I Love You!!!

Sally Omar
Author: Sally Omar
Word Count: 43
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I Love You!!!

I Love You!!! belongs to the following groups:

Purple Passion Gallery. 2 per day and WMG

Caught your fire
Caught your rain
Caught your sun
Caught your pain

Took your love
Took your tears
Took your smiles
Took your fears

Touched your soul
Touched your eyes while weeping
Touched your lips
Touched your heart while sleeping

I Love You!!!

  • Max Gatrell

    Max Gatrell

    Lovely Sally, one thing though, I hope you don’t mind me pointing it out, but I thought i’d bring it to your attention. Is “Caught you sun” supposed to be Caught your sun? if i’m wrong then i’m really sorry ;)

    M

  • Sally Omar replied

    Max, Thank you so much..so glad you enjoyed it…and thank you so
    much for catching the typo…I really appreciate it…Sally xxoo

  • Max Gatrell

    Max Gatrell

    No Worry’s Sally, perhaps you can return the favour, if I do the same thing.
    Now your piece is perfect ;)

    M

  • Sally Omar replied

    Max, I certainly will..Thanks again…Sally xxoo

  • Earl McCall

    Earl McCall

    Very nice, love the change in flow!

  • Sally Omar replied

    Earl, Thank you so much…every once in a while..I like to try
    something a little different..I loved writing this…Sally xxoo

  • Silvia Manuela

    Silvia Manuela

    Captures the fervence and depth of love!

  • Sally Omar replied

    Silvia, Thank you so much…I am so happy you liked it…Sally xxoo

  • webbie

    webbie

    Beautiful Sally, be great on a card :)

  • Sally Omar replied

    Webbie, Thank you so much..loved writing in a different fashion..
    Sally xxoo

  • AmyX

    AmyX

    Again Sal, lovely work…as always!!

    amyx

  • Sally Omar replied

    Amy, Thank you so much..you are so kind..so happy you enjoyed it..
    Sally xxoo

  • mlgkats

    mlgkats

    beautifully said and really well written

  • Sally Omar replied

    Mel, Thank you so much..so happy you enjoyed the poem..
    loved writing in a little different style…Sally xxoo

  • Dawnsky2

    Dawnsky2

    thats so lovely Sally…xx

  • Sally Omar replied

    Laura, Thank you so much..tried something a little different..so
    happy you liked it…Sally xxoo

  • SharonD

    SharonD

    This is so beautiful Sally.

  • Sally Omar replied

    Sharon, Thank you so much..a little bit of a different style..glad you
    liked it…Sally xxoo

  • Gregory John O'Flaherty

    Gregory John O...

    Thanks Sally. love you too

  • Sally Omar replied

    Greg, Thank you so much..of course I love you…so glad you liked
    it…Sally xxoo

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