebuds are blooming
let us move in unison
to the dance of dances
flaring within
slowly moving
then with haste
as your arms tighten
around my waist
passion is ours
for just one night
come lie with me
till the morning light

shhhh….whisper

  • scoob29

    scoob29

    Aww Carol very nice fav indeed

  • Medusa

    Medusa

    Sweet and Sensual… MMM…

    Mx

  • Shoaib .

    Shoaib .

    ohhh this is HOT !!!! shhhhhhhhhhhhh girl lemme whisper in your ear .. like damn damn damn hahahaha (thats a song) lol nice write sallly

  • RebeccaWeston

    RebeccaWeston

    Wow !!! Sally – Love it !! Beautifully written XX
    Becca

  • linaji

    linaji

    I love when you write like this.. Gorgeous loving you.

  • linaji

    linaji

    Oh and I forgot.. HOT!!!

  • erika15

    erika15

    “don’t let anyone hear
    our secret words”..... I like this part, so mysterious and quiet. I can almost hear that part in my mind….awesome poem Sally! XX

  • oneperfectkiss

    oneperfectkiss

    So lovely Sal. I had a whole thing going on in mind while reading this…. beautiful. xxx

  • helene ruiz

    helene ruiz

    i know what ur hormones have been doing ,,,,,(smiles)
    excellent sally!

  • greeneyedlady

    greeneyedlady

    so delicious, the thought of a clandestine romantic interlude is heavenly!!

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