FINALLY THERE

He waited at the train station
A very long time
A little nervous
But he was looking fine

Under his arm
A bottle of Pinot Grigiot
And he knew exactly
Where he wanted to go

His pocket bulged a little
In it a diamond ring
His heart was dancing
He could hear his soul sing

Off to see the woman
Who was the love of his life
Finally he would ask her
To be his wife

The train finally came
Slowly on the track
He got on
Never looking back

The train stopped at all the stations
He was starting to sweat
It seemed like it was taking forever
He hadn’t gotten to his stop yet

He rehearsed what he would say
His lips slightly moving
He couldn’t stand still
People thought he was grooving

~~Maybe she’ll say ‘no’
~~Prespiration
~~Maybe she’ll say ‘yes’
~~Anticipation

The train pulled in the station
He knew she really cared
Now he could ask her
He was FINALLY THERE

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Comments

  • Amber Elizabeth Fromm Donais
    Amber Elizabet...over 6 years ago

    My God sally can you ever WRITE WOW !!!!!! xxxxxx I love ya sis=D oooooo

  • hilarydougill
    hilarydougillover 6 years ago

    wonderfully well written sal so very visual, and great imagery by Vulcan, well done both of you. hugs and angel xxxxxx

  • lianne
    lianneover 6 years ago

    Oh I love the suspense of this Sally – lovely visual images – so perfect. And what a romantic imagination you have! Great collaboration!

  • jansnow
    jansnowover 6 years ago

    WOW, this made me excited for him! You are such a prolific and wonderful talent!!

  • Peter Evans
    Peter Evansover 6 years ago

    A very romantic, happy and vibrant work Sally :-)

  • Lori Peters
    Lori Petersover 6 years ago

    Beautiful work, Sally. It is very romantic. xx

  • SharonD
    SharonDover 6 years ago

    Beautiful writing again Sally. You sure are talented.

  • Gail Bridger
    Gail Bridgerover 6 years ago

    You are an amazing lady, Sally! I love your work of beautiful words.!!!!! :) Hugs!

  • Christopher Birtwistle-Smith
    Christopher Bi...over 6 years ago

    i hope she says yes! c xx

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