FINALLY THERE
Thank you Vulcan! Please check out Vulcan’s other awesome artwork on the RB
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Complex Simplicity of Art, Collaboral Damage, Live, Love, Dream: and WMGHe waited at the train station
A very long time
A little nervous
But he was looking fine
Under his arm
A bottle of Pinot Grigiot
And he knew exactly
Where he wanted to go
His pocket bulged a little
In it a diamond ring
His heart was dancing
He could hear his soul sing
Off to see the woman
Who was the love of his life
Finally he would ask her
To be his wife
The train finally came
Slowly on the track
He got on
Never looking back
The train stopped at all the stations
He was starting to sweat
It seemed like it was taking forever
He hadn’t gotten to his stop yet
He rehearsed what he would say
His lips slightly moving
He couldn’t stand still
People thought he was grooving
~Maybe she’ll say ‘no’
Prespiration
Maybe she’ll say ‘yes’
~Anticipation
The train pulled in the station
He knew she really cared
Now he could ask her
He was FINALLY THERE
Amber Elizabet...
My God sally can you ever WRITE WOW !!!!!! xxxxxx I love ya sis=D oooooo
hilarydougill
wonderfully well written sal so very visual, and great imagery by Vulcan, well done both of you. hugs and angel xxxxxx
lianne
Oh I love the suspense of this Sally – lovely visual images – so perfect. And what a romantic imagination you have! Great collaboration!
jansnow
WOW, this made me excited for him! You are such a prolific and wonderful talent!!
Peter Evans
A very romantic, happy and vibrant work Sally :-)
Lori Peters
Beautiful work, Sally. It is very romantic. xx
SharonD
Beautiful writing again Sally. You sure are talented.
Gail Bridger
You are an amazing lady, Sally! I love your work of beautiful words.!!!!! :) Hugs!
Christopher Bi...
i hope she says yes! c xx