HOLD MY HAND

Sally Omar
Author: Sally Omar
Word Count: 107
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HOLD MY HAND

Thank you Maggie….Please check out Maggieposh’s other awesome artwork on
the RB

HOLD MY HAND belongs to the following groups:

Complex Simplicity of Art, Collaboral Damage, Live, Love, Dream: and WMG

HOLD MY HAND
LET’S TAKE A WALK
WE CAN LOOK IN EACH OTHER EYES
WHILE WE TALK

IT IS TIME TO REMINISCE
AND REMEMBER OUR DREAMS AND MEMORIES
WE CAN BE HAPPY ONCE AGAIN
LIFE IS BEAUTIFUL AS YOU WILL SEE

WE’VE GONE OFF THE PATH
FORGOTTEN OUR PROMISES MADE
AND ARE NOW LIVING OUR LIVES
NOT IN THE LIGHT…BUT IN THE SHADE

IT IS TIME FOR THE SUN
TO FALL UPON US ONCE AGAIN
YOU ARE NOT ONLY MY LOVER
BUT MY BEST FRIEND

SO COME MY DEAR
AND LET US WALK THIS PATH
WHERE WE WILL REKINDLE
A LOVE THAT WILL LAST

  • Cindy RN

    Cindy RN

    Sally, this is wonderfully written, I like this very much :)

  • Maggieposh

    Maggieposh

    Oh Sally Thank-you so much..Another perfect poem to go with My work..This is of course a Fav….Love Now & Alway’s Maggie Posh xxxxxxxx

  • lianne

    lianne

    It would be so nice if it were that easy Sally – but this is a lovely thought and a beautiful reminder that love deserves the effort at least! Great job, my friend!

  • Dawnsky2

    Dawnsky2

    oh thats so lovely Sally,,i can imagine two older people walking hand in hand :)

  • Max Gatrell

    Max Gatrell

    Lovely writing Sally,
    as always your words gently
    radiate from the page like
    the first rays of spring ;)

    M

  • KEITH  R. WILLIAMS

    KEITH R. WILL...

    beautiful sally

  • saleire

    saleire

    Just sooooo beautiful….well done Sal xx

  • SharonD

    SharonD

    Lovely words Sally.

  • Christopher Birtwistle-Smith

    Christopher Bi...

    i can really appreciate your stream of thoughts here, its so easy to live in the shade, i want time in the sun -with a respectable amount of sunblock of course! ;))

  • jansnow

    jansnow

    Absolutely stunning, both words and photo.

  • frealin

    frealin

    It’s like you’re in my head and know what i’ve been living through. I simply cant believe how you describe it perfectly … so well written…so very well written..thank you.

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