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the naked dance

dancing in the fields
naked and in love
hearing every sound
the cooing of doves
a blanket on the ground
where they lie and rest
finally it happened
did she pass the test
so very young
inexperienced, and shy
she gave herself to him
she inwardly cried
but what of tomorrow
would love find a way
would he say goodbye
or would he stay
was it enough
she gave her body and soul
he didn’t say I love you
perhaps he wasn’t bold
tomorrow came and went
it was never about romance
never heard from him again
remembering the naked dance

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  • mimulux
    mimuluxalmost 6 years ago

    great poem sally .. sad and so true in many cases HUGS!

  • colorblind
    colorblindalmost 6 years ago

    nice words… mimulux said
    sad know that it happens

  • Rhenastarr
    Rhenastarralmost 6 years ago

    Nicely written, so many have taken the same path, to come away slightly disillusioned.

  • Carol Berliner
    Carol Berlineralmost 6 years ago

    Wonderful poem Sally sad but true!

  • Valerie Anne Kelly
    Valerie Anne K...almost 6 years ago

    Aww got goose-bumps again sweetheART divine ;} happy hippy hugglez

  • SharonD
    SharonDalmost 6 years ago

    Great poem Sally. Sad but true. I reckon the majority of girls lose it to smeone who doesn’t love them.

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