TENDER LOVING CARE
Dedicated to my friend…Paul..a man of justice and honor…Thank you!!!!!!!
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Paul(Quixote)Alleyne
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those words were never comprehended
it just seemed to him
perhaps the words just blended
an expression with no meaning
tender was out of his scope
loving .. not for him
he was a hateful bloke
he didn’t know what care meant
a word for people who were meek
Tender Loving Care
those who use it are weak
now he was never loved
for he hid behind a fantasy
that he was a manly man
one other men would surely see
for women he had no respect
he didn’t even love his mama
outrageous were his acts
he even tried to harm her
bitter were his words
extolling words of hate
it was especially women
he tried to berate
but in walked a true man
of justice and of pride
who called this little ass out
but from him he did hide
making up excuses
why they should not speak
because truth be said
he was the one that was weak
humanity was not his
he did not know what it meant
all the days of his life
in hate and regurgitation spent
the man of truth and justice
kicked his “ass” with his words
he held his ears
didn’t want the true man to be heard
speaking against women
and a racist mean and cruel
he hated intelligent women
for they are the ones who ruled
he wouldn’t speak to them
wouldn’t answer any questions they posed
when they spoke clearly
the subject was closed
but only to them…those women
so big and strong
he knew they were capable
of quelling his hateful song
thanks to the true man
who speaks of women well
and who fights against racism
against the troll who fell
Astoreth
Wow Sal….so much to absorb here. ...this is actually very heavy. I will have to read again, go away and then come back and comment on this one. xx
Sally Omar replied
Thank you, Asoreth, I realize it is much to comprehend…xoxoxox
Paul (Quixote)...
Thank you sally. I am deeply moved, and indeed honored, my friend.
Sally Omar replied
Dearest Paul, I can’t thank you enough for being you…a proud wonderful man who stands
up for justice and truth….I am honored to know you…Love & Hugs, Sally xoxoxoxoxox
H M Bascom
While on the surface some men profess to love women, often they are threatened by a smart, independent woman. It is easy for women to see the signs, and those men think they are clever. It is quite sad really. Excellent poem Sally. Go SISTER!
Sally Omar replied
Thanks so much Helen…and then there are true men like Paul who just forge ahead
with deep humanity and care…and speak out against injustice!! xoxoxoxox
valzart
Crumbs! sweet Sal where does all this marvelous writing come from sweetheART ..will have to come back to re-absorb lol! ;} happy hippy hugglez
Sally Omar replied
Thanks so much Val…oh it’s a long story!!!! xoxoxoxoxox
H M Bascom
Paul’s a real man. xoxo
Sally Omar replied
Oh, yes, he certainly is…he is a man to be admired and loved for his truth and justice
and words of wisdom!!!! xoxoxoxoxox
Rhenastarr
Beautiful and heartfelt, Thank God for men like Paul, your poem spoke so well of him!!
Sally Omar replied
Thanks, Rhena…Paul is a true man with deep understanding of women and justice for all…
he fights racism and all injustice….he is intelligent and I am thankful that our paths have crossed…I am proud to be his friend!!
xoxoxoxoxoxo
silverstrummer...
Brilliantly written Sally a great description of a male chauvanistic suffering megalomania at its highest form!
“wouldn’t answer any questions they posed
when they spoke clearly
the subject was closed
but only to them…those women
so big and strong
he knew they were capable
of quelling his hateful song”
Brilliantly described and executed great works! – David
Sally Omar
Thank you so much, David!!! And then there are those men who are just so wonderful
and understand that women should be heard and listened to!!!! xoxoxoxox
SharonD
Wow Sally, this is so fantastic.
Sally Omar
Thank you so much, Sharon!!!! I wrote this for Paul who is a wonderful man and stands
up for the rights of all…I am so proud to be his friend!!!